FF Complete: Closing the Loop (Part 18-21 - Pg 64)

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Deepikikamandal

@Deepikikamandal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#501

Hey ,why did u end this so soon...but the plots of the story was deeply fulfilling...thank you...and all the set for life...

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RoDee

@RoDee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#502

Sharmishtha... yes..I have successfully completed a reading marathon. 😆
Story was really good. When Rohan came in to story, I washoping to read something about it.. For me story is still going on, only writer is on a break. Mish, take a break and reconsider your decision. Hopefully I will get some more parts...

Waiting for your other story, long FF would be sone pe suhaga,...

Thank you...

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Binat

@Binat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#503

Awesome😊

Slowly but surely falling in love with Ashu. What an amazingly mature man, and you even showed his insecurities. Also thought age would be the insecurity - like the change from norm.

Totally enjoyed my reading marathon and am getting ready to read my next FF??!! Hopefully you wont keep us waiting too long.

Also ordered Moving On. Waiting for the weekend to read it.

Thanks - and keep writing.

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#504

Excellent honey... 👏 I m seriously loving dis...n dis ashu...hmmm sum1 i wud luv 2 have as my better half...dis is fantastic...all d matters related to nandini made me cry 4 long...ur writings have a magical effect baby..just 2 gud...but dont b mistaken dat if m appreciating u means i have spared u...take a long break...cum back continuing dis...no matter how bored u got...i dont care even,atleast m not bored...i want u back continuing dis( even i wont mind if u start another ff too along wid continuing dis..but u hv 2)...so stop ur habi of getting bored..u r not going to leave dis ff...m totally crazy 4 the ff yaar...all d other ff come only once or twice a week..only ur ff is d 1 dat comes on daily basis...puhleeeseee dont do dat sweety...

Wid lovies n lots of hope of ur continuation...

Aazeen

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harsha6

@harsha6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#505

ohhh it was a luvly 4 chap xperience..thnks Mish di..
but pls continue yor FF..i can bear one chap in a week...but pls do continue...evry eveng i eager to read yor new chap...its differ frm othr FFs..pls continue..
u dnt knw...hw mch WE...I..depend on yor Chaps..pls its a humble request..
thnk ovr it..bcuz sumtimes boredom is bliss..

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AMBIKA2561979

@AMBIKA2561979

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Posted: 13 years ago

#506

All the parts from 18-20 were very emotional...especially Nidhi's mom's death... the way u have written them..touched my heart..i am at loss of words...👏👏

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Sarika

@Blushsarika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#507

I have enjoyed reading all the chapters of your FF- closing the loop, loved your FF -Sacrifices also

No doubt you are a terrific writer.
Can understand your situation.
Hope that we might get to read another FF or you will rethink of completing your FF.

Well all the four chapters were beautifully written. And it was not
at all boring,it was very interesting
very emotional update,I had tears in my eyes.
Introduction of Rohan was quite interesting.
Jealousy part would have been ...ohhh...
Sorry to say but a bit dissapointed.
Well.
Thanks for the update.

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sharmishtha02

@sharmishtha02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#508

Thank you sweeties for your lovely comments and patient reading. 😊

I will reply individually later. For now burdened with year end accounting. 😆

Will also try to return with another FF. But it will take some time. 😊

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Pooja

@Pooja_0910

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Posted: 13 years ago

#509

Hey sharmishtha...
All four part was beautiful...Mrs.Verma's death part was sad but thank god u avoided emotional scenes n show that nidhi recovered...
Ranga anji got marriage...good...
I dnt know what to say...i m big fan of ur ff...i have read all ur Ashni ff like Dhoop kinare(adaptation),Desire of imperfection, hurdles n hestitation,sacrifices...so plz dnt stop n keep writing Ashni ff...
Waiting for countinue part or ur new ff

Edited by Poojapange - 13 years ago

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Dilli6

@Dilli6

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#510

"Because this new relationship, of being equal partners, now supersedes any relationship we have had till now. Anything that made us unequal, teacher-student, boss-subordinate, mentor-mentee, they don't matter any longer. This relationship is what matters."

"It doesn't matter how strong the love is, one cannot forget that there are two different people in a relationship. Both have their own personalities, own values and own backgrounds. There will be some conflicts, some compromises and some adjustments to be made. I am confident that you will be able to handle most of the things very well. I already see you doing that."

Fantastic narration and writing... Above two para sums it all. So much respect, love and undestanding for an age gap romance. Please keep writing what we were deprived from the serial we get to feel it through your FF.

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