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Posted: 8 years ago

#2001

Originally posted by: Chandniyati

Dear ab to ye love word bhi kam lagta hai.
Wish isko aamne samne milke bata paati.

M proud of U my Jaan.
Ki aap samajh gaye.
Aur haan sorry I forgot.
Belated Chand Mubarak. Eid Mubarak.
Missing U in the team.
When will U get back. ??

Aww...what should I say😳 huggieezzz dii🤗

Haha..belated eid mubarak...

I will tell uh personally😊

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#2002

Originally posted by: coolmeet
20th chap ki page pe hai???

It has turned to a bhool bhulaaiyaa now. Khud dhoondhna padega. 😆

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#2003

Commenting for Chapter-10.

So Mr. Rude is back to rudeness n taunting.

N Sona so much calm n understanding.

FB was really best to console her n give her support n strength.

But equally difficult to experience, behave n practically face it.

But then let's see how does it unfold further.

N how does it come out.

So they didn't talk the whole long way.. Good that Sona got saved from taunts.

But then Dev is back to his Mr. Rude. He did behave stupidly. N wait did I read him kissing her cheeks. OMG. OMG.

Dev U r mad man.

Ye pagal hai kya Aise kapde diye. Oh issue.

Aur Sona ne pehen liye.

BAAPRE.

Dev ko to bada zhatka laga.

Aur Sona God. So much of embarrassment.

Aur Dev ka over possessive behavior.

Actually the fact is wo nahi chahta tha coz he cares for her.

N hence he couldn't take this exposing look of hers.

So he reacted to it in this way so that he doesn't have to reveal his uneasiness n uncomfortable situation by seeing Sona around like this n witnessing other mens ogling at his Sona with such an eye.

Oh God. Is issue ka siyyappa ko aappaa khone k jaisa hai.

Ab isko reveal kar do. It's unbearable with this dress of Sona.

Chalo me bhaagi for next update.

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#2004

Commenting for Chapter-11.

Wwuuuhhhooo wwuuuhhhooo.

Booommm booommm

Shaaakkkaaalllaaakkkaaa

.N here m dancing n dancing.

So finally kya confrontation hua.

Dono ne full on bola.

Par fir bhi dono ko kuch pata hi nahi chala.

Bas they r busy with their blame game.

Aur fir bold step liya Dev ne.

Aur I loved Dev's rolling sleeves ka tadka.

Aur Sona ne kya darr bhaga k baat ki.

Aur Dev got more ignited with his ragging anger.

Aur fir ho gaya Natasha ka khulaasaa.

Aur Dev broke so much yaar.

N he did realize it sooo much that he's ready to wait for all his life.

N his return n delima was so emotional.

N Sona. OMG OMG.

She's gone through such a trauma.

Gosh too much of roller coaster in this chapter.

N the way he rushed to take back her home.

N did not miss to enquire abt that hotel guy.

N the way he took him to get him to his office.

Gosh hatts off to Ur Dev Gayu.

Chalo yaar aur bhi likhna tha comment mein but m too much excited for reading the next update.

So m running. Bye bye.

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#2005

Commenting for Chapter-12.

Wow. Ab to har update pe aisa lagta hai this is the best.

Par next update mein bhi I m forced to say this is the best.

Start mein hi seat belt haan.

N Sona is tooo much in trauma.

Nahi dekha jata Sona ko aisa.

She's soo much into the situation.

See he misses his Sona n her chirp sooo much.

N soo much care he's taking now.

Awww. So caring of him to order food in flight.

Aur she slept he carried her. Made her sleep n then he handled the situation with Jay n Issue.

He went to office for that boy.

N he did make him work in the most realising way.

Oh God. Sona being violent. N Issue n Keechu Bhaiya scared. They locked her in the room. 😲

N Dev rushing n straight Infront of Sona.

Bravo Man. He calmed Sona in such a heart touching way.

N she understood as well.

He promised not to b with her in the same room as well.

He's really giving her the needed time b space for her to feel better n easy.

Aur fir to dhamaka hua.

Dev-Issue confrontation.

OMG they both spoke it all.

Even abt the raaz.

So Neha did leave the world by the game played by destiny n fate. But Issue always thought it to b Sona. Where as she was totally innocent n unknown to the hatred developed in Issue. But Dev understood the whole mater n cleared it on right time.

He did clear the consequences n result of her hatred n the damage as well. M really worried for Sona.

N I really hope she doesn't go to her home.

Each update is getting more interesting. M not able to resist myself from continuation.

Chalo now m not gonna take much time n will run to enjoy the next shock in next update. 😆

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#2006

Commenting for Chapter-13.

Ab in splits.

Main hasu ya roo loon.

But it's the truth of Dev's life.

Crore Pati hoke bhi Pati ko crore kaam nahi aaye.

Garden mein Pati ne bitayi ye apni dusri raat.

Crore rupay ya credit card bhi kaam na aaya.

(ROFLING emoji at the end of every sentence above.)

Cockroach. N lizard hamesha romance ka tadka laate hai.

Aur yaha to tashan wala romance aa gaya. 😉

Aur fir suitcase Bhar k aansu.

Sona ne to sirf ek suitcase uthai.

Par humne to suitcases Bhar bahar k aansu bahaye.

Yaar bohot rona aaya.

I really never wished for their separation.

Mujhe aage k update mein laga hi tha this is on my way.

But maine benefit of doubt de diya.

Par mera dar sahi nikla.

Nikal gayi Sona Dev k ghar se.

Par hope wo jab wapas aaye wo Dev ka nahi apna Ghar samajh k aaye.

Yaar Dev k sath sath ye judaayi humse na dekhi gayi.

Kya tu dono ko sath rakh kar sab Kuch solve nahi kar sakti thi.

M feeling very bad for Sona as well.

Papa hote hue she's feeling jaise Papa nahi hai.

Aur Dev is also too much guilty.

Issue was genuine n good in this update. .Hope she remains same if not getting better.

Gayu plz inhe alag na kar.

Mujhe isme bahot rulaya tune.

So maine apna comment short kar diya.

Baki ka comment mere aansuoon k sath beh gaya.

But really awesome n best update this was.

Chalo. M running for next shock.

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#2007

Originally posted by: Chandniyati
Commenting for Chapter-13.

Ab I m in splits.
Main hasu ya roo loon.
But it's the truth of Dev's life.
Crore Pati hoke bhi Pati ko crore kaam nahi aaye.
Garden mein Pati ne bitayi ye apni dusri raat.
Crore rupay ya credit card bhi kaam na aaya.
(ROFLING emoji at the end of every sentence above.)

Cockroach. N lizard hamesha romance ka tadka laate hai.
Aur yaha to tashan wala romance aa gaya. 😉

Aur fir suitcase Bhar k aansu.
Sona ne to sirf ek suitcase uthai.
Par humne to suitcases Bhar bahar k aansu bahaye.
Yaar bohot rona aaya.

I really never wished for their separation.
Mujhe aage k update mein laga hi tha this is on my way.
But maine benefit of doubt de diya.
Par mera dar sahi nikla.
Nikal gayi Sona Dev k ghar se.

Par hope wo jab wapas aaye wo Dev ka nahi apna Ghar samajh k aaye.
Yaar Dev k sath sath ye judaayi humse na dekhi gayi.
Kya tu dono ko sath rakh kar sab Kuch solve nahi kar sakti thi.
M feeling very bad for Sona as well.
Papa hote hue she's feeling jaise Papa nahi hai.
Aur Dev is also too much guilty.

Issue was genuine n good in this update. .Hope she remains same if not getting better.

Gayu plz inhe alag na kar.

Mujhe isme bahot rulaya tune.
So maine apna comment short kar diya.
Baki ka comment mere aansuoon k sath beh gaya.
But really awesome n best update this was.

Chalo. M running for next shock.

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#2008

Commenting for Chapter-14.

Wwowowww.

Start mein hi morning shock de diye re.

Main to mar gayi re.

Dev aa gaya re.

Ghar Jamai ban gaya re.

Mujhe jo chahiye tha mil gaya re.

Oops Dev ab doodh wala lag gaya re.

N their talk is full on tashan wale.

Why is Sona sooo much strong still.

Pighlao use. 😉

Manao use. 😉

She accepted herself as his wife, he said chalo dono naha lete hai. 😳

Moti ho jayegi to Dev Sona ko kuch nahi kahega Bun-Chi promise.

Awww he sat on his knees n Sona Abhi bhi maaf nahi kar rahi.

Wo sab kuch karne k liye taiyaar hai except one thing.

N I guess U must have known that thing. I wish he does that.

Sone ne use pehle couch par sone k liye kaha. Fir apne sath bed pe. Not bad. Sona is really still caring for his Bunny.

Eeeiiissswhhh

Subah subah shirtless Dev. 😳

N their convo.

Killer that boss.

Ab tune poocha tha na ye update kaisa hai.

To ye update bakwaas nahi bohot bohot zyada bakwaas tha. 😳

Aur comment k sath sath mujhe kuch fenkna hai. Chalega.

Hari Mirchi.

Chalo before U come to hit me lemme bhaahaambhaag for reading the next chappy. 😉

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#2009

Commenting for Chapter-15.

Awww. Marriage k baad k side effects start ho gaye hai. 😉

Aur Janab Sahab ph pe busy hone ki acting karte aaye.

Piggy bank k savings se watch gift ki hai uske cheeku ne to pyari to hogi hi. Aur she cried for 3 days. Sona Sona Sona Sona.

Couch pe so kar peeth dard. Aur kahani bhi Kya banai hai Dev ne. Aur Tina all set to ask him. Fasne se Bach gaya Banda. Warna aur Q aate rehte.

Sona ki gaali aur jalan badi door tak aayi par Dev k paas walo k bohot paas. 😉

Dev has cracked up the reason of Tina getting hurt. 🤣

Oops Sona ka result miss kiya abt to Bunny ki maut pakki.

Aur Sona ne kya jawab diya hai boss. Aur then she did really the progression in her thoughts n feelings. Aur fir she wanted to scold her Bunny.

Lo Ji pahoch gayi Madam official aur samna hua Dev k sath Tina ka. So Sona chup gayi aur detective mode on.

Aur Asha ko jhoot bola as she got late as she was busy in tracking Dev in his own official. Wese Sach hi kaha tha. Par details nahi di na.

Yaar too much interesting updates ahead.

Can't wait for reading the next one.

M becoming greedy.

Lemme get ready n set for the next shock on my way.

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#2010

Commenting for Chapter-16.

So she's excited to make n feed the sweet punishment for Dev for not taking care abt her result.

Aasha Maa wo zinmedaar to hui hai par apne bunny to punish karne. Revenge Lene.

Maa ko samjha bhi diya k job ka secret secret hi rakhe.

Aur Maa ho to aisi, Asha jaisi.

Oh so Mr. Flirty Dixit ko khana khane k baad kuch meetha khana hai. 😉 😳

Kash ab Gayu bhi jaise Dev ko meetha khana hai wesi meethi update dena shuru kar de. 😉 😳

Sona ne khila diya re. Dev ne kha bhi liya re.

Meetha khane se Dev ka hua bura haal.

Dev ka haal behaal.

Aur Sona ko hua pachtava. Hona bhi chahiye na.

Aur ye lo saari baat clear. Sona se zyada uske result k baare mein Dev ko pata tha. Ufff Sona. Apne Bunny ko pehchano. Galatfemi na paloo.

So morning mein hi ye dono close aate aate door chale jaate hai. But they have started feeling for eachother that way.

Aur ye lo. Dono office pahoch gaye. Sona all set for her detective giri.

Dev wo file Ghar na le jao. M sure koi na koi golmal karegi hamari detective Madam.

Bas hope k Gayu aisa na hone de.

Na hone dena re Gayu.

Tina ka FB bada mazedaar tha. Uska short IV ho gaya. 🤣

Lagta hai ye to shuruwat hui hai. Aage aage Tina ko aur IV dene padenge.

Aur Dev ne to interesting bol diya aur busy ho gaya.

Oops ab kya hoga.

M going to receive the next shock my way. So next update k liye bye.

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