Devakshi TS: The Melting Hearts! #Feb 17 *Updated Part 2 on pg 6*

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys, this is my first OS on Devakshi, hope u like it! :)

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After Dev met suhana at school and became her new friend, many things kept his mind occupied the whole day. He couldn't concentrate on anything and was totally broken yet again thinking abt his fate., if sona and him haven't separated they would now have a pyaari tiny sona!

He shielded himself with these thoughts. He took his bike and drove off to find a peaceful place where he can be alone from the world. Unfortunately he has to anyway end up in the place, where he belongs which no more gave him happiness.

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At office,

Sona was working in her cabin after dropping soha to school. She was working on something without even looking up. She kept herself so busy that she wanted to divert her messed thoughts of ishwari and her conversation. In between, without her own knowledge she looked into Dev's cabin to atleast get a glimpse of him! To her disappointment, dev wasn't present in his cabin. She looked at her watch to find its 11am in the morning and still he didn't show up!

'Dev abhi tak kyu nahi aaya?', she realised what she's thinking and composed herself just to say,
'Sona, tumi ekdam boka! Where is ur concentration? Kaam PE dyaan do! Uff', she scolded her over smart mind.

To her astonishment, she couldn't control but to call Mita and enquire abt dev's absence. Mita answered that she doesn't know abt him but his employess are engaged busily into their work! Sona thanked Mita and asked her to go.

'Sona beti, dev ho ya na ho office par, tum APNA kaam karo. Dare to even think abt him. it's been 7 yrs, u didn't want to meet him then, now why are u so desperate to get a glimpse! Urgg.. sona work!!' ,She complained to herself for not able to bear his absence, after it became her habit of working under the same roof.

After a while,
'Good Noon sir', Sona heard dev's employees greeting someone and there she saw him, dev! He nodded at his employees with a sarcastic smile at 'Good' of Good noon and entered his cabin without showing his pain., Which wasn't noticed my sona.

Closing her eyes, She let out a deep breath in relief resting her head on her bossy chair. All she wanted was to just see his face, so she can peacefully concentrate on work. Her love for him never reduced. After all he's her first love, She smiled and engaged herself into her files.

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Dev returned to his office and entered his cabin only to find himself back to the place where he started to build his empire for his dixit family, which was his only responsibility before sona came in his life. She brought colour to his life but that didn't stay as his happiness for too long.

Now his inner feelings has started to defeat him after meeting the lil girl, he wanted someone to himself. He wanted some tiny lil buddy, who he can call as HIS. For whom, he can be a father. A proud father.

Golu had always filled the place as his lil buddy, but he always wanted a girl baby. Every time he sees golu, he melts. But at the end of the day, he realises he isn't his biological father before going to bed. He wanted to cherish this responsibility of his, to be a biological father, to his own kids. He regretted that night for letting sona go, otherwise he would now have a happy family just as golu pointed jatin suha sona as happy family.

His heart is already broken seeing sona moving on in her life and above all, now he is missing like hell to be a father. To be called dad. His eyes started to well up. He couldn't concentrate on anything. His eyes rose up across his cabin, only to find sona drowned in her work. He didn't know when she became his habit once again.

Her angelic face, her position in the industry now to match him in every aspect, her hardwork and her success. All these made him feel proud of her. After all, she is his first love. 'My sona'., He smiled through his tears, one side feeling empty to be a dad. He badly wished sona and him never parted ways!

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Seems like sona could hear him talking to his heart, as the wind blew, she lifted her eyes up her files only to have an eye contact with dev. Their eyes forgot to blink. Their eyes spoke tonnes of unspoken words. Their Smile crept without their own knowledge. Once again, Their hearts melted for eachother.

Eventhough they wanted to maintain a distance between them, time and destiny plays it's own game. Though the truth abt suhana is yet to be revealed to dev, now at this moment both filled the voids of their 7years absence! :)

P.S.Thank you for reading! :) Pls let me know how was my first os in comments.

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ashlyn12 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful! It is very good👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
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it's really beautiful
they are still longing for each other
but they fear to voice it out
and dev craves to be called as Dad
aww
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very well written.
They long for each other and hesitate to accept.
Dev's longing for his own child is justified.
Hope he enjoys Shana's company after he comes to know of her true identity.
Is there a second part?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Its beautiful.
Loved it.
Can you please continue it. Would love to see Devakshi talking like normal human beings. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome OS...Do write more often
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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautiful os
i feel so sad for dev
he is desperate to become a dad
and no matter how many years it has been
they still love each other the same
and u have penned it down amazingly
do write more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful OS, loved it. I just loved how sona was yearning for his one look. Do write more, can u continue it. I hope in serial also this scene is shown, sona waiting 4 his one look n vice versa in office.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely OS😃
Sona longed for Dev's one look!😳
And Dev-how he wanted to have a li'l princess or prince of his own!😉
I hope they sth of this sort in the show as well!😊
Pls do write more!😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashlyn12

Beautiful! It is very good👍🏼

Thanks a lot :)

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