DevAkshi TS||Aise Na Mujhe Tum Dekho||Swing Romance||Chapter 3/page 9

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Hello Forum wassiyon, I'm here once again, Anushka, with my second TS...I loved your response on my OS||Romance With Aata Ka Packet...So one more here based on swing Romance but remember, my imagination, and song Aise Na Mujhe Tum Dekho from film Wajah Tum Ho...It is in 2 parts...1st part is this, second will be coming tomorrow maybe...

So Hereby You Go!!!

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INDEX:

Chapter 1: Down

Chapter 2: Page 5

Chapter 3: Page 9

Hufff!!!!!At last it is over. All are on its place...Ummm lights, swing, curtains, decoration and wait the small pillow? Aree haan ye raha...Sona exclaimed...

As she took one red small pillow and kept in on swing to make it more cozy. Now all she could do was wait with bated breath for Dev to come and give his reactions on my creative mind. And she raised up an imaginary collar on this thought...

She knew, somewhere deep down Ishwari Maa was tad bit or more than it unhappy. She was clearly showing that all this is rubbish and what was in first was OKAY. But no it was not OKAY, it was depressing. One needs to keep their surroundings alive and cheerful to be happy and she wanted Dev to just smile wide out and be her Dev...

And there Kicchu shouted, Doctor Didi...She came out of her thoughts and got up and stood at railing asking what happened from above.

Kicchu replied saying : Maji aur Mami ji, Mama ji ke saath baazar gayi hain, Riys Di ke mamle main...And then Sona asked about the trio sisters so he replied: Riya di aur Nikki Di, Neha di ke saath shopping par gayi.

Sona was happy, that they were alone in house but how can she forget Kicchu Bhaiya...She thought something and then replied : Kicchu Bhaiya, maine kitchen slab par kuch samano ki list rakhi hai so aap please abhi le aayie...

Kicchu nodded and left for his work, and then Sona thought to start her work now...

She got some candles and lit them placing at one of tables, it changed the look of room but only for their happiness and was just perfect for her, she hoped that he liked it.

She thought, how about getting more special for this and then thought about changing herself into something nice. Not that what she is wearing is not pretty on her, she loves this, royal blue Anarkali with a pink floral dupatta but then also something more into this atmosphere...

She quickly changed into purple saree with golden border and wearing only jhumkas adorned with mangalsutra and sindoor, and hair open in glamourous curls only to be looking like angel descended from skies...

And just as she had done pressing one of sky blue with shades of dark black or blue shirt for Dev to change...That she heard his car's honks...

Dev aa gaye, Sona shouted in happiness and was about to get down that she thought to surprise him more and then she...

Dev came in the house and saw the house silent, he called everyone out but no voice came in response and then he thought maybe he was alone for now and will get for sure bored...

Immersed in Sonakshi's thoughts, how pretty she was today, he walked towards his room, not knowing that what his object of thoughts had planned for him...

And the moment he turned the knob of his room's door, before he could see anything, a pair of very soft hands covered his eyes...

Dev: Sonakshi...

Sonakshi : Dev, main hi hoon! Accha ab aap ne kuch dekha toh nahi...?

Dev: Dekhne do tab toh...

Sonakshi: Accha thike, par pehle promise ki jiye ki aap mujhe ye sab dekhne ke baad chilayenge nahi...

Dev: Ok Promise, ab Khargosh apna haath hatha aayegi...

And she obliged for it nervously and removed her hands...as soon as she did that Dev had a shock of his life, he was awestruck...He turned only to question something but seeing her actions made him not able to control his laugh and broke down into fits of laughter as Sona had face palmed herself thinking his reaction can be good also and bad also...And then she moved one hand to see him laughing, her anger rose up and she dropped her hands on waist pointing him...

Sonakshi: Dev, aap ko agar pasand nahi aaya toh keh dijiye par aise hasiye mat, meri choice aapki choice se bahut acchi hai...Aap ko kya lagta hai, ye sab befkoofi hai, main pagal hoon na! par aapko pata hai, aap se bada bewkoof maine nahi dekha hai kyunki koun apne room ko ekdum Sada hua rakhta hai? O haan, obviously Aap!!! She said in her anger due to seeing him laughing...

Dev turned serious hearing this and as she turned over she felt her elbow tugged by him as he said : Ms. Bose, aap ko kya laga mujhe ye accha lagega, main kehta hoon aap abhi, inn sab cheezon bahar fekiye warna main bhool jaunga ki...

Sona eyes were slowly filling with tears threating to spill and she said: Aap bhul jaayenge k..ki...

Dev: Main bhul jaunga ki...Agar main aisa pati hota toh??? And broke down laughing while Sona stood all staring at him, as Dev said between his laughs...Aap ko aapka chehra dekhna chaiye tha, ekdum khargosh jaise ho aap, OK OK, I'm really sorry,Sorrryyy!!!!

Sona turned over, her back facing Dev...She said: Main aapko maaf nahi karungi, aapko pata hai kitni mehnat ki maine, ab toh maan kar raha hai main aapko hi bahar feik doon...

Dev coming in front of her mumbled a sorry, and held both ears...Sorry na Sona...Mazak kar raha...As Sona interrupted saying: Ab socho agar main aisi patni hoti toh?

And Dev then know that he was being backfired in what he started today...

Dev: Accha meri billi mujh hi se meaw...As he started tickling her until she pleaded him to stop and was out of breath...Sona came forward and kept her head on his broad shoulder, one hand holding his hand and other on his heart while he was holding her by waist and caressing her head...

Sona lifting her head up,said: Waise main jhoola jhul chuki hoon, kyunki raah nahi gaya lekin ab main chaahti hoon ki aapp bhi jhule, bohot maza aaye ga, sachhi!!!!

Dev pulling her towards him: Accha, aisa hai...

Sona excitedly nodded and urged him to swing...Seeing her excitement, he headed towards her hard work done...The Swing...

TO BE CONTD...

PRECAP:

Jis baat ka tujhko darr hai
Woh karke dikha doonga...

Dev brushed his lips slightly on hers and then suddenly bit her lower lip.
Sonakshi gasped: Dev...
Dev: Yes, that's my Name Ma.Bose!!! Now I think you know whenever you'll forget who I'm, these would be my ways to tell you...Unique Na?? As he winked at her...
Sonakshi blushed at what he did moments ago...
Sonakshi: Dev, This is not fair...Accha ab mujhe jaane dijiye, sab log kisi bhi waqt aa sakte hai toh mujhe jaana hoga...Chodiye Na!! As she wriggled in his strong hold...
But instead was pulled by Dev into him more by her waist and their faces were inches apart...His intense eyes while her shyness is perfect with the on Swing...

Aise na mujhe tum dekho
Seene se laga loonga
Tumko main chura loonga tumse
Dil mein chhupa loonga (x2)

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So so So, here it is, the first part and second part would be coming soon if you liked and comment...
Hoping that you liked...
Naughty Romance would be in second part N yes suggestions R welcome, and do tell me how is it?

Love,
Anushka

P.S. For my SS readers, I'll be posting 2nd Chapter soon...I thank everyone for being so patient...Thank you. I'll upload after this TS...So for now enjoy this and then my DevAkshi SS||Loving You To Not Hate You. Thank you!!!!


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Soumya21ag thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb part
pls update soon
and pls pm me

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Continue karo jaldi... Wait nahi ho raha hai...
Swing romance...
Hum writers ko sirf ek item chahiye story likhne k liye... Jaldi update chahiye...
Wait nahi ho raha fr thr naughty romance
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank You Sooo Much...

Love,
Anushka
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Soumya21ag

superb part

pls update soon
and pls pm me

Thank You...
Will update soon...
Buddy Me and I'll Pm you...
😊

Love,
Anushka
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh

Continue karo jaldi... Wait nahi ho raha hai...

Swing romance...
Hum writers ko sirf ek item chahiye story likhne k liye... Jaldi update chahiye...
Wait nahi ho raha fr thr naughty romance

Yup Soon, Ananya, Thank you so much for replying...
Actually, they are such couple that just ON a writer's mind for any story, it can be item also and any incomplete scene also😉
Main jaldi update karoungi, Pakka!!

Love,
Anushka
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Posted: 8 years ago
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arre kya likha hai Anu...superb:))
kya punches maare...aisa pati hota toh

jab romance shuru hota hai,tum end kar deti ho

mujhe full fledged romance chahiye...haq hai mera

jaldi update karo
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Posted: 8 years ago
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its really lovely... continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveAnushka

Thank You...
Will update soon...
Buddy Me and I'll Pm you...
😊

Love,
Anushka

i have sent u a request
pls accept
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb
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I just want to give one suggestion that nobody interprets them

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