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achiever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#631

Originally posted by: ssktlk
wow, what a romance in the rain, and the twist was really surprising. So Nidhi knew all this while? I hope Ashu ia able to digest it. It'll be very hard to wait 2 weeks for your next update. Have a nice trip.

yup Nidhi knew all the while.. bt it will b revealed gradually how wat and wen she knew abt baba and this house... Will Ashu b able to digest.. well.. tht only Ashu can tell.. pyaar aur nafraat ki jung mein.. i m not going to send him to do any visarjan tho!😆

will try and c if i can update a small chapter today or by tomorrow..

thnx so much for the comments..😳

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#632

Originally posted by: ZedZee92
Wohohoo !!! Are you serious ?? She knew it was her nana 's house ??
I mean then why did she pretend??? Oooh... Ashu is gona be furious...
Hmmm... But hope they sought it out fast and with maturity 😊

Okay now comming to the main chapter :
Hmmm... Where do i start ??
😉All i can say is " tumhe kisi ki nazar na lage" 😳
You have left me completely speachless...it was sooo beautiful and sooo romantic.
Each and every word was just...😳 Breath taking😳
Great going 👏 Oooh and thanx for the nice long update... Its always a pleasure
To read long the long ones ..😛

Ps: Dying to read the next chapter 😳

😆.. okay i m so sorry to give u zor ka jhatka at the end.. 😆.. Did she actually pretend? .. actually a v good question! 😆.. And Ashu mst b fumbling with the same questions! 😆.. well.. will reveal soon ..

oh.. i m jst so happy tht u luved tht romantic part so much.. **wiping of khushi ke tears**... haayeee.. thy r so lovely as a couple.. thy exactly did the way i wanted to c thm on thr very first intimate encounter..😍...

so a new chapter begins on their love life.. i wud say tht 1 month of seperation paid off well..😆

thnx soo very much for taking out time to comment..

will update soon enuf if possible.. and not keep u all waiting.. bt only if possible!

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#633

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
U are a real bad girl manisha di... I was so smiling reading ur update, n u spoilt it at the end... Chalo koi nahi... I trust u... U wudnt let us down wid anything that lasts to b wrong 4 long...

But, only 1 thing that I cudnt recollect was, what was the souvenier thing with the mug... Was it the tea they shared the day b4 at his house...

Chalo u keep writing... Ciao...

Oh.. i m really sorry.. i cant help teasers.. 😆.. and with such a twist in hand only my greed to keep thm together was stalling this twist..😆

yeah.. i hate it to b wrong and tearjerking it shud b done away with as soon as possible.. if i cud i wud avoid it.. bt alas.. a good story do require such separation and tearjerking moments to make it more sweeter!😳

yup.. the souvenier thing was the mug tht thy had shared the other day..😳.. and yeah.. tht reminds me tht i have some loose ends to tie up tht i had left behind in previuos chapters.. some of u mite need to rummage thru those chapters to get the hint.. bt i will provide the link wenever it is required if i rake up something from previous chapters to save ur time...😳

thnx u so much for ur lovely comments..😳

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#634

Originally posted by: DikshaBaluja
Hey Achiever..Its an ultra-romantic update with a very passionate rain romance...I just loved it totally...It was so so sweet and sultry romance...I just love you for such wonderful writings...They are so blissful to be read !!

I just loved these lines..so true...

What happened then was something extremely beautiful and something that these two love birds had never experienced before! There was this first ache of need to b touched and felt! Their was this first wave of pure passion spreading thru them! And their was this first experience of such intimate closeness! And yet their was deliberate restraint. Their was this unspoken understanding between them thy cannot cross that fine line! Sometimes wat the light cannot convey, the darkness can convey it more beautifully. Sometimes what words cannot convey, a touch can convey it more expressively! And sometimes what a preaching cannot teach, an experience can teach u more truthfully! They had learnt to control their emotions in just the rite measure!

I really enjoyed the romance a lot...and I'm not much worried about Ashu knowing about Nidhi and his Baba's relation..because I have faith that even if Ashutosh reacts violently at first..he will understand the whole situation soon and cool down...however..I feel that he will handle the whole situation calmly..!!

Great going..too too eagerly waiting for the next update...awesome job !!

Aww.. thnk u so much.. 😛 actually I cudnt believe tht i had written those lines..😆.. well, thnx to all u friends.. i get carried away while writing.. and i m glad tht u too luved it v much..😳

regarding Ashu.. well.. all i cud say is.. u have gotten understanding of Ashutosh pretty well!👍🏼.. and after watever has happened betn thm.. the long seperation.. the regrets.. the patch up and the intimacy tht thy had shared.. his sudden violent erupting wud b too wierd.. and he is a mature and understanding man.. so he is going to handle this situation a bit differently.. bt how..wud b interesting to c.. i have a little something in my mind.. lets c if i take tht route.. if yes.. it b a cute little thng betn Ashu-Nidhi rather thn any serious melodrama kinda stuff with the house.. and yet it will bring thm more closer and notch up the understanding for each other a bit higher...😳.. and it will give me liberty to bring in some more passionate scene betn thm..😍

thnx so much again for ur very lovely and long comment..😳

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#635

Originally posted by: priyeah1
Super job again, achiever!! I loved the romance yaar! This story is so real...feels like its happening right here. I love that they spent the night together in each others arms..how romantic. I love the contrast of thoughts between the sexes. The way a girl and a guy think, despite any age differences is so different and you have portrayed that
beautifully :-)

aww.. thnx so much.. u know ur comments r always so encouraging.. u pick up certain minute thngs from the chapter and comment.. i luv it buddy!😳.. yeah.. thrs the difference of thot not jst betn two individuals of different generations bt also of different genders.. and it remains universal and omnipresent!😆.. however a boy or girl may age.. thy cant stop thinking differentely na!😆.. Wat adds to the beauty of this relation is tht age difference here is a boon.. it adds so much to this rship.. coz thy bring different dimension to thr r'ship.. while Nidhi satisfies Ashu's need to pamper and care for someone.. Ashu satisfies Nidhi's need to get pampered and cared for.. and yet.. wen situation demands.. each one can play a whole variety of roles for their partner conviniently.. and thr lies success of any r'ship actually.. Ashu's age is a plus point here.. 😳 and Nidhi's lack of worldly wiseness satisfies Ashu's intellectual capabilities... tht goes well with his basic nature to plan, implement, instruct, and keep things in his control rather..😳.. and so thrs a power struggle wen he comes across Nidhi's baba..😆 who is very much like Ashu.. being a colnel.. he likes things to b in his control..😳.. their only weakness is Nidhi..😆

spending nite in each other's arms is so romantic.. and i so wanted thm to do tht..😆

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#636

Originally posted by: karajekar

hi achiver it was superb very very romantic

aap ko pata yeh aapke purani aadat end mein jhatka dene ki 😆😆😆😆

will be waiting for next part

love you

sonali

yaeh.. u know me so well..😆😆😆.. Zor ka jhatka kuch rudely hi diya is baar...😆..

I had been stalling it for so long.. finally had to deliver tht punch!😆..

bt nxt chapters i m going to quite make up for it.. 😉..

thnx so much for ur comments..😳

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#637

Originally posted by: SwastikAshNi
Achiever,u can really handle a story very well,superb😉

Will b waiting fr d next part😊

thnx so so much for ur reply...

twist and turns r part and parcel of a good story telling na.. 😉.😆

will try and upload soon..😳

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#638

Originally posted by: heydoc27
hmm u knw bud u r gettin unpredictable,o mean its a compliment yaar,seriously,wid evri chapter u take d story to an new level,altogether,u just rasie d bar wid every chap!
its amazing to see d way u chip in evri single detail..
n d best part abt ur writng s d way evn u weave past,sentimental moments,happiness or any emotionin d story wid u knw,hmm u put dat life into each frame u write which s ur trademark,which s just too gud..

2 weeks r a pretty long tym bud!!but i knw!!do enjoy ur festival re!!but its too bad to leave us ova cliffhanger!!

First of all i wud apologize if u had PMed me anything.. coz i havent got time to look into it or go thru ur thrd.. bt i will definitely do so first and thn start writing my nxt chapter..

Wow.. u analyze my work so well.. 👏.. I really appreciate tht!😛

yeah.. yeah.. i know u r head over heels in luv with Ashu... wait and watch how passionate Ashu is going to become!😆

I luv teasing so much.. its reflecting in their banters as well..😆.. bt the twists tht i had plotted.. i didnt put it very well to b tht effective frankly..😈..😆😆😆.. my weakness to keep my work goody goody and make the lead pair stay together becomes a spoil sport.. and have changed my twist plot drastically for tht!😆 this is the 2nd twist tht i have done tht.. now lets c wat happens for my last and mahatwist in the story.. b4 thy get married!😛

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#639

KBfanNo1, thnx so much for ur like😳

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Sarika

@Blushsarika

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#640

So passionate and romantic update Achiever , every bit of emotions described is so beautiful.
Loved there rain romance and whenever Ashu tease her it makes me blush too .
With there hot hot romantic night , now they are completely each others by body and soul.
Liked the way you described her in the morning , showing completely different behaviour , Nidhi full of Shyness.
Liked this line - you will never understand what change of clothes means to a women .
You have shown how women and men think so differently ,
you really have agreat knowledge of how both men and women would react on certain things .

In your previous update also you have mentioned about girls thinking and desire , how they just desire for manly touch for the first time not that dot dot thing.
Dot dot - is our code word we friends talk about it this language only

😳
your deep knowledge of psycology of human beings behaviour surprises me.

I liked that twist in the end , this was the best day to know about Nidhi's nana , this had to come some day but this was the most suitable time.
I wish he ignores what he heard from Nidhi and behaves normally in front of her , he should wait for the day when Nidhi herself tells him about her connection with his Baba .
I am desperately waiting for how you are going to handle this situation.
If you could please update soon , story is becomming so interesting.
And don't end this FF soon ,don't want to end it ever , Alas! But it's not possible.
Thank you so much Achiever for giving us this romantic story , one of the best romantic fiction I have ever read.