Devakshi SS: Realisations on V-Day! #May 8 *Updated Part 6 on Pg 37* - Page 22

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: moonlight3094


Thank u so much samzz😊
Milenge milenge.. bas to do wait karona😆

Pata hai ki sabr ka phal meetha hota hai par itna wait main apne exam results ke liye bhi nahi kar rahi thi 😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rahulvats12

Nice update...

Keep continue and make it soon


Thank u rahul😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali333

Of course I m loving it.
Tabhi to itni curiosity hai padhne ke liye😊


aww am glad😳
abhi update karti hu😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Samzz

Pata hai ki sabr ka phal meetha hota hai par itna wait main apne exam results ke liye bhi nahi kar rahi thi 😆😆


haha arre yr, mei bhi ek ladki...Tareef karke, itna bhi blush mat karwao mujhe 😳😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

Thanks for the responses :) Am i going too fast in updating? 😆


Here it goes..


PART - 5


At the Ball,


As soon as Sonakshi entered the ball, her eye started to search for that one person i.e Dev. She just wished to meet him once.


Elena noticed her and asked: What's the matter? Whom are you searching for?



Sonakshi(Stammered):
Uhh..Nobody just looking around how the decorations has been done(She said cooly to asusual hide the awkwardness)


Elena got confused but was sure that Sonakshi was searching for someone but doesn't who's that.


Both the girls turned around, when they heard some murmurs around the party hall. They were amused with the praisings and many were impressed with Sonakshi's beauty in red and Elena in orange.


Vicky too noticed them and spoke to himself: Oh god! Am I punishing Dev, by not letting him in to meet Sonakshi?


He noticed Elena aswell and his breathe got struck in his throat. He felt an unknown feeling for the first time. He always had a soft heart for elena, but never considered the feeling. He chucked at his thoughts most of the time.


Elena's heart was jumping in joy witnessing the scene of ppl complimentinh them. Something she wished for long time.


Elena: Oh my god! Am I dreaming? Thankeww god!


~~~


Few Girls at the ball are throwing angry glares at sonakshi. It's not a new thing. First they were jealous that their Heart throb Dev spends almost of his each 24hrs with his bestie called Sonakshi. And now they are angry, coz they think that she's nowadays receiving extra special attention from Dev! :P But only thing is Sonakshi didn't know any of these.


Laughing at the scenerio where girls giving Sonakshi the death warning through their eyes, Vicky so badly wanted to explain the situation happening inside but stopped himself and decided to wait for the time to pass quickly .


~~~


Bunty is the Host for the ball. He announced the rules abt his new add-on event 'Couple Dance' and asked everyone to get ready as its gonna start in few mins.


Hearing it, Sonakshi again started to search for Dev as she wanted to dance with him but he is no where to be seen. One reason, she trusts him too much with her life that she couldn't give the same amount of trust on anyother guy. Another is, it's her new habit of feelings making her go weak and wants to be always around him, which She understood when she couldn't survive a day properly without him.


On the other hand, Elena is receiving lots of hands to accompany her to the dance floor. But she refused them all, as she doesn't wanna go to the dance floor without finding a pair for sonakshi and decided to wait for her. Also she knows her sister very well, that Sonakshi came only for her sake and is not particularly interested in the V-Night Ball. She deeply noted Sonakshi's eyes and confirmed she is searching for someone.


When she was abt to ask Sona, Vicky dragged her away to a corner, only to collide with her standing face-to-face with her arms in his hands. Elena resisted at first, but when she realised her position with vicky she got lost in his eyes. They were standing as if discovering the ocean of emotions into eachother's eyes. Vicky was the first to come into reality and left her arms. He decided to tell about the duo Devakshi being in love and it's his plan to keep Dev away from Sonakshi, so she could realise her true feelings.


Vicky: Elena I need to tell you something important.


Elena(uninterested): Now don't tell me, you wanna ask me for a dance by pulling me over here.


Vicky(rolling eyes): Haha don't be silly and stop dreaming. Who would ask a boring stylist queen for a dance!


Elena(angrily smirking): How dare you? And yeah, who would ask a Bookworm to be a dance partner. Forget abt dancing Mister.


Vicky's anger raised but he calmed himself down, coming straight into the matter.


Vicky: Listen i am here to talk to u abt our cousins-cum-friends, Dev and Sonakshi.


Elena(getting alert): Dev and Sona..? What's abt them?


Vicky: Can't u see Sonakshi's looking disturbed eversince this morning?


Elena(Nodding): You and I've been trying to figure out what's wrong with her.. bu..


Vicky(Cutting her in between): She's in love with Dev.


Elena(Shocked at her own assumption coming true): WHAT?


Vicky: Yes. Dev loves Sonakshi a lot and Sonakshi also started liking him, but is yet to realise.


Elena(Holding her head): Oh god! I don't understand a single thing. I had a doubt abt this earlier, but I thought it was just my assumption. hey bhagwaan!


Vicky explained everything that happened, since their high school. He also explained how much he saw Sonakshi missing Dev's presence and abt the game plan of Rose day, Choco Teddy day, and also the present situation.


Elena was in total shock, listening to every tiny detail. She neither moved nor tried to open her mouth, but stood still with eyes wide open.


Just then, the light dimmed off for the dance, indicating everyone to be ready. They turned around to see Sonakshi standing looking towards the flash at the entrance of the hall.


~~~


Sonakshi was searching for Dev. she turned around slowly, when the wind blew all over her face and hair. She immediately recognised his presence. She looked towards the flash light, Dev walked in slowly. He stood in his tracks, when he saw HIS Khargosh in his favourite colour Red. He got mesmerized by her angelic face and muttered, 'Beautiful'. Sonakshi's lip curved into a smile, when she met his eyes for the first time in this day. She tried to speak to him through her eyes.


The moment had paused for her, as lots of different traces of unknown emotions started curbing in her.

A day without him.

A day she felt lifeless.

A day without his cute antics.

A day without their silly fights.

A day without his smiling charming face.

A day without hearing a single word from his mouth.

A day that she missed being called cutely by her favourite nick name 'Khargosh'.

A day without whom, she felt utter empty in her life.

A day she felt too much of jealousy, when others complimented him.

A day she felt over-possessive of, when Elena drooled over him.

Above all, A day without her best part of life. A lot had happened in a single day.She felt too overwhelming just by seeing him infront of her after a longgg day, well and healthy.


Dev felt the same way, nothing in less or more. Looking into her eyes and he could clearly read her than before. Tonight, he felt a different wave passing between them. He could see from her smile that she missed him and recollected Vicky saying about Sonakshi's mood the whole day. Both stared at eachother with emotions like a never ending waterfalls. Slowly, Dev went straight towards sonakshi without disturbing his eye contact with her, nver minding where they are and who they are surrounded with. To them, It was the Earth stopped spinning moment except for eachother. Once he was too close to her, lended his hand for sonakshi asking her indirectly for the couple dance. Sonakshi was too lost to even come out from smiling all the way and raised her hand to accept his offer to dance, When...


~~~


P.S.Oops. Evil me. That's cliffhanger😆 Thanks for reading guys😊 i'd be glad, if u drop ur responses.. chahe kuch bhi kyu na ho! 😆would they dance? or is it their dream? 😉

Edited by moonlight3094 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
that's not fair dear... This suspense is killing me...
Pls Dnt do this.
Anyways it was really too good and Pls continue...
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Posted: 8 years ago
What, When.. 😕
Aise kaun chodta hai. :(
Vaise a very nice update. Loved it. :)

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Posted: 8 years ago
Evil incarnate😡😭 What happened then? Nice update dear.😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww..how could you ...nice one dear...I hate cliffhanger endings ... 😭

Why do I feel its a dream...and someone else will be his dance partner to make her JJJ???!!

Anyways...Will wait eagerly for the next part ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
dev n sona r missing each other ..
again waiting for dev's confession
update soon
thanks for pm

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