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Suvika.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#461

Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone

Yaa! Actually school mein this term we have creative writing. I have the best examples here, if only they'd teach me some :')

Oh boy!! But I am no literature student. Not sure how I can be of help to you. Most of what I write, I try to envision the scene before me and then try to bring that scene to life on paper...or in this case..word doc.

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Zaya.hp

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Posted: 8 years ago

#462

Do you know how good this is! I feel so relieved to read such meaningful things. I've read all the parts and both the writers are amazing! Thanks for riting this.

And the first part was so gorgeous, I saved it and read it out to everyone I knew. And so was the second part.

Edited by Zaya.hp - 8 years ago

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Suvika.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#463

Originally posted by: Zaya.hp
Do you know how good this is! I feel so relieved to read such meaningful things. I've read all the parts and both the writers are amazing! Thanks for riting this.

And the first part was so gorgeous, I saved it and read it out to everyone I knew. And so was the second part.

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Danseuse

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Posted: 8 years ago

#464

Originally posted by: Suvika.

😉

I meant the OS/SS forum. 😃 Am not into these at all, due to lack of time. Checked this out, as no of views was outstanding and then read your name! 😃 So, it's all the writers freewill and flow of pen. Fiction at its best. Great. Keep writing. Kudos to you and Divya.

-Rekha

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Soumya21ag

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Posted: 8 years ago

#465

this os is just amazing👏

read all the parts in one go

u have written it from everyones point of view and beautifully described everybody emotions

could u pls pm me for further updates

lekin sabse pehle ek baat bataao ki ite cute emojis mile kahaan se😆

ps-i have asked this question on your other post as well but u didn't reply😭😭

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Suvika.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#466

Originally posted by: Soumya21ag
this os is just amazing👏
read all the parts in one go
u have written it from everyones point of view and beautifully described everybody emotions
could u pls pm me for further updates

Thank you Soumya and sure, will PM you. 😃
lekin sabse pehle ek baat bataao ki ite cute emojis mile kahaan se😆
ps-i have asked this question on your other post as well but u didn't reply😭😭

Sorry. I had meant to. But slipped my mind. Here you go.

http://www.sherv.net/emoticons.html

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Anjali Sharma

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Posted: 8 years ago

#467

Firstly thank u so much suvika di and divya di for writing this part😃😃

U both r just amazing...

So beautifully u write this whole os

U penned down dev's emotions so brilliantly

How dev was yearning to see, touch ,play , talk with his daughter

And that office scene was lovely

Please do write more stories😃

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Soumya21ag

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Posted: 8 years ago

#468

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Thank u

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Moon light

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Posted: 8 years ago

#469

Awesome story!

Fabulous writing!!!

Loved each and everything abt it!

Got goosebumps reading the parts of dev and suhana!! They r so cute and their inner feelings are beautiful described. The last line 'mein kya aapko papa keh sakhti hoon' literally made my heart so welled up!! Great one.

Being new to kuch rang, ur story is the first on this forum that am reading and it totally made me awww!! :D

keep rocking dears!!

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Suvika.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#470

Originally posted by: Anjali333
Firstly thank u so much suvika di and divya di for writing this part😃😃
U both r just amazing...
So beautifully u write this whole os

U penned down dev's emotions so brilliantly
How dev was yearning to see, touch ,play , talk with his daughter
And that office scene was lovely

Please do write more stories😃

You are very welcome!! Pehle isse khatam kare phir "more stories" ke baare mein sochenge. 😆