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simplesweety1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1771

omg! yaaar what a chapter! i loved it! THIS WAS MINDBLOWINGLY - FANTASTICALLY - FANTABULOUSLY AWESOME! JABH MUJE KOI BHI CHAPTER ACHHA LAGTA HAI I WRITE IN CAPITAL LETTERS AND THIS WAS FREAKING DAMN AWESOME! I CAN'T STOP PRAISING YOUR WRITING SKILLS GIRL! LOVED IT YAAAR! YOU'VE LEFT ME FLUSHED! UPDATE SOON! I CAN'T WAIT NOW GAYUUU DIDIDIDIIDIDIDIDIID!

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Fan_forums12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1772

Nice chapter 👏

Thanks for pm 😊

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Razzy03

@Razzy03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1773

Ekdam fadu update. Can't wait for next update. U have an amazing skill of writing.
Keep the good work
👏
Loved it

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1774

there are chances sona wont even remember her first kiss 😆
A beautiful movement in d story
amazing part
plz update soon
thanks for pm

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Anushka

@LoveAnushka

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1775

No words Gayu Di

The hit chapter of this FF it is!

Last part, Dev's dialogue! Brought all dreams to life & true!

The kiss, I think was not full of lust! It was too secure the love says & future...😳

Literally waiting for next day when Dev & Sona would get close & get to know more about each other...😉😊

Really, last line of this update says all...

A new beginning indeed!😃

Loved this update...

I think iske baad sab ki doubts clear ho jaayegi even Tina's when he will declare Sonakshi is his wife only...

Loved the reply Dev gave to Nats, but Sona ko alcoholic nahi hona chaiye tha, or else who bhi uske muh par maarti par koi bach nikali, saali!😡

I hope ab sab accha ho inn dono ke saath...

Sona already in Love, Dev now in love! Both In love, That akes DevAkshi Lovestory!😳

Yayyy!!!😆

Jaate jaate ek hi cheez mangugi, doge?

Update soon!😆

Love,

Anushka

Edited by LoveAnushka - 8 years ago

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moni160282

@moni160282

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1776

Ohh wow. That was awesome update. Really waiting for sonas reaction . Plz update tomm. Can't wait.

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PY18

@PY18

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1777

Dev realisation omg omg omg isn't this the most perfect chapter 🤪 Dev trying to figure6out their relationship & then all his love pouring on her in just one kiss. I laaauved it. Ty fr the amazing update. Do update the morning scene soon. Hope Sona doesn't remember it lol

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ketaki narkhede

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1778

Di that was a superb chapter thank god it's not a dream nahin to yeh dreams dekh dekh ke to hum pagal ho Gaye the😕

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Kuku_92

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1779

Hey gayatri di...😊

Wonderful chapter...Mazaa agya isse pdhkr .

1. Dev's self introspection was very nicely written.

2. Yeaaahhh...😃 thanku for fulfilling my wish of giving sona a sexy n hot saree... Dev just can't stop himself from drooling her..😉😳

3. Nat's Ka chapter bhi apne bahut achhe se close kiya hai. I really liked how Dev didn't send her to jail becoz after all due to her only he found his true soulmate...

4. Our talli sona 😆 Jo cheez wo hosh mein kbhi ni bol skti wo cheeze usne Nashe mein bol di apne handsome hubby ko..

5. Finally , our devakshi's first kiss n Dev's cuddling her in his arms.

Next morning will be truelly a new beginning of their life n i hope it would be a positive one only...😊

Waiting for your next update

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Sneha

@Rhy2015

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1780

Awww...
Blushing 😳
You've done a wonderful job Gaiyaa...
Wat an explanation of their firts kiss... 😳
Finally, they both are falling for each other n facade of just friends is coming off... 😛

Natasha the witch, kabhi Nahi sudhregi but m happy that Dev has shown her real place 😡

Btw pink saree was baby pink our dark 😆 , just curious to know...

Thanks for dedicating this part to me 😛
Btw vodka n wine mey actual difference mujhe Bhi Nahi pata 😆 except for the alcohol level... 😆
Waiting for the next update...jaldi karna

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