SS - Can we talk? Part 6 pg 84 Feb 14 - Page 48

Originally posted by: moonlight3094

Awesome story!

Fabulous writing!!!

Loved each and everything abt it!

Got goosebumps reading the parts of dev and suhana!! They r so cute and their inner feelings are beautiful described. The last line 'mein kya aapko papa keh sakhti hoon' literally made my heart so welled up!! Great one.

Being new to kuch rang, ur story is the first on this forum that am reading and it totally made me awww!! :D

keep rocking dears!!

Originally posted by: gmgi

Hi, this reminded me of you two😆

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

Dear Su and Divya!

Jayasree ji!!

I could not post a comment earlier as I did not know what to say!

I understood that and that is why I didn't ask again for your feedback. But it still feels great seeing your comments here. So a very special

I read the fourth chapter atleast 15 times in these3 days and everytime I was shedding tears unknowingly.

In all this I really feel sorry for Dev.He has a family full of selfish people including mamaji.He loved Sonakshi but could not fully support or orotect her from his people.

Yes. Art of balancing is something men are rarely good at and Dev is exceptionally bad.

People say that when we have no knowledge of something or somebody's existance , the absence of it does not pain us.

Here Dev came to know that he has a daughter but he is confused as he totally missed her childhood

And it hadn't been his fault. That was sad. Although I would say he is not completely blameless. His words - you would have been a bad mother - would have haunted Sonakshi if at any point of time had she contemplated informing him.

What we naturally know by observing our children and their moods and likes and dislikes he has to contemplate.

Sonakshi is a level headed mother and gave her daughter tge freedom to decide.Soha as far as I could understand is eager to meet her father but worried about her mother's reaction.

You got that correct. She has always been curious about her father. In the first episode post leap she asked her mamma - papa ko kya mila?

You both have blended your parts nicely and I loved Dev's tiny miny Khargosh.

Me too

The final sentence of Soha to Dev whether she can call him PAPA is haunting me.

It is finally the children who suffer when they have single parents.

Let me see if we can turn that haunting into a sweet melody in the upcoming parts.

The siggyis beautiful. Saanson ko jeene ka sahara mil gaya.

Zindagi ka pata dobara mil gaya.

Well said dearies.

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Originally posted by: Chandniyati

Part - 3.

OMG I had tears flowing constantly reading this part...U have given justice to all the three characters...

But my heart went out almost bleed for Dev n Suhana...

N Suhana without any fault n the battle between elders lost a very incredible relation those 6 yrs...

Dev really sandwiched between mom n Sona.

I loved that Tulsi eg.. of remaining out n not included inside... Though it is pure n worshipped...N is used for Pooja...

That was actually taken from the show. Ishwari's conversation with GKB during those initial episodes.

N also that Ishwari got his son... Sona got his daughter... What did he get... So true...

Take a bow both of U...

U both have left many of Us speechless...

Hats off to Ur way of putting forward such sensible matter...In simple yet impressive form... Ur have drawn attention of Dev's situation n feelings...

He has lived a life without a father n he knows how it feels... Also he has seen his mom bringing up them without a husband... How terrific it would have been... Who else can know other than he himself... His daughter had faced a life without a father...

So subtle yet impactful narration...

Now let me stop... But I have no words to describe how U both have done... Plz accept my appreciation without heavy words...

Mere shabd bahot chote hai... Aap k is tohfe k liye...

Chandni. Humbled and touched that you could connect and enjoy this attempt of ours.