Devakshi TS: The Melting Hearts! #Feb 17 *Updated Part 2 on pg 6* - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Perfect Os..
Beautifully written 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rahulvats12

Perfect Os..

Beautifully written 👏


Thank u so much :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: 27JAAN

Beautiful OS

Keep writing dear


Thank u so much! :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations On Your First OS

Dev not only misses his first love Sonakshi and wishes if they were still together then they would have a little daughter he loves Golu but he also wishes to be a father while missing out on fatherhood and its happiness Sona misses seeing Dev at the office as both have become addicted to each other

please do write more stories
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jade0001

Congratulations On Your First OS

Dev not only misses his first love Sonakshi and wishes if they were still together then they would have a little daughter he loves Golu but he also wishes to be a father while missing out on fatherhood and its happiness Sona misses seeing Dev at the office as both have become addicted to each other

please do write more stories


Thank u so much! :)
Am glad :)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: raji91

beautiful

well written
thanks for pm


Thank u so much!:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful piece!👏👏
Very emotional... and Dev's longing for both, mother and daughter was beautifully portrayed.
Loved Sonakshi's constant concern for him was
Write more.

Love Sharmi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: raji91

beautiful

well written
thanks for pm


Thank u so much! :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: lucky_princess

Beautiful piece!👏👏
Very emotional... and Dev's longing for both, mother and daughter was beautifully portrayed.
Loved Sonakshi's constant concern for him was
Write more.

Love Sharmi


Thank u so much! :)
Means a lot! :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
Lovely!!
Emotions clearly displayed for dev!
Beautiful os!

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