FF - The Story Of 2 Love Birds..[ Part 13 upd 15th May - Page 36 ]

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Mehek25

@Mehek25

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#201

Hi sorry for late comment...Nice update...Felt really sorry for Ashu...But never mind we all know that happiness is just round the corner for our Dr Ashutosh...Mallika has already started her 'get married Ashu' jaap...When Ashu falls for Nidhi her reaction will be worth reading about...Gr8 work...keep it up...And Btw loved the following bit...

" Humhe unse koi sikayat nahi,
Shayad hamari kismat me chahat nahi,
Meri taqdeer ko likh kar to upar wala bhi mukar gaya,
Pucha to bola yeh meri likhawat nahi hai.. "

Ur Shayaris are simply superb and loved to see u using them in ur FF...Will be a good idea if u make Ashu keep a diary wherein he pours his heart out in the form of ur shayaris...If I am not mistaken, Dr Ahmer in DK used to do that...

Thanx for pm...have added u to buddy list...did u get it?

Quote

hellox

@hellox

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#202

@Mehek..well..first of thanks for the lovely comment..yup..ull love Mallu's reaction..and glad that u liked the shayari bit..and regarding Ashu keeping a diary..well i have already thought abt it..thanks..and i have recieved the buddy request..thank u..
Regards..

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

hellox

@hellox

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#203

@all..well..hello..hope i havent kept u all on too much of hold..well..sorry..but as u all know..facing health issues..so..gonna update Part 10 asap..will be late with Part 11 also due to health issues..but thank u all for the support and patience..
Regards..

Quote

niniborn2rule

@niniborn2rule

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: hellox
@all..well..hello..hope i havent kept u all on too much of hold..well..sorry..but as u all know..facing health issues..so..gonna update Part 10 asap..will be late with Part 11 also due to health issues..but thank u all for the support and patience..
Regards..

dont worry buddy...get well soon...😊

Quote

hellox

@hellox

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#205

Part 10

Ranga leaves to Ashu's cabin..

Ashu - ' Ranganath..main shyam ko jaldi niklunga..toh interns ke saath meeting ko prepone karke 3 baje rako.. '

Ranga - ' K sir..main interns ko inform kar dunga.. '

Ashu - ' Aur yeh file lelo..iski formalities fill karke Dr. Mallika ko de dena.. '

Ranga - ' K sir.. '

Ranga leaves..

Its 3 and Ashu is havin a meeting with the interns, Mallu and Ranga..he informs the interns that tommorrow they will have a practical as enough seminars have been done..he explains that a body will be available and they will need to work on it..

During the seminar, Ashu notices that Nidhi isnt much interested in the topic..

Ashu - ' Dr. Nidhi..lagta hai aapko sab kuch pata hai isliye aap kuch zyada interest nahi le rahi hai.. '

Nidhi - ' Nahi sir..aisi baat nahi hai.. '

Ashu - ' K then..kal ke practicals hum aapse shuru karenge..i hope ull not dissappoint us.. '

Nidhi is left shocked as she doesnt have much knowledge.. ( i have not much knowledge of MBBS and i have assumed that Nidhi doesnt have much knowledge for using a body as in practicals..forgive me for the mistake, if done.. )

Ashu leaves and reaches home..he finishes his important work and den goes to the cupboard..he sees a pair of earings and remembers that he has forgotten to return it to Nidhi..he decides to return it tommorrw after the her practicals..

Meanwhile Nidhi reaches home after her work at the hospital..she finishes her dinner and decides to surf regarding some information for the practicals..she spots Ashu's name in one of the articles of neuro surgery..she decides to surf more but falls asleep as she feels tired..

Its next day morning and Ashu gets ready and takes Nidhi's earings also with him..

On the other hand Nidhi wakes up in shock as she hasnt prepared for the practicals..she freshes up in span of time as she doesnt wanna be late this time..she leaves without breakfast and reaches the hospital in time..in a hurry to close the door of the car, she accidently closes the door with her fingers in between and cries in pain..just then she sees Ashu and wipes her tears and goes in..

In the practicals room, everyone is present and are waiting for Nidhi to start her presentation..

Nidhi goes near the body and removes the cloth..after seeing the body she jumps in shock and runs behind Ashu, as Ashu is standing right behind her..(she runs coz she is shocked to see a real body cut fully with intestines and small part of brain shown..i have assumed here that its the first time Nidhi is watchin a real cut body and in MBBS she has seen only dummys..hope im forgiven for the assumption made..)

Ashu is annoyed by this behaviour of Nidhi..

Ashu - ' Yeh kya hai Nidhi..what is this.. '

Nidhi - ' Sir..maine pehli baar body ko is tarah dekha hai..isliye gabra gayi.. '

Ashu - ' Toh..har kisi cheez ka pehli baar hota hai..aur kya tumne sikha nahi ke doctor operation aise hi toh karega.. '

Nidhi - ' Yes sir..pata hai..lekin achanak pehli baar aise dekha..toh control nahi hua.. '

Ashu - ' Tik hai..yeh lo scissors..iske dimag ko thoda cut karke yeh batao ke iska main bllod flow kahan se hota hain.. '

Nidhi takes the scissors but again finds it difficult and keeps the scissors aside..she accidently cuts her hand ( same hand which had come in between the door of the car ) but Ashu doesnt notice as she hides her hand behind her..

Ashu - ' Kya hua..kyun ruk gayi.. '

Nidhi - ' Sir..nahi ho pa rah hai.. '

Ashu blasts her some more and Nidhi has tears in her eyes..Ashu is stopped by Mallika..

Mallu - ' K interns..aap sab ja sakte hain..Dr. Ranganath aapko audotorium main le jayenge..waha aapka seminar hoga..k.. '

All the interns leave..

Mallu - ' Ashutosh..bas karo..bachi hai..aur koi bhi pehli baar body ko aisa dekhaga..woh aise hi react karega.. '

Ashu - ' Kya first time Mallika..agar itna hi darte hain toh doctor banne kyun chale aate hain.. '

Mallu - ' Lekin..ise toh dekho..tumne isse rula diya.. '

Now Ashu sees her face clearly and find the tears rolling down fro m her eyes.. '

Ashu - ' Mallika..par.. '

Mallu wipes her eyes when Nidhi also tries to do the same..and it is then when Mallu sees her hand..

Mallu - ' Yeh kya Nidhi..tumhare haath ko kya hua.. '

Nidhi - ' Kuch nahi..woh subah gaadi ka darwaza band karte hue mera haath darwaze ke beech main aagaya aur fir abhi scissors rakte waqt toda kat gaya.. '

Ashu - ' Wat..itna sab kuch ho gaya..aur tum abhi bata rahi ho.. '

Nidhi - ' Sorry sir.. '

Ashu - ' Mallika..run to the nurse and get me the kit..fast.. '

Mallu goes away and comes back with the kit..

Mallu - ' Ashutosh..isse tum handle karlo..mera patient ke family mera intezar kar rahe hai..ill have to leave.. '

Ashu - ' But Mallika.. '

Mallika leaves sayin this..

Ashu takes the kit and Ashu first looks at Nidhi's hand and then at Nidhi..he finds still tears in her eyes..he goes close..he dips the cotton in the the liquid medicine..

Ashu - ' Nidhi..bait jao.. '

Nidhi sits..

Nidhi - ' Sir..aap bhi bait jayiye na.. '

Ashu also takes his seat..he takes out the cotton..he is fumbling with his hand..he takes his hand near Nidhi's hand but withdraws..it happens more than thrice..Nidhi notices that Ashu is hesitant..so just when Ashu puts his hand forward, Nidhi also does the same and Ashni's hand meet each other..Ashu feels a shock in his body and stands..(dont ask why does ashu feel this shock and all as Ashu is a doctor and he must have held many women patients hand for the pulse..but here its Nidhi..and the reason of his feeling of shock and hesitant behaviour ull come to know in future parts..so be patient..)

Nidhi - ' Kya hua sir.. '

Ashu - ' Kuch nahi..tum baiti rahi ho.. '

Ashu takes his seat..he takes Nidhi's hand and wipes her hand with the dipped cotton..he blows air on her hand and again wipes her hand..while wiping..

Ashu - ' Im sorry Nidhi..mujhe tumpe itna gussa nahi karna chahiye tha.. '

Nidhi - ' No sir..aapki galti nahi hai..galti meri thi..mujhe hi pata hona chahiye tha ki body asli hogi aur dummy nahi.. '

Ashu - ' Tumhe bura laga na..main chilaya isliye.. '

Nidhi - ' Nahi sir..nahi laga.. '

Ashu - ' Kyun jhoot bol rahi ho..tumhare aansu sach keh rahe hain.. '

Nidhi - ' Woh aise hi sir..jab dil ko duk pahunchta hai tab apne aap aansu chalakte hain..yeh hamare dil aur aansu ka conection kuch aisa hi hai..kya kare.. '

Ashu - ' Woh toh sahi hai..jab dil udas hota hai toh aansu apne aap chale aate hain.. '

Ashu remembers his past and is controlling his tears to roll down but Nidhi tries to notice this in his eyes..

Nidhi - ' Kya hua sir.. '

Ashu - ' Kuch nahi..bas yeh patti karna baki reh gaya hai..isse gaav bar jayega.. '

Nidhi - ' Sir..lekin aapke kuch gaav bare nahi hai..aisa lag raha hain.. '

Ashu - ' Kisne kahan..im perfectly alright.. '

Nidhi - ' Sir..aapki aankhen sach bol rahi hai..kya hua..duk baantne se kam hota hai.. '

Ashu - ' Dr. Nidhi..aapki patti ho gayi hai..u may leave.. '

Ashu turns away from Nidhi and due to this Nidhi leaves..

Mallika has been watchin all this from standing outside..

Edited by hellox - 13 years ago

Quote

-rhythm-

@-rhythm-

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#206

Very good.looking forward to more Ashu-Nidhi conversations,please update soon thanks

Quote

Pooja

@Pooja_0910

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#207

My good wishes with u ...hope u will recover soon...
Thanx for sweet update...AshNi conversation was good...waiting for more AshNi scenes...

Quote

hellox

@hellox

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: rrdus
Very good.looking forward to more Ashu-Nidhi conversations,please update soon thanks

Thanks a lot..
Regards..

Edited by hellox - 13 years ago

Quote

hellox

@hellox

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: Poojapange
My good wishes with u ...hope u will recover soon...
Thanx for sweet update...AshNi conversation was good...waiting for more AshNi scenes...

Thnx a lot..ull love the future Ashni scenes..
Regards..

Quote

Sarika

@Blushsarika

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#210

Get well soon hellox,
it was a fantastic update,
you are very good in writing dialoges,like them.
When Ashu was doing her bandage it was very good,it was a cute saiyyan moment
waiting for more Ashni moments.
Here mallika is supporting them and she is aware of Ashu's feelings or I am mistaken ,please clarify.
Or she just now came to know about his feelings.
Waiting for the next one.
And thanks for the pm
my best wishes are with you .
Jaldi se fit aur fine ho jau

Quote

1 ... 19 20 21 22 23 ... 31

FF - The Story Of 2 Love Birds..[ Part 13 upd 15th May - Page 36 ] - Page 21

Related Topics

Explore Topics