The Inclination Of A Vague Heart (CHAPTER 1 updated; page 2) - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice...
So Sonakshi lives in a flat...and has a pretty nice roomate too...
But I guess..Dev is her neighbour whom she doesn't like...
Nice start...
Pls cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Nice start...👍🏼
What has Dev done???
Waiting for next update...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Nice...

So Sonakshi lives in a flat...and has a pretty nice roomate too...
But I guess..Dev is her neighbour whom she doesn't like...
Nice start...
Pls cont soon

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sharica

Nice start...👍🏼

What has Dev done???
Waiting for next update...


Thank you! I explained it in the prologue actually. He was her bully.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow ...loved it ...pretty good start...so why was Dev so rude/indifferent to her...is it because he had/has a crush on her...eagerly waiting for the next chapter...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Now that's a vibrant start

I like how you described Hetvi's apartment the books that was so cool
now coming to Sona's bedroom it already gives off the freshness , the crisp the falling leaves of every color now isn't that just poetic
Sonakshi meets the guy that bullied her all throughout her schooling and guess what the guy again is Hetvi's neighbor not even shy to call her munchkin oh I'm eagerly waiting to see what has this Dev Dixit got up his sleeves this time around

thanks it was a fantastic chapter
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was amazing! Waiting to read the next part. Do notify if possible😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jade0001

Now that's a vibrant start

I like how you described Hetvi's apartment the books that was so cool
now coming to Sona's bedroom it already gives off the freshness , the crisp the falling leaves of every color now isn't that just poetic
Sonakshi meets the guy that bullied her all throughout her schooling and guess what the guy again is Hetvi's neighbor not even shy to call her munchkin oh I'm eagerly waiting to see what has this Dev Dixit got up his sleeves this time around

thanks it was a fantastic chapter

Wow you are so amazing! Your comment was really sweet.. Thank you sooo much! 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Wow ...loved it ...pretty good start...so why was Dev so rude/indifferent to her...is it because he had/has a crush on her...eagerly waiting for the next chapter...

Thank you so much !! M so glad you liked it 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashlyn12

It was amazing! Waiting to read the next part. Do notify if possible😊😊

Sure i will..
Thank you so much for reading! 😊

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