*Smthin_Clld_Luv*Nov3_Updt_p146*Jaane Kya Baat Hui - Page 63

wow, what a romance in the rain, and the twist was really surprising. So Nidhi knew all this while? I hope Ashu ia able to digest it. It'll be very hard to wait 2 weeks for your next update. Have a nice trip.

Wohohoo !!! Are you serious ?? She knew it was her nana 's house ??

U are a real bad girl manisha di... I was so smiling reading ur update, n u spoilt it at the end... Chalo koi nahi... I trust u... U wudnt let us down wid anything that lasts to b wrong 4 long...

But, only 1 thing that I cudnt recollect was, what was the souvenier thing with the mug... Was it the tea they shared the day b4 at his house...

Chalo u keep writing... Ciao...

Hey Achiever..Its an ultra-romantic update with a very passionate rain romance...I just loved it totally...It was so so sweet and sultry romance...I just love you for such wonderful writings...They are so blissful to be read !!

I just loved these lines..so true...

What happened then was something extremely beautiful and something that these two love birds had never experienced before! There was this first ache of need to b touched and felt! Their was this first wave of pure passion spreading thru them! And their was this first experience of such intimate closeness! And yet their was deliberate restraint. Their was this unspoken understanding between them thy cannot cross that fine line! Sometimes wat the light cannot convey, the darkness can convey it more beautifully. Sometimes what words cannot convey, a touch can convey it more expressively! And sometimes what a preaching cannot teach, an experience can teach u more truthfully! They had learnt to control their emotions in just the rite measure!

I really enjoyed the romance a lot...and I'm not much worried about Ashu knowing about Nidhi and his Baba's relation..because I have faith that even if Ashutosh reacts violently at first..he will understand the whole situation soon and cool down...however..I feel that he will handle the whole situation calmly..!!

Great going..too too eagerly waiting for the next update...awesome job !!

Super job again, achiever!! I loved the romance yaar! This story is so real...feels like its happening right here. I love that they spent the night together in each others arms..how romantic. I love the contrast of thoughts between the sexes. The way a girl and a guy think, despite any age differences is so different and you have portrayed that
beautifully :-)

hi achiver it was superb very very romantic

aap ko pata yeh aapke purani aadat end mein jhatka dene ki 😆😆😆😆

will be waiting for next part


love you

sonali

Achiever,u can really handle a story very well,superb😉

Will b waiting fr d next part😊

aww.. i m overwhelmed with ur responses.. thnk u all so much friends.. will reply individually if time and more importantly internet permits..😆 guess i have 2 days to spare.. so lets c if i can give a quick update :)

hmm u knw bud u r gettin unpredictable,o mean its a compliment yaar,seriously,wid evri chapter u take d story to an new level,altogether,u just rasie d bar wid every chap!
its amazing to see d way u chip in evri single detail..
n d best part abt ur writng s d way evn u weave past,sentimental moments,happiness or any emotionin d story wid u knw,hmm u put dat life into each frame u write which s ur trademark,which s just too gud..

Originally posted by: achiever

Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder it is said, bt sometimes it is jst laying in ur arms in pure and innocent form! Nidhi cudnt break his spell. When he gazed at her like tht, he looked like an epitome of love! Can someone love someone with this intensity, she didn't know! With his short gray-black hair and beautiful eyes, his love for her imparted him a different glow and she felt like loving him even more!

u knw i have always,ahem perhaps dere r so many who have fallen head in heels ova dis dr.ashutosh!!!lols,but jokes apart,dis couple make u fall in luv wid dere cute antics!😳

uff n d above stuff u have written makes anybody fall in luv wid dem,i just luvd dose lines,i dont knw y,but dat ought to b d most beautiful line eva..

Wat happened thn was something extremely beautiful and something tht these two love birds had never experienced before! There was this first ache of need to b touched and felt! Thr was this first wave of pure passion spreading thru thm! And thr was this first experience of such intimate closeness! And yet thr was deliberate restraint. Thr was this unspoken understanding betn thm thy cannot cross tht fine line! Sometimes wat the light cannot convey, the darkness can convey it more beautifully. Sometimes wat words cannot convey, a touch can convey it more expressively! And sometimes wat a preaching cannot teach, an experience can teach u more truthfully! Thy had learnt to control their emotions in jst the rite measure!

n ur writing has from d first chap reflected passion,passion n passion,it cudnt get any better,d way u put words together n chip in dat passion,uff bud,superb..especially d above paragraph..

kudos to ur style,d way u sketch each n every character n layer dem..dats wat s appealing to d core..

**so how u liked my twist in the end..😈.. sorry.. 2 b a spoil sport..

hmm have i eva told u re,dat u l beat hitchcock,hmm d master teaser s back!!😉

Ciao TC

2 weeks r a pretty long tym bud!!but i knw!!do enjoy ur festival re!!but its too bad to leave us ova cliffhanger!!