Imaginary Krpkab.. new episode part 10B updated on 17 dec link at pg1 - Page 18

Originally posted by: cscs

Loved it !

N this happens to be my fav part

Dev after a whole torturous 40 minutes finally saw her - leapt forward and pulled her into a bone crushing hug.He moved from her for a minute -checked her from head to toe and kissed on her forehead.sonakshi Immedietly understood his anxiety -rubbing his back and helping him to come normal.

<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">Dev is such a feku. Sonakshi is pregnant with triplets.😆</font>

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<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">Waiting for the next part. I hope Ishwari realises soon that Sonakshi is not only blessing for her or Dev but Neha too, infact her own family.</font>

Sorry for the late reply.
And thank you so much for your wonderful comments.

I am honored . Actually these comments only urges me to write more. Thank you for taking time and post such wonderful comments..
I will try my best to fulfill your expectations in future episodes.
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Originally posted by: Harryfan011

Thank you so much for giving me such a beautiful gift on my birthday... Was not expecting to read the new update today, but couldn't believe when I saw the email notifying me of this update...

Loved to see how Sona continued to support Dev's family and Dev's protective and mischievous streak... Can't wait for the next one...

-Suyash.

How was your birthday?
It's something overwhelming what you have written.
I wrote something to share my unfulfilled expectations of my favorite show that gave you happiness on your special day. Aww I feel honoured.
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Originally posted by: Pooja118

hehe Dev the charmer and charmed by Sonakshi. Loved Neha and Ishwari part too. How I wish we had more on neha's realization about her behaviour towards Sona in krpkab

I hope I fulfilled some of your hopes.
Because I too have many. Will try to touch all that.
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Originally posted by: Gauri.0109

Hilarious update🤣🤣but I loved it how you introduced Neha's story in a very subtle manner. This is the Neha and Ranveer that I always wanted to see in the serial and you are fulfilling all my wishes by your writing skills😛Thank you so much and looking forward to the next update

I too hoped they show neha-ranveer in post leap. Neha's character introduced as very mature and 'understanding every Dixit well' like one.. But she had some complexities.. Will try to analyze that more in future episode.
Thank you so much for your wonderful and encouraging words.
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Originally posted by: TAMOGHNAD11

What a superb chapter it was!👏👏A little hilarious too at the end where the ever charmer Dev was charmed by Sona's beauty!🤣Thoroughly enjoyed this lovely chapter!😊The Ish-Neha part was also very subtly written which exhibits the depth of your writing prowess!👏

Loving this ff more with each coming chapter!

Keep it up dear! And I know you definitely will.😊

Update soon.

Thanks for the pm.😊

Such a beautiful comments. You thoroughly appreciated each part. This is very encouraging.
Thank you so very much.
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Originally posted by: sharmisha

Beautifully written update👏

It was great to see how the Dev- BIjoy bonding is beginning to shape out. Bijoy now has the trust & confidence that Dev will take care of Sonakshi

. Dev was terror stricken at the thought of Sonakshi being in an accident & recollected how he had almost lost her once before. The scene where in Dev was relieved to find that Sonakshi was completely fine & how she understood his feeling of relief & concern for her well being & comforted him was well written & brought out by you.

Loved Neha & Ishwari's conversation too. Neha was thankful to Sonakshi for guiding her to start her own online business & become financially independent so that she could also help out her family financially. I so wish that the makers had shown Neha's growth in character in this way in the serial too.

Ishwari praying for Neha's benefactor friend without knowing that it is Sonakshi was very subtly written. Hope she realizes how much positive changes Sonakshi has brought about not only in Dev's life but also in her entire family's life

Loving the way the story is progressing.

First sorry for the late reply.
As you enjoyed the update, I too thoroughly enjoyed your comments. You loved the Neha character's growth. Oh thank you I had some hesistance in that part now felt relieved every one liked that.

Next part also updated. So share your views please.
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Originally posted by: _ShaheErica_

First of all thanks a lot for your PM.🤗

I finished reading the whole thread today. Awww, such an amazing story, loved it. Your way of writing is very very good & keep writing more.👏👏

As the title suggests, we can only imagine our dear show KRPKAB to get this kind of beautiful story. Its blissful to see Dev & Sonakshi supporting each other so beautifully & mainly without any misunderstandings.

You are taking the story in a very logical and sensible way, this was exactly the initial promos suggested and also attracted viewers. I was so excited to watch this show which was unique & at the same time beautiful.👍🏼 It started off so well, but lost its charm in the midway.

Wish the makers had taken this kind of similar route as you have written... sigh... My blood boils and feel like crying whenever I recall the infertility track.😭😡

Oh well, Forget the show.

Coming to the current update, Imagining ShaRica and blushing❤️☺️ Dev is surrounded by ladies and Sonakshi is annoyed... nice one.😆 Now i am really excited to see how Dev & Bose family interact.

Feels happy to read neha n ranveer are living happily together.😃 This change is what we wanted to see in Neha. Sonakshi wished for this only in the show. But a troubled child neha was turned to a negative character for the sake of drama & maamaji's character was reduced to a dummy.😵

Again, I am going back to the show... I wish I could forget all the negativity in the show.

Imaginary KRPKAB is a treat to read. The story is going really well. Keep up the good work.👍🏼
Update soon.😳

Your comments made my day. Sorry for the late reply. Got held up with exam preparations..
I second your every thoughts.
I too fell in love with the show so hardly.
Devakshi became my dream couple.
But the show took some ugly turns that we couldn't digest. The Subtility was missed. Many characters' originality was killed. Still this show is in my top favorite list.
I started this story to share some of my unfulfilled wishes recording the characters and story. Hope I can do that upto your expectations.
Thank you so much for your views and wonderful comments.
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Thank you in advance.

Originally posted by: truekrpkabian

About this...I guess I was a little hasty on commenting after reading
the first chapter itself.The initial promos of the show looked very
promising,"The phone conversation promo","the pen promo".I
had expected KRPKAB to show this kind of realistic approach towards the
relationship of Devakshi.But Alas!!It disappointed me by following the regular
trend of Indian daily soaps-"the separation phase".Iam not saying that KRPKAB was the worse,it was actually a lot better, a
class apart from the other Indian daily soaps.But it contained some elements of
the regular Indian shows.I felt that itlacked representation of lifelike
situations at some points in the series.You have very aptlyrepresented it
in the first few chapters of ur imaginary KRPKAB,and as for ur filmy touch to
the story after that-its fantastic !!! I can imagine and recreate every scene
written down by you.

Thank u for keeping ur word.You have indeed given ur best in bringing
out beautiful moments.I look forward to ur writing.

First of all sorry for the late reply.
And thank you so much for liking this ff too

It's not a harsh comment. It's the appreciation for my imaginary episodes. I felt so happy that you like his story too like my short stories.

Hope future episodes too upto your liking. Next part updated. Do share your views.
Thank you so much for your comments. Do continue your support please.

Originally posted by: dreamy.tiara

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Superb update.👏</font>

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Till now I was following your story silently, but your story compelled me to comment.</font>

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Waiting for next.😊</font>

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">- Tia</font>

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Originally posted by: taahir004

<font color="#660099" size="3">Fabulous Chapter</font>

<font color="#660099" size="3">totally enjoyed this chapter</font>

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