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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1991

Originally posted by: kashish-priya
Update dedo didi ji plz

Naya thread banaya hai bacche
Index se link uthana

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#1992

Commenting for Chapter-4.

BAAPRE.

Gayu tune bohot rulaya is update mein.

The way all of it took a turn.

Aur Vicky for a change acha laga.

Yaar issue se mujhe aaj tak itni nafrat nahi hui jitni ye update padh k hui. .

Aur. DevAkshi unki baatein.

Unke baare mein main baat na karu wohi acha hai.

Itna emotional n itni complications.

My head round round ho raha hai.

Aur eyes se aansu aa rahe hai.

Letter ki Kya baat.

Itna selfish aur blaming letter hai.

Each word has totally opp reality.

N presented in such a hell way by issue n Natasha.

Is Vicky ko ab kya ho gaya.

Aur us room mein kya baat hui thi DevAkshi k beech.

Jo kisi ko nahi pata, Sona rote hue nikal gayi.

Kya hai us din hue darwaazzee k peeche hui baat ka raaz.

Ab no more control to read the next chappy.

Bye.

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#1993

Binnuuu.

Do I need to say how much I loved the Banner.

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1994

Originally posted by: Chandniyati
Binnuuu.
Do I need to say how much I loved the Banner.

Haha...no need dii😉

I understood from these words that u loved it😉

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#1995

Originally posted by: binuuu

Haha...no need dii😉
I understood from these words that u loved it😉

Dear ab to ye love word bhi kam lagta hai.

Wish isko aamne samne milke bata paati.

M proud of U my Jaan.

Ki aap samajh gaye.

Aur haan sorry I forgot.

Belated Chand Mubarak. Eid Mubarak.

Missing U in the team.

When will U get back. ??

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#1996

Commenting for Chapter-5.

Awww. Dev seeing album n pics of his cheeku n him.

But Dev has to turned such a stone hearted young Man.

Sab us Natasha n issue ki wajah se.

Yaar ab to pakka Natasha ko kaam wali n us par chori ka ilzaam.

Sona pleading mein to rona aa gaya.

She's soo much calm b trying to make things calm.

Par nahi ye Dev haina bunny ki tarah uchalna hai use.

Uchal uchal k chalna hai.

Haww. Court marriage k liye use itna saara pressure kiya.

BAAPRE.

Aur to aur dressing pe bhi taunt.

Aur Sona she's soo much trapped in Dev's words n actions.

She has litterally put everything on stake.

Aur grah pravesh.

Maar Dala re Gayu tune. Maar Dala.

Zindgi barbaad ho giya.

Yaar ab itna na rula.

Ab Saha nahi jata.

I cud not even imagine these things in my wildest dreams.

Aur ye padhke to m dying.

I hate U Gayu.

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#1997

Commenting for Chapter-6.

Yaar ye dark FF to aur bhi dark hota jaa raha hai.

I m loving it. 😉

Par ye zulm sehen nahi ho raha.

So much hatred.

I know Dev is extreme in everything he does n wishes.

But still I can't see my Dev behaving like this.

Aur woohhooo he cleared wo Kuch nahi karega.

Aur uski care bhi dikh gayi thodi si hi Sahi. Par dikhi. Bas hai.

Wow Kya funda hai boss ka.

Playing OPP inn n out.

U know best part Kya hai.

Ki I'll not have to wait for next updates.

So ab mujhe is interesting updates ka aur wait nahi karna.

So lemme run to next one. 😉

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#1998

Commenting for Chapter-7.

Wow. Kya bola Sona ne Dev ko.

Darr gayab ho jata hai.

Aur what a fake morning breakfast romance.

N wo college mein bhi Dev.

Oh God. Can't see Sona like this.

It gives such a bad feel.

Dev gaya Bijoy ko bhadkane.

Aur success bhi Mili.

Asha is amazing lady.

Aakhir wo bhi to ek Samajhdar lady k sath sath Maa hai.

I really loved Dev's care, concern, consoling n way of step for Sona's health.

N the reason is being revealed in baby steps abt Issue n Dev.

So the reason was Sona before n yet again she is the reason.

N I love this reason.

Yaar ye to kitna interesting, horror types n scary types ka FF hai.

But I love these kinds.

N I love the writer as well. 😉

Pata hai meri neend udd gayi ye wale updates padh k.

Aur aaj mera mood extremely kharab tha jo ab bohot extremely acha ho gaya. Thank-You Gayu. Love U.

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#1999

Commenting for Chapter-8.

Wow Dev is so tensed n worried for Sona.

He's caring jus like a hubby wala love.

The way he waited, starred, realized n cared for her to get conscious. I loved it all to the bottom of my heart.

This is our Dev.

Loved how he played with her yet made her have her food n medicines n that too on time. They way he enjoyed n gave a tough time to her. N Sona equally tried to give it back. But they did jus behave jus like a normal hubby-wifey.

Hamare pyare Keechu Bhaiyaaa.

Perfect msg messenger hai yaha to.

Unlike always kabab mein haddi.

N hope aage k updates mein bhi na bane.

Awww he knows her so well.

He knows how n where strong she is.

How weak n where she is.

He is jus keeping everything emotions masked with hatred.

N will fall soon as well.

N he straight away hit the right n made Asha cook her fav for Sona. Muh ka swaad. 😉

Gosh I really can imagine how will Dev behave when everything will fall back right to its place n DevAkshi will b expecting their tiny one of their love n love.

Finally Jay n Sona had a first n hearty Convo.

She really needed someone to know her situation n circumstances n pour some strength n motivation in her.

N she got the right person.

Yaar yaha bhi Khatri ko le aao.

So that issue can play her fav games in that direction.

Loved Dev's surprise wala avtaar.

N also how he gave it straight to issue n walked off.

Aur haan what's that scarry gunah.

Reveal kar diya hoga aage k chappies mein.

So again lemme run.

Aur haan.

Loved that Sona ka Mr. Dixit