FF - The Story Of 2 Love Birds..[ Part 13 upd 15th May - Page 36 ] - Page 23

Originally posted by: ayushi.luvsid

First of all Get Well soon DEar 🤗

And awwsome work as always!

Thanks for the great support..
Regards..

Hellox,

Thanks for the pm. Read all the parts in one go….and I didn't want it to stop…wanted more, more n more…

Very well written. The story seems so sweet and has a natural progression. Both Ashu and Nidhi are not realizing that they are getting closer by each passing day. Loved the hand holding part in the part 10. some mystery over there. Have they met before? I am loving all the sweet moments between them. Keep them coming.

@SwastikAshNi..Thanks a lot..well..i have kept Mallu's attitude a bit on the confusion side..but ull love it later..glad that ur liking it..
Regards..

Originally posted by: perfectsoul

Hellox,

Thanks for the pm. Read all the parts in one go….and I didn't want it to stop…wanted more, more n more…

Very well written. The story seems so sweet and has a natural progression. Both Ashu and Nidhi are not realizing that they are getting closer by each passing day. Loved the hand holding part in the part 10. some mystery over there. Have they met before? I am loving all the sweet moments between them. Keep them coming.

Hello..well..im glad that u have read my FF in one go and u have liked it..yes..i have kept a natural progression and wanted to show wat the our show couldnt..happy that u noticed that Ashni are gettin close day by day and ull love the later Parts..well..i think u got confused in the Part 10 where Ashni have a eye lock..they havent met before..well..Nidhi speaks about dard and dil..Ashu remembers his Baba and controlls his feelings..and Nidhi speaks this coz she remembers her Late. Mother..im gonna build on this part..have kept it for the later stage..
Thanks a lot for the lovely feedback..
Regards..

Hello frnds..well..good news and bad news..first of all i should be gratefull to each and everyone for their wishes and support in this crisis time im facing..now..the good news is that i have started to recover..and the bad news is that i will take a 2 month time to recover completely..dont worry..i wont be keeping u all on wait for 2 months coz i cant afford a 2 months break from my FF and u all..but in case i take short breaks of 4 to 5 days, which i will as health issues still prevail and i have only started to recover, plz do excuse me for that..and once again thanks a lot for everything..i have nothin to give but may god bless u all..Part 11 on its way..
Regards..

Part 11



Nidhi leaves from the room..

Meanwhile Mallu comes to Ashu..

Mallu - ' Kya hua Ashutosh..Nidhi kahan hai.. '

Ashu - ' Woh chali gayi..uski bandage kar di.. '

Mallu - ' K..Ashutosh..tumhe uspe itna gussa nahi karna chahiya tha..kitna ro rahi thi.. '

Ashu - ' Ab aur kya karu main Mallika..maine maafi toh maang li..ab aur kya karu.. '

Ashu leaves saying this leaving Mallu to have a smirk on her face..

Its evening..Nidhi comes home..she goes to her Baba..

Nidhi - ' Baba..aap Dr. Ashutosh ko kaise jaante hain..aapki dosti kaise hui.. '

Baba - ' 4 saal pehle mere dost ke pote ko brain surgery ki zarurat thi..uske paas itne paise nahi the ke woh surgery karwa sake..us bache ka sirf woh aur uyski daadi hi sahara the aur uske maa baap ek accident main guzar gaye..isliye uski daadi Dr. Ashutosh ke paas jake boli ki woh uske pote ka operation karde aur agar Ashutosh chahe toh woh uske ghar main zindagi bhar kaam karke uske fees chuka degi..Ashutosh ne bola ke woh operation karega aur apni fees bhi lega..usne agle din operation kiya aur bill banaya..pata hai kitne ka bill banaya.. '

Nidhi - ' Kitne ka '

Baba - ' Ek ladoo..bas itna hi..usne kaha ki woh uske maa saman hai aur woh apni maa se kaam nahi karwa sakta..usne ladoo isliye maanga tha kyunki unke pote ka operation successful tha.. '

Nidhi - ' Sirf ek ladoo..itna bada operation free main kiya.. '

Baba - ' Itna hi nahi..aaj Dr. Ashutosh aur Mallika mahine main 2 din gareeb hospital main jaake free consultation karte hain..aur zarurat pade toh free main operation bhi karte hain.. '

Nidhi - ' Kya!!itna sab.. '

Baba - ' Ha..jab mujhe yeh baat pata chali toh main Dr. Ashutosh se personally milne gaya..woh hakikat main bahut dilchaz insaan hai aur unki soch bhi kamal ki hai..fir hum ache dost hue aur fir maine decide kiya ki teri internship unhi ke under hogi.. '

Nidhi - ' Dr. Ashutosh ne apni fees ki parwah na karte hue operation kiya..Baba..aaj main bahut garv mehsus karti hun ke main Dr. Ashutosh ke under internship kar rahi hun.. '

Baba - ' Woh toh hai beti..garv toh mujhe bhi hai ki main Ashuotsh jaise insaan se mil paya.. '

Nidhi leaves thinking how lucky she is to be under Ashu..

Its 9 in the night when Ashu arrives home..he is changing when he notices a set of earings which belong to Nidhi in his pocket..he remembers that he has forgotton to return them due to the happenings in the hospital..he decides to give her a call but finally msgs her..

Ashu's msg - ' Hello Nidhi..how is ur hand doing.. '

Nidhi's reply - ' Hello Sir..my hand is doin fine..just a bit of swelling and pain is there..bleeding has stopped.. '

Ashu's msg - ' K..take a pain killer..and im sorry for venting my anger.. '

Nidhi's reply - ' Sir..u dont need to apologise again and again..it wasnt ur mistake..and indeed im very happy and lucky to be doing my internship under u..feel honoured..anyways..im gonna sleep..gud night.. '

Ashu doesnt reply to the msg as he doesnt wanna disturn her..he sees the earings in his hand and again forgets to inform that her earings are with him..he keeps them in the drawer and decides to return it tommorrow at any cost..

Its next day, Ashu arrives at the hospital and requests Nidhi to meet him right away..

Ashu - ' Baito Nidhi..tumhari bandage badalni hai na..aao.. '

Nidhi - ' Nahi sir..main karlungi..nahi toh nurse se keh dungi..woh kar degi.. '

Ashu - ' Kyun..main karu toh tumhe koi aitraaz hai kya..tum mujhe takleef nahi dena chahti ya mujhse bandage karwane main koi aitraaz hai.. '

Nidhi - ' Nahi sir..aisi koi baat nahi hai..aapse bandage karwane main mujhe kyun aitraaz ho sakta hai..balki mujhe toh aur khushi hogi.. '

Ashu - ' Tik hai..toh aao..baito.. '

Nidhi takes her seat..he takes his seat and pulls Nidhi close to him and takes her hand in his hand..he slowly starts removing the bandage he had done yesterday..the bandage gets stuck at one place due to the blood and Ashu pulls slowly and Nidhi shouts in pain..he slowly pours water on her hand and blows air..

Ashu - ' Acha..Col. Verma kahna hai..aaj kal milne ghar nahi aate.. '

Nidhi - ' Woh toh ghar par hi hai..aap bhi toh nahi aate sir.. '

Ashu - ' Main nahi aata..us din toh aaya tha.. '

Nidhi - ' Sir..aap kal udas kyun the.. '

Ashu looks at Nidhi for a second and informs her that her bandage has been removed..

Nidhi is shocked as she dint feel Ashu reomved the bandage inspite of the pain..

Nidhi - ' Sir..abhi toh itna dard ho raha tha..fir achanak bina mehus kiye aapne yeh bandage kaise utari.. '

Ashu - ' Tumhara hi tareeka apnaya..tumhara mind divert kiya aur bandage utar di.. '

Ashu cleans Nidhi's hand..he slowly rubs an ointment due to which she feels burning sensation and she catches Ashu's hand tightly with her other hand..Ashu is taken aback with this and he sees Nidhi's face..she has closed her eyes due to the burning sensation..Ashu stares at her face for a while..

Ashu - ' Nidhi..kya hua..zyada jalan ho rahi hai kya.. '

Nidhi - ' Nahi sir..utni nahi..ab tik hai..woh sirf 10 se 15 second tak ho rahi thi.. '

Ashu - ' Toh ab toh apni aankhen khol lo.. '

Nidhi slowly opens her eyes and finds Ashu smiling at her..

Nidhi - ' Kya hua sir..mujhe itni jalan ho rahi hai aur aap muskura rahen hai.. '

Ashu - ' Nahi Nidhi..aisi baat nahi hai..tumme aaj bhi chote bacho sa bachapana hai..jasie bache darte hain injection se aaj tum bhi waise hi dar gayi.. '

Nidhi - ' Lekin..isse aapka fayda ho gaya.. '

Ashu - ' Woh kaise.. '

Nidhi - ' Aapke chehre par muskaan laut aayi..sir..aap muskuraate hue ache lagte hain..muskuraate rahiye na.. '

Just then Ranga enters..

Ranga - ' Sir..in files par aapki sign ki zarurat hain.. '

Ashu - ' Idhar rakh do..main sign karke bhijwadunga.. '

Ranga leaves seeing Ndihi catching Ashu's hand..( Nidhi hasnt let Ashu's hand yet..)

Just then Ashu sees this and sees Nidhi and suddenly Nidhi removes her hand and excuses herself and starts leaving when Ashu calls her back..

Ashu - ' Nidhi..abhi nayi bandage karni baaki hai..aao..baito.. '

Nidhi takes her seat again..

Ashu takes the bandage and starts rolling on her hand..at one point of time he stretches it a bit which results in the bandage becoming a bit tight on Nidhi's hand..but Nidhi controls the pain and closes her eyes without uttering a word..Ashu watches her closed eyes and realises that the bandage has become tight and loosens it..

On one side he is doing the bandage and on the other hand he is continously staring at her face ( Nidhi's eyes are closed )..he notices her innocence..he notices that there is kid in her which tries to come out whenever possible..Ashu has finished doing the bandage but he is still rolling his hands..just then Mallika comes and watches Ashu..

Mallu - ' Ashutosh..bandage katam ho chuki hai..aur bandage chahiye kya.. '

Ashu doesnt concentrate on the fact that Mallika is present but he unknowingly answers..

Ashu - ' Nahi Mallika..zarurat nahi hai.. '

Mallu - ' Toh fir haath lapetna bandh karo.. '

Ashu - ' Kya..kaun..Mallika..tum..tum kab aayi.. '

Nidhi excuses herself and leaves..

Mallu - ' Main toh abhi aayi hun lekin lagta hain mujhe pehle aa jana chahiye tha.. '

Ashu - ' Kyun..kya hua.. '

Mallu - ' Yeh toh mujhe tumse puchna chahiye.. '

Ashu - ' Kyun..mujhse kyun.. '

Mallu - ' Kuch nahi..chodo.. '

Mallika ends it here and leaves leaving Ashu in thoughts..

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Awww... Ashu to gaya kaam se 😉 ... super update..! Very sweet.. AshNi bits... loved their convo..!

Thanks for the PM and glad to know ur recovering.. tk care n get well soon 🤗

Thanks for the feedback..im really happy that u liked this Part..and yes..Ashu kaam se gaya..hoping to build a magical love story here..and yup..started to recover..but would take a long time of 2 months to recover..no prob..thank u..
Regards..

Nice update, yes Ashu to gaya...waiting for how their love story follows.