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Anjali Sharma

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1981

Di next chapter new thread me doge?

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1982

NEW THREAD UP FOR MY REMAINING CHAPTERS

HERE'S THE LINK

NEW THREAD

PLEASE POST YOUR COMMENTS ON THE NEW THREAD AS THIS ONE STANDS CLOSED

Edited by DevakshiCrazy - 8 years ago

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Sneha

@Rhy2015

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1983

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Bhaktajano
Clarification yahaan hai

Remember sona ne sirf dev ki shirt chair par rakhi hui dekhi
Yaani ki pant usne pehni hui thi
Aur dev bed se uth ke shirt pehenke room se chala gaya
Ab bina pant pehne kaise jayega bhala

To apne gutter dimaag pe baandh lagao
Kyunki jab saare kapde utrege to aapko specifically bataya jayega
Tab tak CONTROLLL 😆 😆

🤣

Aur woh kab utrenge???
Zara roshni daalo 😆
Woh Kya hai na GM community ajkal soyi hui hai to Maine usse ek wake up call di thi 😉

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1984

@anj

Mera man kiya so post kiya😳

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#1985

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Chanda raani badi sayani
Padhegi padhegi meri kahaani
Jaldi unres karo

Gayu main aa gayi.

Bohot pehle se. I mean bohot aage se comment ko kheech k layi.

Bilkul apne types ka introduction diya hai.

Kisi ko bhi galat femi na rahe.

Aur ye kya dekha maine thread close kar di.

Never expected this from U Gayu.

Aur naya bhi aa itna aage nikal gaya.

Ab mujhe bhi jet speed leni padegi.

Ab introduction n index ka comment done.

So me run.

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#1986

Prologue.

Kitna interesting n confusing prologue hai.

Jus like U.

N seems too much interesting.

What is gonna happen n what is gonna turn. M really very excited abt it. Aur ye TP Natasha. Ise kya prblm hai.

Does she really needs so much money n loose character at a drop of a hat.

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#1987

Character Sketch.

Ab zyada soch mat main pagal hi hoon.

Confirmed.

Ye awesome Character Sketch hai Boss.

DevAkshi itne ache besties.

M getting more curious to know the instore ahead.

Aur Inka magic ko aapke write-up ka tadka laga.

To life jhinga la-la.

Yaar is Natasha ko kaam wali hi bana dete.

Fir to Dev uske baare mein sochne ka khayal bhi na lata.

Anyways. M ready with Ur tadka.

N my time kadka.

Running for Chapter-1. Now.

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#1988

Chapter-1.

Wow kya description diya hai Dil walo ki Delhi ka.

Aur Dev n Sona ka intro to like a bomb.

Realistic Nick names Haan Gayu. 😉

Aur wo man ki baat jaan lena.

Fir wo weekend issue ka atyachar.

Aur Sona ka bachpane k sath Dev ko uthana.

Aur Dev. In vest.

Maar daala re tune to.

Fir aayi pagal Natasha.

Ab main iska murder karu kya.

Dev aisa mat karo.

Aise baat kyu ki.

Chalo ab bhaagna padega next chappy k liye.

Jaldi sab kuch janna hai mujhe.

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#1989

Commenting for Chapter-2.

Group studies is one of the best thing we enjoy in that phase of our life. M really glad n grateful to U to give it a tiny miny space here.

So Sona detective ne pata laga liya aur evidence bhi rakh liya. Aur confirm bhi kiya Dev kaha hai.

Dev ka FB. Mujhe to rona aur gussa dono aaya.

Yaar this Natasha is too much.

Dev ne Sona pe bomb foda aur agle din support k liye bulaya.

Aur Sona ne bilkul sahi kaha.

Issue ab gussa dila rahi hai.

Aur Jay Papa ache lag rahe hai. He has sooo much trust on Sona. N understands her too. Also wishes her to b his DIL.

Chalo ab dukhi Dev ka kya haal hota hai.

Janne k liye ab next chapter read karne bhaagti hoon.

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#1990

Commenting for Chapter-3.

Oh God. Ye kya panga ho gaya re Baba.

Ab is Nats ka nut bolt tight karo.

Aur Dev. Iska to Kuch na hoga.

Mr. Pagal Dixit. .

Doesn't he know 20 yrs n 1 yr mein kya difference hai.

Chalo saalo ka calculation choro, but he can atleast trust Sona blindly kyu ki use pata hai Sona won't let him down or hurt him.

She will always protect him n stay by his side.

Aur ye kya aisi ladkiyan kabse webseries karne lagi.

Agar aisi ladkiyan karne lage to fir web series na rahe wo to fir kuch aur hi ban jaye.

Hope U understood what I meant.

Oh Dev such a hurry babby.

Ek week mein shaadi karni hai Janab ko.

I wish Natasha shaadi k din hi kuch aisa kare jisse uski saari asliyat bahar aa jaye.

Aur in logo ko Sona ka importance, POV aur pyar dikhe. .

Can't wait for reading the next chappy.

Lemme run to see the next upcoming tamasha.

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