DEVAKSHI SS:Second Marriage EPILOGUE Pg4 AUG21 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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(IMP NOTE-GUYS IN MY STORY PAYAL FIASCCO NEVER HAPPENED...JO PEHLI DATE PAYAL KE SAATH HUI THI ASSUME THAT IT HAPPENED WITH NISHA ONLY N DEV AGREED THEN THE GAJRA SCENE)

Sona saw jatin coming in her room and tried to compose herself...jatin just sighed, waving his head as he knew sona to well, he knew what she would be going through...he knew her to well...they had been childhood friends par kehte hai na ki kabhi kabhi dard do logo ko aise jhodh deta hai jaise kabhi khushi nahi joth pati...they shared the same pain, the pain of being separated from their loved ones...he lost his love,his wife to death and she lost her prince,her life to...well to their ego...today he was here for her as she needed him...

J-toh ...

s-toh kya...

J-what are u doing?

s- what kind of a question is this???abhi office se aayi thi toh socha thoda aaram karke kuch pending work hai who karloon...waise tum kahan tha???i know I was busy with stuff and saara workload tum par aa gaya but still no call,no nothing...

j- yahin tha...kuch loose ends the...

s-jaise??????

j-tumko pta chal jaega,at the right time...yeh chodo...tum batao tumhara stuff kaisa chal raha hai...

sona knitted her brow as if questioning?

j-arre aaj kal tum matchmaker bani hui ho na THE GREAT OBHODRO DEV DIXIT ke liye...toh was asking about that only?????

sona not liking him calling dev obhodro as she thought it was only her who could call him like that...uff wht is wrong with me...yeh ho kya raha hai...jatin ne pehle bhi bola tha but then why now...seeing sona taking so much time, he clicked his fingers to grab her attention...

j-kiske hassen khayalon mein khoi hui hoo jo hum samne hai phir bhi humko bhul gayi...

s- aisa kuch nahi hai...sab thik hai...dev liked the first girl n now...

j-really thts good...congratzzz.as in like yehi toh tum chahti thi na...

s-wht?main yeh thodi na chahti thi

j-matlab tum nahi chahti ki dev ki shaadi ho...

s- n...n..no...maine aisa thodi na kaha...I ...I am jst saying ki pehli ladki hi dekhi hai n u knw said yes in his first meet as in thoda time...

j-toh tum chahti ho ki who thoda jaane ek dusre ko...dates and all par jae...

sona not all this...dates it was their thing...

s-nahi.matlab haan...I don't know...i think it's a bit fast...

j- arre iss me fast kya hai...

s-matlab kal hi sagai

j-haan toh sona,he is mature...i am sure jo ladki tumne chunni hai who achi hogi...so fast kya au raise hi hota hai arrange marriages mein...later on sab adjust ho jata hai

sona thinking ki maine thodi na chunni hai...maine sirf dikhayi thi,usne khud chunni...

j- waise I was thinking kit um yeh side business chalo kar loo since u are so good at it...pehle hi baar mein dev dixit ki shaadi fix...advertisement bhi jaega...

s-shutp up okay...stop your pjs...

j- yea right my pjs...I should shutup n you should start talking...n when I say talking I mean talk your heart out and not your stupid bhoka brain...

s-what?

j- sach sach bol kya hua hai...

s- kuch nahi...u re reading between the lines...

j- like really...sona I know you really well...

Sona gave up

s- ok fine...u want to hear me then hear...dont blame me later on ok...(she got up from the bed and started ranting her bottled emotions...)maine nahi bola tha ki shaadi kar lo... uski ma ne bola that you should get married... aur nawab sahib ko thud ek companion ki zarurat thi...obvio for his needs...such a dick head...sab ladke ek jaise hote hai, ek hi jagah se sochte hai...

jatin gave her a look...sona saw that...

s- okay fine I agree exceptions are there...but dev is definitely not an exception...i just said want he wanted...ab ,maine bola tha ki jo pehli ladki mile bas ji uske saath shaadi karlo...but sirjee ne toh haan bol dee...(she took a deep breathe as she blurted all this without any pause, maybe without even breathing in a go)

j-ek second...tumhari problem yeh hai ki who pehli ladki se hi shaadi kar raha hai ?

s-huh...meri problem hai ki...

j-hai ki(trying to get it out from her,signaling thru his hands ki blurt it out)...ki

s-ki...

j-ki who shaadi kar raha hai...

s-nooo...

j-yesss...u knw what tumhe lagga ki tum usko mana logi ladki dekhne ke liye aur who kissi ladki ko kabhi nahi haan bolega but usne toh pehli hi ladki ko haan bol diya...u thought ki aise hi time chala jaega...with u and dev in this relationship jo pura ho kar bhi pura nahi...one week at your place n then one week at his place...no name but still together...koi problem ho usko then u are there with him and obvio your classic dialogue that you are doing it for soha as if dev is unhappy then soha would be sad and he does the same for you...you just didn't wanted to take any decision for your relationship...

s- aisa nahi hai...

j-acha aisa nahi hai then why are you behaving as if your hubby is cheating on you as dev is your ex and a friend right?

s- no...its just that ki I am worried ki jaldbazi mein who koi galat decision na lele and then he regrets and gets hurt...

j-ofcourse agar who hurt hua toh soha hurt hogi na...oh god sona mujhe pta tha kit um stubborn ho but yeh nahi pta that ha you are blind and dumb...kissi andhe ko bhi dikh jae ki you are sad that he is getting married...

s- no,.,,,,,

j-yes...kam se kam khud se toh jhoot mat bolo...itne saal you have been lying to yourself that you have forgotten him, hate him but sach toh yeh hai ki bhulna toh dur ki baat hai who toh abhi bhi hai tumhare dil mein aur if u hate him toh phir nafrat bhi toh usse hi hota hai jisse pyaar hota hai...

s-but who past tha...I used to hate him but not now...

j- so now what??????/u don't hate him...so do u love him...

s-huh...

j-nafrat nahi karti toh kya feel karti ho?

s-plzzz jatin...

j- what plzzz...ab time bahut kam hai sona...you have to decide what you feel for him...u cant just ignore them...

s- I don't knw...

j-acha ok but yeh batao ki why are you restless...(trying to make her realize she loves him but scared to admit it due to the consequences)

s- its just I...i...i don't...I didn't like it jab Who unki pehli date mein uske saath baat kar raha tha...giving all the attention to her and I was no where jabki its always been ki main uske saath hoti thi...i know ki who uski wife hogi toh ab who uske saath hogi aur main nahi...as main sirf ek friend hoon but I felt bad I didn't like it,mujhe bura lagga...

(all the while jatin was just sitting n listening and hmmm...hmmm to her while she was ranting at him standing n walking )

s- aur how can he put gajra on her hair as in like it was our thing...its our god damn thing...

j-smirked...really(in a sarcastic tone...)like seriously "our thing(air quotiong)...sona now nothing of this " our thing will happen...ab jo hoga who dev aur nisha ka hoga...it would be their thing...ab sab kuch unka hoga...u have to understand ki jo haq tumhare tha who ab nisha ke honge...shayd usme se kuch who bhi cheese ho jot um dono karte tha but ab woh dev aur nisha karenge saath mein...u knew this all along right...

s- yea yea I know...mujhe pta hai ki ab mera koi haq nahi hoga dev ya uski family pe...kabhi nahi tha...

j-tha ... but dev ki shaadi ke baad koi haq nahi rahega...

s-ya nahi rahega bas bura lag raha hai aisa lag raha hai jaise kuch toot raha hai yahan(pointing towards her heart)jaise kissi ne kuch bahut pointed cheez mari hoon...aur jab maine unki who dekha jo aaj restaurant mein hua toh I just couldn't take it...how can he do this to me...matlab I know I am not his wife but still how can he just forget it was my dream...i don't know ki mujhe itna bura kyun lag raha jabki nahi lagna chahiye...

j-well tumhe bura isliye lag raha hai kyunki u love him...

Silence...

j-waise kya dekha tumne restaurant mein...

PRECAP-WHAT HAPPENED IN RESTAURANT...KHULASA ABOUT THE TRUTH??????????(FYI NEXT CHAPPY ALSO GOIN TO BE SUPER EMOTIONAL)

PS-I HAD WRITTEN IT YESTERDAY ONLY BUT DUE TO WEATHER N INTERNET CONNECTION COULD NOT POST IT...HOPEFULLY NEXT UPDATE AAJ HI HO JAEGA AS I WANT TO FINISH THE STORY BY THIS WEEK...BUT DEPENDS UPON THE RESPONSE...

PPS-SUPER EXCITED ABOUT THE PROPOSAL MADE BY SONA TO DEV...ITS GOIN TO BE UNQUIE LIKE ALWAYS AS ITS KRPKAB...SONA ON HER KNEES...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesum
Plz update soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb update dear
thanks for accept my request
cont soon...
waiting for next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: AisiDeewangi

superb update dear
thanks for accept my request
cont soon...
waiting for next part


Thnxxx
I am glad
Will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow it was awesome loved that part where she pointed towards her heart
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Devakshilover

Wow it was awesome loved that part where she pointed towards her heart


Thnxxx
It is one of my fav moment as well
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17


PART 3

s- maine dekha ki...

FLASHBACK

In the afternoon at about 2ish...Dev went to sona for the pretense of choosing his clothes for the engagement as its tomorrow to make her jealous in the hope that she would realize but she is a tough nut(guys imagine the serial wala scene)...but efore leaving he heard sona on the phone with her client that she will be meeting her at the "moonlight caf" in CP at about 5pm...so dev made another plan so that she can realize it...though he was feeling bad that he was going to hurt nisha whom he was actually using as a bait though he didn't want to as she was a nice soul and moreover when he started all the faade he didn't know that it would go that far but damn Ms bose...but now he had to play along as he didn't have any option so he called nisha for kind of a date at the same caf at the same time...

Dev and nisha met in the caf...placed their order but dev was anxious for sona's arrival...he could barely concentrate on his so called date but tried...nisha was not a dumb dum...she could sense his anxiety,she knew that there was something between dev and sona which could not be broken...irrespective of what they say, the way they look at each other,the way they behave,the way they know each other...in other words they complete each other but she could not understand that why they could not understand this bond...but after carefully observing dev she realized that dev has realized but was hesitant because sonakshi was not ready to accept them...n hence he was trying to play this third angle card...it did hurt her and she was really interested in dev but she knew he belongs to someone else so she was up for the game...

n-so sonakshi nahi aayi

d-nahi pta nahi kahaan reh gayi

n-oh toh who bhi aane wali hai na kya?mujhe lagga yeh humari date hai?

d-n...n..nahi ...mera matlab hai woh kyun aayegi its our date...right?

n- par aapne kahan?

d-main yeh keh raha tha ki pta nahi who kahan hai ?busy rehti hai kaam karti,ghar n then soha...u know...

n-ohhh...waise she is an amazing women

d-yea she is amazing(dev goes his memory lane where he is recalling her looks,her behavior...basically lost in his sona world)...she is perfect just perfect in everything she does...aur jab woh kissi cheez ke saath attach hoti hai toh usko bhi perfect bana deti hai...she makes me a better person,meri har galti ko thik kar deti hai...

n-oh toh basically she completes you...

d- (dreamily) yea she does...(but soon he came out of lala land and realized that what blunder he has created so tried to manipulate her)...w..woh...main yeh kehna chahta tha that she used to...

Before he could complete,he was interrupted by nisha inbetween...

n-stop it dev...kya main aapko itni badi bewakoof lagti hoon ki yeh nahi samajh paongi ki aap dono abhi bhi ek dusre se kitna pyar karte hai...mujhe pehle thoda doubt hua that's why I asked you both but aap dono ne mujhse jhooth bola but I can see it,anyone can see...aap dono kyun nahi dekh paa rahe ya dekhna nahi chahte,isse sirf three zindagi barbaad hogi...aapki,sonakshi ki aur meri as aap kabhi mujhse pyaar nahi kar paoge...why are you doing this to me...to urself...

d-nahi,aisa nahi hai I know ...i know I love sonakshi aur mera koi intention nahi tha tumko hurt karne ka but I didn't know ki baat itni aage tak chali jaegi...I really didn't wanted to hurt you but I couldn't handle things as one thing led to the other...mujhe lagga main shaadi ke liye yes bolunga toh sonakshi will realize that she cant live without me but ...

n-but she didn't...but I know you love her n so does she so...

d-so????????

n-so I will help you in whatever it takes...

d-but...

n- I know tum yeh puchna chahte ho na why kyun n all...well sonakshi is lucky jot um usko mile...

d-no I am lucky that woh meri life main aayi...

n-chalo yeh bhi sahi hai...aur do pyaar karne walo ko humesha saath me rehna chahiye aur agar I help you toh god will help me to make my love story also...mujhe bhi koi acha ladka mil jaega...n I also have an epic love story like you guys...

d- thankzzz so much...

n- so ab kya karna hai...

Dev explained her the entire thing he had planned...then only sona entered the caf so dev started his drama which was witnessed by sona...n broke her heart into million pieces...

N-dev main bahut excited hoon so is my family that aap jaise insaan meri life mein aayega...

d-yea

n-so aapne who tickets aur saari arrangements karli na...

d-yea(he handed over a few papers to her,which made sona go curious n she was on her bonkesh bakshi mode)

s(in her mind)-mujhe batae bina hi date par aa gaya...waise toh bada bolta hai ki sab kuch tum karogi...but then rebuked herself ofcourse date pe aane se pehle thodi na batayega first date pe toh thik hai ab toh he knows her aura age toh aisi dates hongi hi na...

d-yeh hai sari details humare honeymoon ki with itenary...its for 15 days in Europe so apni packing uss accordingly karna...(all the while looking at sona through the corners of his eyes)

this was it for sona...it was a shocker...dev was planning for his honeymoon with nisha and that too a place where she wanted to go with him,her dream...she couldn't take it and she just rushed back...dev wanted to follow her...it was his plan to follow her and confront her as to why was she crying and then he could cleverly take out the truth from her that she loved him and still wanted him back in her life as her life partner not just a mere friend...but ...

but the infamous radha rani came and blurted out in her excited ...

rr-on my gods...tum dono yahan...arre wah dates pea aye hoon...I am toh soo happy...dev aur nisha u are a Jodi made in havans ...

she started her chit chat so dev could not execute his plan...dev and nisha's faces fell as they lost a golden opportunity since sona was at her lowest...

FLASHBACK OVER

Jatin and sona conversation-

Sona was devastated,she was shattered recalling the days incidents...

s- how can...

J- stop it sona...isme aise react karne ki kya zarurat hai you yourself wanted him to marry ...sorry you yourself showed him his prospective brides...toh yeh sab toh hoga na...woh dono shaadi karne wale hai...who date par jaenge,long drives par,romantic movies.honeymoon and what not aur kuch time baad they may start a family as well...

s- stop it just stop it...(she just didn't wanted to hear more)

j-arre yeh sab toh hota hai na shaadi ke baad who hi ho raha hai...thoda quick but usse kya farak padhta hai?

s-just stop...how can you say all this andhow can dev do all this to me...it was my dream...it was god dammed my dream to go to Europe with my dev and he broke my dream...

j-"YOUR DEV"tum ne khud hi usko gift wrap karke usko nisha ko de diya...u stupid girl...

they both were sitting on her bed with sona crying over his shoulder...jatin made her face him and cupped her face in his palms...

dev who had left his place to confront sona,reached her place by the time and thought of going to her room through the balcony but saw the door open and her house in dead drop silence which was so unlike bose house so took the stairs and reached the room only to see the scene and hear...

j- main kabhi bhi tumhara koi sapna totne nahi doonga...main humesha tumhara saath donga and will always make sure ki tumhara har dream pura ho...just trust me...(he hugged her)

dev couldn't take it any more so he rushed outside the house for some fresh air...with his tears continuously rolling over his face and somewhere clouds accompanied him in his heartbreak...

BACK IN THE ROOM

S- I thrust you...n you know that...

j- hmmm...so clearly you love him but whats stopping you????????

Before sona could say anything he gestered her through his finger as if saying "NOOO"

J-NO MORE LYING OKAY...

s-i don't know...i love him but...

j- but what yaar...love story mein yeh but pta nahi kahan se aa jata hai...tum baba ko lekar tensed ho(sona didn't say anything but expressions said she was hesitant due to her baba...)hmmm...don't worry main unko manna lunga...woh meri baat kabhi nahi talenge...

s-its not that easy jatin...who bhi apni jagah sahi keh rahe hai...he is just concerned about me...he is worried aur mere aur dev ke relationship ne mere baba ko dukh ke alawa kuch bhi toh nahi diya...pehle jab main dev se breakup ke baad itni sad ho gayi thi,phir ritvick se engagement break hone par he faced so much humiliation and after marriage unko aapne hi ghar se nikaal diya inta insult hue woh...i know he has suffered when I was alone for these seven years...

j- you are right...har baap apni beti ke lipe sirf acha chata hai and is always worried about her future...

s- so he is just worried ki phir se who sab and I am also worried about it only...what if sirf se It doesn't work out...pichli baar sab me humari family bahut buri tarah hurt hui thi and this time soha is also involved I don't want ki uss par koi asar pade...

j- but this is applicable to dev n nisha ki marriage aur soha par phir bhi effect hoga...but that is not the point point yeh hai ki you love each other and you will make it work...let me complete(sona was trying to say)...last time you guys rushed into it and then you were young,naya naya pyaar but abhi you guys are mature...aur last time bhi tum dono apne relationship ko sambhal lete agar...

s-plzzz don't blame aunty ji into it...

j- I am not...agar koi tum dono ke relation ko zid pakdh kar thodne par na toola hota and tumhari galti yeh hai ki tum dono ne sab ko apne relationship ko effect karne ka haq diya...you guys did sort out things initially,u guys tried to sort out everything but ek point ke baad you guys gave up and let them win...and they won...you guys separated because you chose to believe others and not your loved one...

s- what are you talking about?

J-i am talking about the truth...THE TRUTH about your failed marriage...remember I told you I was tying some loose ends...so now its time for revealation but usse pehle kuch sawaal...

s-i am not getting anything...(she made a face so did he..._)

PRECAP- REVEALATION...BREAKDOWN...CONFRONTATION...CONFESSION...

EID MUBARAK...MERE NAAM SE BHI THODI KHEER TASTE KAR LENA...

PS - I KNOW LATE HO GAYA BUT I WAS NOT IN THE MOOD TO WRITE N STUFF CAME UP...I WANTED TO UPDATE SEDUCTION BUT THIS WAS HANGING SO NEXT MAY BE SEDUCTION YA SHAYD THIS OR BOTH...LOT DEPENDS ON THE RESPONSE...


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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
👏👏
Actually it is a lovely update
I liked the Jatin and sona talks
Please please update soon as possible
And do not forget to pm me
Edited by Ruchbuchude - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ruchbuchude

👏👏

Actually it is a lovely update
I liked the Jatin and sona talks
Please please update soon as possible
And do not forget to pm me


Thnxxx so much
I will update after updating my other FF
Yea I really think tht Jatin was not used to his full potential so thought of putting it down
I hv sent u a buddy request... will pm u
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Good Chapter and liked the way Jatin is helping Sona to sort out there relationship problems...pls give us the next chapter soon

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