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cscs

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Posted: 8 years ago

Its Beautiful.

You have expressed Sona's thoughts so aptly. Would love to see something similar in the show.

N welcome to the forum and do write more stories. 😊

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AMereWanderer

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Swarna_99
Welcome to the forum dear ! 🤗

Beautiful OS...loved it ❤️

Thank you so much for the appreciation and the warm welcome! I've written another FF on PrAja known as 'Yeh Kahan Aagaye Hum' on Faisal and Roshni from Maharana Pratap, if you wish to read and comment on that too.

Thank you!

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havima

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Posted: 8 years ago

Beautifully penned the pain of sona.

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TAMOGHNAD11

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Posted: 8 years ago

Amazing os! 👏 Please do write more.

Edited by TAMOGHNAD11 - 8 years ago

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AMereWanderer

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: cscs
Its Beautiful.
You have expressed Sona's thoughts so aptly. Would love to see something similar in the show.
N welcome to the forum and do write more stories. 😊

Thank you so much! I'm glad to know you liked the way I conveyed a perception of Sona's feelings.

Please do suggest more ideas for stories...😃

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AMereWanderer

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: havima
Beautifully penned the pain of sona.

Thank you! 😃

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AMereWanderer

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: TAMOGHNAD11
Amazing os! 👏 Please do write more.

Thank you so much! Please do suggest more ideas if you wish to...😃

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Anjali33

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Posted: 8 years ago

A fine piece of beautiful writing

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Anjali Sharma

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Posted: 8 years ago

Welcome to the forum🤗

I hope u enjoy here😃

I m Anjali

Whenever u need any help, u r free to ask me

U can PM me whenever u want😃

The words which came to my mind while reading this OS were just

WOW! WOW! WOW! HOW BEAUTIFUL⭐️

You are truly an amazing writer

Hats off to you👏

The way u penned down Sonakshi's inner turmoil is beyond perfection...

I just loved it...

Loved it so much

I just cant tell u how much i loved it

Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful piece

I would love to read more stories from you

Keep writing

& come with more stories..😃

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sa1234B

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Posted: 8 years ago

Beautifully penned down ...Lovely OS

Do write more often..

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