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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.
Thank you so much for giving us this OS!!
It was a masterpiece...
A lovely OS...and very emotional
Loved reading it
Thanks for the pm

Thank you dear 😃I am glad you liked it

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Ria_Ca
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Very beautiful OS..so emotional but luved it 👏</font>

Thank you 😊 glad you loved it

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moni160282

@moni160282

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Heart touching story. Very nicely written

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sorathsheikh

@sorathsheikh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Awesome os sis 😃 beautiful at the beginning and emotional at the end . both fell in love but so sad ... he met the aunty and said mera nam but the aunty said further that dev dixit haina i smiled at the this par sonakshi nhi rahi thanks for pm

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Tacker_Holic

@Tacker_Holic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Wow this was totally superb! What a beautiful way for them to meet through the coffee shop and then the ending was so tragic. Their love lived on through poetry. You are a fantastic writer and you turned a simple story into something so beautiful and touching.

It made me cry so much! 😭 Thank you for writing a masterpiece!

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: moni160282
Heart touching story. Very nicely written

Thank you so much 😃

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: sorathsheikh
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Awesome os sis😃beautiful at the beginning and emotional at the end . both fell in love but so sad ... he met the aunty and said mera nam but the aunty said further that dev dixit haina i smiled at the this par sonakshi nhi rahi thanks for pm</font>

I am glad you liked it.Thank you for commenting 😃

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Tacker_Holic
Wow this was totally superb! What a beautiful way for them to meet through the coffee shop and then the ending was so tragic. Their love lived on through poetry. You are a fantastic writer and you turned a simple story into something so beautiful and touching.

It made me cry so much!😭Thank you for writing a masterpiece!

Thank you so much for appreciating my effort and thank you for commenting If I was able to make you cry then I was successful 😃

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Erina

@Erinasingh69

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Nooo 😭 😭 my sona can't die leaving behind her dev to suffer nope I don't like sad stories 😭 I was waiting for ur next update but this one broken me ... not only devakshi even i cried n those lines of the poem 😭 made more difficult for me to read ahead but I did not dev reply was also hearttouching n heartbreaking

While going through ur os which song camed in my mind in different situation :-

When dev read sona diary n sona expressing how she smiled n loved him

"Tum yooh mile ho jabse mujhe

Aur sunehri main lagti hoon

Sirf laboon se nahi ab toh

Poore badan se hansti hun

Mere din raat salone se

Sab hai tere hi hone se

Yeh sath hamesha hoga nahi

Tum aur kahin main aur kahin 😭 😭

When dev was expressing his love for sona among media

Tum mere ho iss pal mere ho