Devakshi OS -Humari Adhoori Kahani - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Erinasingh69

Nooo 😭😭my sona can't die leaving behind her dev to suffer nope I don't like sad stories😭I was waiting for ur next update but this one broken me ... not only devakshi even i cried n those lines of the poem😭made more difficult for me to read ahead but I did not dev reply was also hearttouching n heartbreaking
While going through ur os which song camed in my mind in different situation :-
<font color="#ff0000">When dev read sona diary n sona expressing how she smiled n loved him</font>
<font color="#ff0000">"Tum yooh mile ho jabse mujhe</font>
<font color="#ff0000">Aur sunehri main lagti hoon</font>
<font color="#ff0000">Sirf laboon se nahi ab toh</font>
<font color="#ff0000">Poore badan se hansti hun</font>
<font color="#ff0000">Mere din raat salone se</font>
<font color="#ff0000">Sab hai tere hi hone se</font>
<font color="#ff0000">Yeh sath hamesha hoga nahi</font>
<font color="#ff0000">Tum aur kahin main aur kahin😭😭</font>
<font color="#0000ff">When dev was expressing his love for sona among media</font>
<font color="#9900cc">Tum mere ho iss pal mere ho</font>
<font color="#9900cc">Ab shayad vo alam naa rahe</font>
<font color="#9900cc">Tum sath hamesha hoge nhi</font>
<font color="#9900cc">Main phir bhi tumko chahunga</font>
<font color="#9900cc">Main phir bhi tumko chahunga</font>
<font color="#9900cc">Is chahat mein maar jaunga</font>
<font color="#9900cc">Main phir bhi tumko chahunga😭😭</font>
<font color="#9900cc">.</font>
<font color="#9900cc">.</font>
<font color="#9900cc">.</font>
<font color="#9900cc">.</font>
<font color="#9900cc"> Plzzz next update happy type dena I cried n I don't want to cry further. ...</font>
<font color="#9900cc">I will not tell you it's heartbreaking, hearttouching n very beautifully written nhi to u will give next one like this only which doesn't want. ..</font>


<font color="#9900cc">Update soon</font>
<font color="#9900cc">Till then take care</font>
<font color="#9900cc">Keep smiling ❤️</font>


Aww I am sorry dear that I made you cry but kya karu I thought to try something different that's why wrote this but don't worry Next update will be happy wala pinky plomish
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Swarna_99

<font color="#993399" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Beautiful os Ankita !!</font>

<font color="#993399" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Jaisa ki maine socha tha...a very emotional story !!</font>
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Aww thank you 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63
It's so touching n I am cryin
I guess aaj main bahut emotional ho gayi hoon i dono why
I loved tht dogs n their name wala part so cute bt never imagined ki yeh hoga end
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: A.K.Aggarwal

It's so touching n I am cryin
I guess aaj main bahut emotional ho gayi hoon i dono why
I loved tht dogs n their name wala part so cute bt never imagined ki yeh hoga end



aww sorry for making you cry😭😭😭 but kuch different try kar rahi thi mai 😉
but pakka wala promise next time happy wala update😊😊😳😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
#65
Superb
Lots of wishes for ur writing skill.

But cudn type anything bcoz u made me cry.

don't do this pls.

It put me in depression mode.i hate sad ending. I l try to avoid from thinking abt d story.don't repeat pls.u can't even imagine u emerge my sensitive side from somewhere. I love ur writing but I hate u for this os.


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Posted: 8 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: maasha

Superb

Lots of wishes for ur writing skill.

But cudn type anything bcoz u made me cry.

don't do this pls.

It put me in depression mode.i hate sad ending. I l try to avoid from thinking abt d story.don't repeat pls.u can't even imagine u emerge my sensitive side from somewhere. I love ur writing but I hate u for this os.



Aww please forgive and and don't hate me please I promise next time I will give A happy wala update 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Devakshilover


Aww please forgive and and don't hate me please I promise next time I will give A happy wala update 😃



Ok.give us one happy ff, by updating one by one everyday.

Then I l forgive u soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: maasha




Ok.give us one happy ff, by updating one by one everyday.

Then I l forgive u soon.


I am sorry dear I don't have that much time to write a FF But I promise to give you all An OS as soon as possible
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69

Thank you
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: Devakshilover


I am sorry dear I don't have that much time to write a FF But I promise to give you all An OS as soon as possible





But no more sad os.happy ending always.

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