new shayari @ pg 76- by me - Page 7

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Wow. this is marvellous .. 👏Totally sums up BBs feelings perfectly..

Thankoo Sherni...Ab mujhe Likhne ke keede ne kaat liya...Khub likhne wali hoon main..But am happy...

Awesome poetry teddy ji...keya baat hain...bade khush lag rahi ho aaj 😉

rabz dear take a bow awesomeee👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

@ deba: for this shayari BB means Bade Baba...

Originally posted by: debaparna77

Awesome poetry teddy ji...keya baat hain...bade khush lag rahi ho aaj 😉

btw, BB's pov means bhavita na!!

arre Tigress...BB means Bade Baba..Ashu's Baba...poetry thik se padh..Bhavita ke bete beti kab huye..bhavita Maar Debu ko...😆

Originally posted by: niniborn2rule

rabz dear take a bow awesomeee👏

OMG Nini..Thanks...😳...😳

Originally posted by: rabzonedge

arre Tigress...BB means Bade Baba..Ashu's Baba...poetry thik se padh..Bhavita ke bete beti kab huye..bhavita Maar Debu ko...😆

Originally posted by: rabzonedge

Ohh GODD Sujhatha..its too good ...no grammatical mistake..plzz continue writing in hindi...I will be your hindi teacher..plzz be my english teacher...😆...just kidding...i am always there yaar...

Thank you Divya..like I said this is not my native tongue...but it is such a beautiful language that...mujh jaise unpad ( Hindi illiterate) ko bhi shayri likhne par majboor kardiya...and of course your lnes and Bhavitha's too are such an inspiration!


Btw, your BB pov poem was beautiful...what a life he has lived...so much to look back on and now, so much to look forward to...relationships lost and gained...emotions old and new...truly worth writing about...and you have phrased his thoughts so beautifully!

Originally posted by: debaparna77

😛 ohh so sorry...i thought BB means busybee 😆

Ruk Tere naam se ek poetry likh ke chipkati hoon abhi...😆

Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao

Thank you Divya..like I said this is not my native tongue...but it is such a beautiful language that...mujh jaise unpad ( Hindi illiterate) ko bhi shayri likhne par majboor kardiya...and of course your lnes and Bhavitha's too are such an inspiration!


Btw, your BB pov poem was beautiful...what a life he has lived...so much to look back on and now, so much to look forward to...relationships lost and gained...emotions old and new...truly worth writing about...and you have phrased his thoughts so beautifully!

Thanks again Sujhatha..Plzz continue writing in Hindi...Its B'ful Language and so is Urdu...Words are so lyrical...you start loving language...like Tabassum means smile...Shabnam is dew drop...

yup BB's life has been roller coaster..to sum up his present and past was nice...Yet his guilt will keep haunting him and he will not be able to express..how lonely was he??..