Devakshi TS: The Melting Hearts! #Feb 17 *Updated Part 2 on pg 6* - Page 2

Originally posted by: Devakshilover

it's really beautiful
they are still longing for each other
but they fear to voice it out
and dev craves to be called as Dad
aww

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

Very well written.

They long for each other and hesitate to accept.

Dev's longing for his own child is justified.

Hope he enjoys Shana's company after he comes to know of her true identity.

Is there a second part?

Originally posted by: TAMOGHNAD11

Great one

Originally posted by: cscs

Its beautiful.

Loved it.

Can you please continue it. Would love to see Devakshi talking like normal human beings. :)

Originally posted by: sa1234B

Awesome OS...Do write more often

Originally posted by: Sharica

Beautiful OS...pls write more

Originally posted by: Soumya21ag

beautiful os

i feel so sad for dev

he is desperate to become a dad

and no matter how many years it has been

they still love each other the same

and u have penned it down amazingly

do write more

Originally posted by: shri123

Beautiful OS, loved it. I just loved how sona was yearning for his one look. Do write more, can u continue it. I hope in serial also this scene is shown, sona waiting 4 his one look n vice versa in office.

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona

Lovely OS😃

Sona longed for Dev's one look!😳

And Dev-how he wanted to have a li'l princess or prince of his own!😉

I hope they sth of this sort in the show as well!😊

Pls do write more!😛

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

Beautiful