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Entry #1

Ashni - Pyaar Ki Ek Kahani

It was raining heavily since afternoon, and Nidhi was trying to finish all the pending work as soon as possible so she did not have to miss her bus and stand in the rain for the next one. After all, it wasn't easy for her to manage the one hour travel from the office to her home in this weather, other than the bus. Being new in the city she did not know many alternative travel options either. She sent one last mail and was glad to shut down the system and head out. Gosh, it was 630 already. The bus leaves at 645, she had to rush. She gathered her bag, cleared off her desk quickly and dashed out. After leaving the office she remembered, she forgot her umbrella behind. Darn it, if she goes back to get it, will miss the bus. Better try to dodge the rain and try to make it to the bus instead. She held her bag on top of her head and tried to take long strides, the bag wasn't shielding much of her and by the time she reached the bus stop, she was half wet. Oh gosh, of all days, she had to wear this peach colored fine georgette suit today, which wasn't helping her from the rain at all. There were just a couple of people at the bus stop, compared to the crowd everyday. Maybe they decided to take the earlier bus. She waited for sometime, still no sign of the bus. Then one middle aged lady who was at the stop asked her, "are you waiting for the crossroads bus?", Nidhi nodded. "Well, that bus changed its route today as due to rains, the stop before crossroads is flooded. Nidhi was alarmed to hear that, "So what do I do now?, how can I go home?", "Maybe you can take a taxi, some of them are running, otherwise.." Her bus came and she had to hurry. "call the HR at your office, they might help", said she before dashing away. Nidhi did not know many people in her office being new. Only a director Ashutosh Mathur, whom she knew thru a family member when she joined this office but he was quite senior to ask for help, and besides what director has time to help a junior trainee officer.

It started getting dark. She couldn't see any taxi yet. Panic was starting to get her. She did not have anyone in this town to worry for her at home, as she lived in a hostel, but still she wanted to go back to the hostel and be dry and safe. A car's honk jolted her from her thoughts. "Ms Nidhi, please get in, you're soaking wet". To her surprise she saw Mr. Ashutosh Mathur. She didn't know what to do or say. He opened the door for her " Come on get in quick, the rain isn't slowing down", and she got in without thinking much. It felt good to be in the warm car, she did not realise she had got this wet, she felt a little conscious knowing that her dress was clinging to her body. " Where do you live Nidhi?" " At Anne's girls hostel , crossroads, sir". She told him how the bus changed its route , there was flooding and so she got stranded. " Well, hopefully we will find a way".

Soft music was playing in the car and the rains now seemed very soothing and beautiful, as she was protected from it.

Mr. Mathur was respected in their office for his impeccable track record, and successful career. However he was quite an introvert, not many knew about his personal life, so he had few friends. Nidhi's uncle knew Ashutosh from his college days, and when she got an offer from this company, he had contacted Ashutosh to just let him know that his niece is working there. Apart from that, they did not have much interaction. He had just asked if she needed any help, but fortunately she never had to ask for help except now and their work also did not put them together, so she had never got a chance to observe Ashutosh. She could see, he was very handsome with fine features, and a muscular lean body, and had an air of sophistication in him, which explains why he was respected. Ashutosh caught her glancing at him and asked, "So how do you like your job, everything fine?", She nodded sheepishly. After driving for a while, there were cones blocking the way, and some policemen who came to the car and said, there was flooding ahead, so the road was blocked. They would have to divert from there. "Now what?", Nidhi asked with a scared look. "Don't worry, we'll try this route", and he turned the car left. This road seemed better but crossroads was still far. The rain seemed to be unrelenting. Suddenly, the car made a noise and stopped. "Oh no, what happened?" Now Ashutosh also looked worried and took his umbrella and went out trying to look under the hood to make sense of what happened. But he was helpless, didn't know a thing about cars. He called his mechanic, and he said due to the rains, it will take him time to reach there. " Sorry Nidhi, due to rains, the mechanic will take some time, we have no other choice than waiting". Nidhi looked lost, but tried to be brave. "Here, have my jacket", said Ashutosh as he noticed Nidhi was shivering from being wet for long.. " Without any choice, she took it, as she really was cold. "The monsoons seem so beautiful from inside our office, house, but when we are facing it on the road, the whole romance is taken out of it, isn't it?", Nidhi was surprised to hear about romance from Ashutosh, but he was trying to calm her down she guessed as did get a little nervous. "Sir, you look good when you smile and are in a light mood", she said innocently. "Really? " his eyes brightened up. Nidhi's hair was wet and entangled, she was trying to straighten it with her fingers, and noticed Ashutosh looking at her. There was something in his eyes which she couldn't comprehend. She had never thought he would have noticed him much at work as he was always busy and her cube was at the far end from his cabin. "Sir, your wife must be waiting for you, isnt it?" Ashutosh's facial expressions changed and he said "I have no one waiting for me Nidhi, I am all alone, just a caretaker at home, whom I call Kaka, he is all the family I have". "Oh", said Nidhi. That explained why he seemed reserved and quiet at work. " Do you miss your family here Nidhi?", "Yes sir, a lot, I am waiting for my leave so I can go visit them, am not used to being away from them so long." "It must be so nice to have a family, isnt it? To go back to people you love", Ashutosh said with a faraway look in his eyes, and Nidhi felt a strange desire to get to know him more, to befriend him, which never occured to her earlier as he was such a loner." Sir, family isn't only blood, when you make friends, get close to them,they can be family too".Ashutosh looked at her intently, wanting to believe everything she said. Feeling his gaze on her, she became conscious and looked out. "I have my close friend Anji, and we have been together since nursery, she is like a sister to me, and our families are like one". "Not everyone is as lucky Nidhi", said Ashutosh, with moist eyes. Nidhi was taken aback. Was he crying? She had made him

sad. Maybe touched some painful nerve. "I am sorry sir, I didn't mean to hurt you", She didn't realise when her hands reached to wipe Ashutosh's tears. As soon as she realised she pulled her hands back. There was a silent moment between them, as both looked outside. Rains had slowed down.

Ashutosh noticed Nidhi's hair had dried a little and some were blowing away at her forehead, making her look prettier than usual. She was so beautiful even in this unruly,tired state. When he had first seen Nidhi when she came to his office, she came as a breath of fresh air, so different than many other young girls. He didn't know what it was, but he always longed to see her, even though she was far away from his cabin. He did not know what allure she had for him, when he was aware that she was much younger to him, he did not like

to think much about this, he just felt happy to see her, though he made sure he never let her know of his feelings. And today here she was, sitting next to him, and he was opening up to her.

"Sir, your jacket, I think I am fine now.", her words brought him back to reality. He looked out of the window, the rain had almost stopped. He felt the rains stopped earlier than expected.

"Nidhi, the rains are almost over", he looked a little reluctant. "Yes sir, I didn't realise how time flew away", she looked at him with a new look, as if found a new meaning. Both looked at each other's eyes and were lost for a minute, when there was a knock on the window. The mechanic was here. Both Ashutosh and Nidhi got out of the car. As they walked to the front of the car, their hands brushed and Nidhi's bracelet got entangled in Ashutosh's wristwatch. She tried to get it out, but couldn't. Ashutosh saw her struggling, and held her wrist gently, and removed his watch from the bracelet hook. "Thanks sir", said Nidhi, "You can call me Ashutosh" he smiled. Nidhi looked at him questioningly.

He nodded at her with a meaningful smile, and she blushed, lowering her eyes.

The beginning of a love story.

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Entry #2

AshNi ke - Pyaar ki ye ek kahani
Love Bites

It was the grand opening of the 12^th branch of the restaurant

Mathur Munchies. Mathur Perfecto

had worked hard to build this chain of restaurants. He had come a long way from his small home-run catering business to becoming a renowned hotelier.

Mathur recounted his early days, to the gathering, comprising of famous industrialists, professionals to the struggling working class. He recalled the first time, his friend Hiraman, gave him the idea to send healthy packed lunches to offices, as his food was a big hit with many. So Mathur began creating innovative dishes.

The first dish he created was Ash-li-Aloo which was a simple, but healthy dish made of mildly spiced baked potatoes. Mathur loved this creation Ash-li-Aloo, because he found it suited all palates and was so simple but genuinely tasty, which made it an instant hit. The next dish Mathur added to his menu was Mixed Masala Mallu, which was very tasty and attractive to look at, it was made with a variety of vegetables except Aloo.

Mathur added many more dishes to his menu but Ash-li-Aloo was his favourite. Now he had opened many restaurants and he was a name to reckon, in the catering world. Ash-li-Aloo never failed to get the best dish award and retained its original flavour all along.

Mixed Masala Mallu, had only one dream that is to bring Ash-li's Aloo into her dish so that she could become the most popular dish and win awards.

Mathur once contemplated adding potatoes, to Mixed Masala Mallu, but refrained from doing so as he felt it would ruin Ash-li-Aloo's originality. Mixed Masala Mallu, always came second in all the competitions and this angered her.

Ash-li-Aloo was genuinely fond of Mixed Masala Mallu and shared many a tip with her to win competitions.

Mathur unveiled his signature dish Ash-li-Aloo proudly to the gathering and people flocked to compliment him on retaining his classic touch for 12 years.

Mixed Masala Mallu looked on with jealousy and thought, 12 years is enough of waiting, I will make sure Ash-li-Aloo is part of my dish so that I win all the accolades.

The 12^th branch happened to be near many colleges and offices so a lot of young crowd started visiting Mathur Munchies. Much as the young crowd loved Mathur's food they looked for something trendy and peppy.

Even here Ash-li-Aloo was a much-sought after dish but there were not too many takers for Mixed Masala Mallu. This angered her more and she started plotting her way to win over Ash-li-Aloo.

Mathur realised the need of the youngsters and created a tangy but healthy dish called Nid-hi-Nuggets, which was made of mashed palak, paneer and corn. This dish was an instant hit with all, including older people. Mathur added another dish now called Ro Han Roti, which was, a stuffed roti made with multigrain.

Ash-li-Aloo liked Nid-hi Nuggets pep and zest and spent a lot of time with her as she was so entertaining. Ro Han Roti too became a good friend of Nid-hi Nuggets and they shared many a light moment together. This angered Mixed-masala-Mallu and she burnt more in her masala and many people started complaining that the dish tasted weird and not like before.

Mathur could not understand what was wrong as he had not changed anything. He spoke to Hiraman who told him that they could not afford any negative publicity as they were entering a worldwide competition to promote Indian cuisine which is not only healthy but tasty and trendy too. There was tough competition from the kitchen of Sue Snacks, who was a cunning entrepreneur, who used sub-standard products sold at cheaper rates.

Meanwhile, Ash-li-Alu who did not like to see Mathur so unhappy spoke to Nid-hi-Nuggets and wondered what to do. Nid-hi Nuggets too spoke to Ro Han Roti and he was lazy and did not like to exert himself. He said he would try to help.

Mixed Masala Mallu saw her opportunity and went to Ro Han Roti and told him that maybe Nid-hi-Nuggets and he can form a perfect wrap to appeal to the young crowd. Ro Han Roti thought it was a good idea and went to share it with Nid-hi-Nuggets.

By that time Nid-hi-Nuggets and Ash-li-Aloo had realized they wanted to come together to create the best dish for Mathur, whom they adored. They decided on a plan and to meet at 12 midnight.

Mixed Masala Mallu went to Ash-li-Aloo and told him that Nid-hi-Nuggets and Ro Han Roti are combining themselves together to form a wrap. Ash-li-Aloo looked convinced for a minute but remembered Nid-hi-Nuggets crisp yes, when he asked her to be part of his dish and knew Mixed Masala Mallu was cooking up a story.

Mixed Masala Mallu told Ash-li-Aloo, you can become part of my dish and we will be the tastiest. You are the only missing vegetable in my dish. I have waited for 12 years for you to agree, I want the best dish award this time and I'll do anything to get it. This is the only way we can save the award going to Sue Snacks. You'd better agree as Mathur is your creator or I'll defame him.

I'll be waiting for you in the kitchen in the morning. Saying so, she stormed off. Ash-li-Aloo looked at Mixed Masala Mallu and thought, my what a fiery temper she has. This is what has ruined the name Mathur had built over so many years. I have to restore it. His thoughts went to the crisp but soft and melting Nid-hi Nuggets and he had a tender look.

RoHan Roti also learnt that Nid-hi-Nuggets and Ash-li-Aloo were an item

and backed off by offering to help them. Nid-hi-Nuggets and Ash-li-Aloo met at 12 that night and became one. Mathur came in to start preparations for his signature dish when he saw that Nid-hi-Nuggets batter had blended with Ash-li-Aloo in the bake. He was startled for a minute, looking at this new dish and then tasted it and called out excitedly to Hiraman. Hiraman came running and found Mathur making him taste a unique dish. He jumped up and said it's different but it will steal many a heart. They decided to call it AshNi Aloo Nuggets.

The judges came the next morning tried all the dishes and found AshNi Aloo Nuggets the best dish which combined the evergreen potato with the peppy paneer and gave people their daily dose of energy and nutrition. They declared this to be the most unique combo and gave it a lifetime award which would remain eternally with Mathur.

Mixed Masala Mallu tasted even more vile as she was seething, that Mathur had to throw her into the trash can and fumigate his kitchen of any remnants.

If you hear barah saal, barah saal, be sure it is the rotting Mixed Masala Mallu, from the trash can.

Ro Han Roti makes a perfect accompaniment for AshNi Aloo Nuggets.

Sue's Snacks closed down and last heard was running an all-woman's bar in Australia.

Ash Ni Aloo Nuggets is the most sought after dish

by young and old lovers of food, who dare to be different.

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Entry #3

Mallu Ki Bidaai
Past

Once upon a time,there was a kingdom called KGH ,which was ruled by a king who was known as Dr Heart stone .The only person who loved the king was a witch.But the king never reciprocated her feelings.

Come 2010 ,and a pretty titli which used to spread happiness wherever she went ,entered the king's kingdom .The king tried to shut himself from the titli's warmth but ultimately gave in.Titli and king decided to get married.The witch could not see this and vanished from the city. As soon as titli kissed the raja ,a magic happened..titli turned into a beautiful woman called Nidhi and the raja became a man called Ashu(he was as handsome as could be!).While Nidhi and Ashu decided to live happily ever after ..the witch transformed herself into Mallika and came back to take revenge from nidhi and Ashu.. would she succeed?

Present.

Mallika meets Ashu and pretends that she has been threatened by a vampire who turned into a man called Jagan.He tortured her a lot because of which there is a chemical locha in her brain'she asks him to help her to treat the chemical locha and Ashu agrees'he lets in his home ,much to the dismay of Nidhi who cant tolerate her..Mallu starts clinging on to Ashu and this makes nidhi extremely uncomfortable.She plans to prove that there is no chemical locha..and to prove this she calls on to the world famous psychiatrist Santa..

Ashu doesn't want Santa to interrogate Mallu ..but under the gaze of Nidhi,relents.Santa tries to hypnotize Mallu in a empty room but Mallu hypnotizes Santa instead and makes him to tell everyone the story she wants them to believe..

Ashu is furious at nidhi but Nidhi doesn't accept that she is wrong.

She then approaches CID .ACP Pradumancalls Abhijeet ,Daya and Dr Salunke to investigate the case .The team decides to find Jagan .They go to US and locate the apartment where Jagan was supposedly living .ACP knocks the door.No ans.ACP asks daya,darwaza tod do ..Daya todo darwaza and finds a room which is very neat .. except for the fact that there is a dead body ..right in the centre of the room'Jagan's dead body ! Abhijeet -yeh khoon badi hi planning ke saath kiya gaya hai' ACP'hmm..

Dr Salunke : Khuni jarur aurat hogi ...

ACP : kyun ??

Dr. Salunke: Kyunki Laash ke gale pe nail paint ke nishaan mile hai .

Abhijeet-Lekin sir ,is khoon ka maksad kya ho sakta hai?

ACP : "Vahi to Abhijeet...samajh nahi aa raha hai ki is khoon ke piche khooni ka maksad kya tha."

ACP: dhundo dhundo ...sare jagah ko achhi tarah se check karo...koi na koi sabut milega hi...criminal kitana bhi chalak ho lekin ek to galati karata hi hai.

Abhijeet: aur uska hi hum fayda lete hein.

ACP and team are unable to find any more surag as there is a daraar in CID

She decides not to take help of CID anymore and leaves.After reaching home ,she comes to know that some one kidnapped Mallu..

Nidhi wonders why.. she has been told that while she was out , a dakoo called Gabbar Singh came to her home.. all the way from Chambal and uthao Mallu and took off.. While he was carrying her off,all the while she was shouting Ashutosh ,Ashutosh..

Nidhi is angry and then goes off to seek her distant uncle's help.

Her distant uncle ,Chacha Chaudhary, tells her not to worry and sets off to Chambal with his loyal friend Sabu,his wife Bini Chachi and Rocket to try to find Mallu.

On the way ,they meet Raka who has been hired by Gabbar Singh. Raka tries to harm Chacha Chaudhary by hurling a huge rock at him .Binni chichi maaro her belan on Raka and Rocket bites Raka on his feet.Raka lays wounded and they flee.

@ Chambal.

Mallu keeps on shouting Ashutosh ,Ashutosh .. this gives Gabbar Singh headache.. he puts sellotape on her mouth but still she is restless and tries to fight him'he points a gun at her .. she starts dancing on the song.. haan jab tak hai jaan ..jaane jahan main nachungi !

The song is about to finish when Chacha Chaudhary and co. arrive there .They meet Gabbar singh's goons and Sabu throws them all in the Chambal river.. They free Mallu and take her back to Lucknow.

Back at Lucknow..

Now,Anji suggests Nidhi to take the help of a certain good fellow who is on a adventure trip.This fellow has traveled all the way from Spain and is looking for challenges.Nidhi decides to approach the good fellow called Don Quixote and requests him to find out Sandeep Bagchi .

Don Quixote ,the ever so helpful adventure seeker ,immediately agrees.

Nidhi tells him that after selling the house ,he might have relocated to a small village near Lucknow..a village called Barabanki.Don mounts on his faithful steed Rozinante,while Sancho throws himself on Dapple and proceed to find Bagchi.Don whispers "lead the way ,my dear Sancho".By the time they reach Barabanki ,its nightfall and they decide to rest on a roadside inn.They check their steeds in the inn stable and enter the inn.While the Don is sleeping,Sancho enquires about Bagchi and the innkeeper ,tells him that a gentleman answering the description recently bought a house in the village.Next day,while leaving the inn,Don thanks the innkeeper and tells him "Oh noble sir,I will forever be grateful to you for letting me stay in your nice inn for the night." Innkeeper thanks the Don in turn.He rouses up Rozinante and starts riding on him like the knight he is 'with Sancho following him.Once they reach Barabanki square,Don whispers hoarsely "show me the way to his palace ,my dear Sancho".Sancho says what palace do you mean my knight..I was told ,he lived in a small cottage.Sancho asks around and manages to locate the small cottage where Bagchi is hiding.

Don Quixote, fully armed, knocks the door and Bagchi opens the door .. a fierce battle ensues but the brave Don punches Bagchi,manages to tie him with a rope and brings him back to Lucknow.

Nidhi arranges Bagchi to be interrogated by the Rangnath's grandfather Vijay who was once known as the "The Angry Young Man"and his cousin Chulbul Pandey.Bagchi tells them everything they needed to know about the house and how Mallu got it.He also tells them that she did not mortgage her own house and all the papers were false.

Armed with all this information,Nidhi finally calls Rajnikanth to catch Mallu read handed.She requests Rajnikanth to come down to Lucknow ,but Rajnikanth,says no need.He simply yells Yenna Rascali sitting in his home in Chennai and Mallu starts shivering .

She confesses all her crimes in front of Nidhi .However ,she refuses to leave Ashu and tells her point blank that there is no way she gonna let go of him ..(Ashu and DB hear all this hiding in the broom cupboard and are shocked ).

Dadi bua has a solution.She gives Ashu a small box and tells them a little plan. Ashu is perplexed ,wondering if it will work,while Nidhi and DB smile.

Ashu goes to meet Mallu and tells her he will do everything she would like him to do if only she does him a favor' Mallu smiles and agrees .Ashu gives him the box DB gave him and tells her to open it.Mallu opens it while Ashu extends his arm towards her.In the box ,there is the most pretty and exquisite Rakhi .Mallu screams and screams..till she looses her voice..

Two days later..

Mallu has settled well in her mental Hospital.No chance of recovery, doctors tell Nidhi and Ashu ,she is going to live the rest of her life there.

Ashu takes nidhi to a movie and a long drive.After they come back,Ashu gifts her a dress box and asks her to change.Nidhi opens the box to find a red and black knee length dress..with buttons on the back.Nidhi smiles and goes to change.When she comes back,Ashu leads her to backyard where she finds the same setting which she arranged for Ashu some days back ..complete with a table having bottle of champagne in ice and two glasses.He gives her a bouquet of red rosesand asks her for a dance .While dancing to a soft number '.Ashu unbuttons her dress..Nidhi says you got this dress for me,let it be on me for sometime.Ashu whispers in her ear,I got this for you ,only to have the joy of taking it away from you! He carries Nidhi in his arms to their bedroom.Nidhi asks ..is that it? Ashu, as he bends down to kiss her on her neck ,replies softly ,this is just the beginning baby!

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Title: Apples are for Apples : AshNi love story

Its all started when Col.Yograj Verma ate that forbidden apple and married Ms. Nandini Mathur while serving his posting at Kanpur.

Soon they had this apple of their eye - Nidhi. Health freak Yograj'decided to give an apple a day to Nidhi..but later it resulted in keeping her 'daaktari' away.

Little did Nidhi know then, by loving the senior for his throaty voice through that adam's apple ...she is actually upsetting the apple cart of Dr. Mallika..

The sweeter the apple, the blacker the core. Scratch a lover and you find a foe!!!

warned Anji...

Millions saw the apple fall, but Newton was the one who asked why..only Newton has changed this world..Rohan encouraged...checking his apple iPad.

Nidhi, Pine apples are not apples

..learn the difference..objected Yograj.

Ripen Apples will fall down from the tree.

.Dadibua shrieked...

But Nidhi was adament..'even if I knew that tomorrow the world would go to pieces, I would still plant my apple tree ...my love..'

Ashutosh started his search for Golden apples to get Nidhi...his destiny...he was sad for not able to reach the branch of the tree...

"Anyone can count the seeds in an apple Yograj, but please understand that only God can count the number of apples in a seed..and that seed is Ashutosh..." undefined

BB supported..

Yograj could not bear any longer .. he said, I am not the father to shoot through an apple kept on my child's head and finally agreed...

Armaan and his mom blessed them giving their pearls of knowledge..

Good apple pies are a considerable part of our domestic happiness..

It was all the festival of apples and tomatoes at the AshNi's wedding...

Mallika raised her ugly head after she got cheated orages as apples and ..."Stay me with flagons, comfort me with apples: for I am sick (of love).".. Mallika pleaded...

We are born believing Mallika... A man bears friendships as a tree bears apples...replied Ashutosh ...

The ugly warm could not hold the apple together and Mallika had to go out of their way...

AshNi lived like a matured apple and its most prized blossom...happily ever after.

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Ashni ke Pyaar ki Ek Kahaani

Title-phir se pyaar..

'.Aur Main Aakhri patient dekh li thi'.Primary health centre se baahar nikli..15 min ki doori par mera quarter hai'.kuch der pehle toh safed mulayam badal faile huye the jaise ruyi ko kaat kaat ke aasmaan me kisi ne chit diya ho'Abhi kaise kale kale ho gaye hai'Barsaat shuru ho jayegi..Tez tez chalna chahiye'Lo Barsaat shuru bhi ho gayi''.neele.Dupatte ko sar par odh liyamaine''.

'..october ki Bemausam Barsaat yaad aa gayi..Aaj akeli hoon Tab Dr Aashutosh the'Khyaal ko jhatak diya Maine'..Bahut Ro chuki hoon ab Nahin''.

Ye chota sa kasba hai '.3-4 Gaon ke beech ek jharjhar haalat ka primary health centre hai'ilaaj ke liye minimum basic requirements bhi nahin the'.Daud bhaag kar ke kuchh equipments ka intzaam hua hai..Baba ke dost Dr Gupta uncle ne kafi sahayata ki'.smritiyon ke scattered badal zehan main umadte ghumadte rehte hain aur unse chah kar bhi mujhe nijaat nahi milti'.'

Ghar abhi taknahi aaya hai aur .Baarish aur tez ho gayi.hai.Thodi der ke liye kahin ruk jaati hoon'.Saamne se ek car aa rahi hai'.'Ye Kyaaa Areee' Main chilla uththi hoon..Caar thik mere paas aa kar Ruki'Meri aankhen Darr se bandh thi''Sorry Andheri Baarish mein Dikha nahi..aap waise sadak ke beech kyu chal rahi thi''.

Wahi Awaaz..Nahi ye sach nahi ho sakta'..Bhagwaan main seh nahi paaungi..Dil ki dhadkan mujhe sunaai de rahi thi'..Main aankh kholti hooon'Chehra uthathi hoon..

Dr Ashutosh'Baalon se paani jhatak rahe the'Ruk ke mujhe dekha unki Aankhen fati ki fati reh gayin..Hoth sil gaye'.

Maine khud ko samhala aur aage badhne lagi'."Dr Nidhi'Suniye '."..Main badhti rehti hoon'"Dr Nidhi Please'PHC Kidhar hai'.Mujhe Jana hai'.Itne Andheri Baarish mein Raasta samajh nahi paaunga..pehli baar aaya hooon'Aur koi dikh bhi nahi rahaa"..Wo ek saans mein sab bol gaye the'..Awaaz mein kitni yaachna thi'..

Main Mudti hoon Jaa kar unke car mein beth jaati hoon'.Dr ashutosh surpurised hain'"seedhe Drive kijiye"..Maun pasra hai Hamare Beech'aur.Ajnabiyon se hum agal bagal baithe huye hai'

Kuch Minute mein hum PHC pahuch gaye'.Brick ka ghar bina plaster ka..upar me tin ki chat thi'Health worker Car ko dekh kar daud kar aaye'Mid wife ne mujhe Dekha'Maine Bataya''Shehar ke Bade Doctor hai"'

Dr Aashutosh Andar gaye'Lantern jal rahe the..Pehli baar Roshni mein hamari ankhein takrayi'Blue shirt pehna tha unhone'wahi gehri nazar na jane'Kyaa dhund rahin hai mujhme'.

"pehli wali Nidhi"'"kyaa" mere man ki awaaz sun rahe hai kya??..."Dr Nidhi aap bahut shaant'".."Lakshmi Di..ye aaj raat yahi rahenge..inke rehne ka intzaam kar dijiye..Inhe bhigne ke baad Bahut jald Thand aur Khansi ho jaati hai..Khyaal rakhiyega..Main Jaati hoon"

Is baar main nahi ruki'Main Rona nahi chahti'..Baahar nikal kar..Muh mein Dupatta daal ke main fut fut ke Ro rahi hooon'.

PHC ke guest house ke Kamre mein Leta huaa hoon'Nidhi mil gayi'Uski wo jhalak..Mathe par Dupatta Darr se aakhein Bandh'Kaisa Salona chehra hai..Duniya mein koi Uske jaisa nahin hai'.Main use Pyaar karta hoon'Haan karta hoon..Main pyaar se Darr gayaa tha..Apne man ke chor se ladne ke Bajay..Maine use Jeetne Diya'Ek Masoom ke Jazbaat se khela..Uske Career se Khela..Main Dr Ashutosh jo usoolon aur Sachchai par jeeta hoon'Apne usool kaise tod Betha'Mera Zameer mujhe dhikaarta hai roz roz..Nidhi mujhe Maaf kar do'.

Maine tumhe Kahaan nahi khoja,,,,Tum tak Pahunchne ke har raaste bandh the'.Tumhare ghar wale..Anji sab mujhse nafrat karte hai'Mujhe shikayat nahi'.Aaj se 5 din pehle maine Dr Ranganath ko dekha'Anji se baat karte'Ruki hui Neeli Nadi phir se Behne lagi thi mere liye'.

Dr Ranga se Laakhon Minnatein ki'Unhone kaise bhi Anji se Tumhare bare mein jana aur'Main Yahaan hoon sirf tumhare liye'

Dusre Din subah'.Nidhi Chote Bachchon ko Story suna rahi thi..Sab khil khila ke Hans rahe the.."GOD I missed her so much"'Staffs mujhe dekh kar khade ho gaye the..Nidhi ne mujhe Dekha aur Story continue Rakha'."Dr Nidhi Mujhe yahaan Kitne cases registered Huye hai Batayie'Iss area ki population kitni hai..aur koi endemic diseases hai ki nahi??..Basic Sahuliyat to iss PHC ki nil hai..Immunization status kyaa hai'."..

Nidhi Saare Datas Le aayi aur Mujhe Samjhane Lagi.."I am Impressed Dr Nidhi..You are quite efficient and Dedicated Doctor'".."ohh That's why you Fired Me"'Pighla Sheesha mere Kaano me Beh gaya'Main sharmindaa ho gayaa'Par Mujhe Bolna tha'waqt kam tha'Aur Main use batana chahtha tha'.sachchai'

Her Lips were smiling..Not her eyes'Apne Saare Himmat ko Samet kar Bahut hi Dheere Awaaz mein Main keh Paaya."I Fired You because I love you..Main Darr gayaa tha"'.

Kyaa usne suna..Jo maine Kahaa'Maine khud Nahi sunaa'"Nidhi Main Darr'."'

Dr Ashutosh Mujhse Pyaar Karte hai'.Kyaa yeh sach hai'Mere andar Har aakrosh Apmaan Pighalne kyu Lagaa hai'.Main ek Kamzor Ladki hoon..Nahin Nahin..Unhone jo kiya uski Maafi nahi ho sakti..Mere saare Ansu..woh Jillat ka Ehsaas'Sabki Nighaon ke Teer main Bhool jaoon Nahin Kabhi Nahi'.Dr Ashutosh ki awaz Dheemi ho Rahi thi.."Nidhi main darr'."'."Lakshmi Di next patient ko bhejiye"..

Nidhi ne Mujhe Ignore Kar diya tha..Sahi bhi hai..Maine Jo uske saath kiya hai'

2 din Mein humne Minimum Facility ke beech bhi 6 Critical Surgery Kiye'.Saath Mein Villages Visit Kiye'Nidhi Kafi competent Doctor thi'..Kafi Hectic Days the..But Hum dono Satisfied the'

Raat mein'Room Mein Tha..Aur Nidhi Ki Awaaz Aayi."Dr Ashutosh Dr Ashutosh Darwaza Kholiye'There is Head injury Case"'.Main Hadbada kar Bahar AAya..Nidhi Lantern Le ke Khadi thi..We Both Rushed Outside'..

16 Saal ka Ladka tha'Epileptic tha..seizures aaye the.wo gir pada.Aur Head injury ho gaya usse...

Humne Vital Signs chek Kiya..It was stable..IV fluid Diya..Urinary Cathetherisation kiya..Bachche ko Monitor mein Rakha'Subah tak Bachche Ki haalat Behtar Thi'.

Do din Ka hectic schedule and Raat bhar jagne se Hum dono Behad Thake huye the'.

Lakshmi Hamare liye Chai Le aayi'Bachche Ki maa'Baar baar shukriya Adaa kar rahi thi..

Nidhi Pyaar se Bachche ke baal par Hath fer rahi thi..Aur main muskura rahaa tha'

.Lakshmi Ne Dekha Aur Kahaa.." Ek baat bolun Dr Saab aap Kya Dr Nidhi ko pehle se Jaante hai??"'

Nidhi Meri taraf Palat kar Dekhi umeed thi uski aankhon mein..kyaa uha poh ke baadal chant gaye the..Neela aasmaan saaf tha...mere liye???..Nidhi Tumhari Aankhen meri Rooh mein jhaank rahi hai...

Dr Rangnath ne Phone kiya tha.Mujhe.Unhone Bataya Ki Dr Ashutosh Mere liye Yahaan Aaye hain...Kitne Tadpe hai wo Mere liye...Saare Dukh Apmaan Vapour Ban kar udd gaye the...Pyaar ke liye Ye zindagi Kitni choti si hai..Galtiyaan Kisse nahi hoti??.Wo Darr gaye the..Main unhe nahi samjhungi toh kaun samjhega..Pyaar ki dhaaara beh rahi hai mere andar..Dr Ashutosh Aaj main Sach sunna chahti hoon..Hamara sach...Kyaa wo Meri Aankhein Padh paa rahein hai??

Lakshmi se Kaha"Haan Jaanta Hoon..Main Dr Nidhi se Pyaar Karta hoon..Ab Main nahi Darta.."..Maine Ye Nidhi ko Bataya Tha..Nidhi ne kaha "aur main inse Pyaar karti hoon"'Lakshmi Boli "achcha Nahi Darte..Matlab.."'Nidhi ne Bachche se Kaha "aaj se tumhara naam Sehenshah'"'Lakshmi Achambhe se humeh dekh rahi thi...

Mujhe Meri Pehle wali Nidhi waapis Mil gayi thi...Khilkhilati hui...'

Main soch raha hoon Nidhi ko Mujhse Phir se Pyaar ho gaya Hai??..Ya Soya Pyaar phir se jaag utha hai??...Pyaar Kabhi Khatm Nahi hota Sayad...

Edited by --Shivu-- - 13 years ago