DevAkshi TS||Aise Na Mujhe Tum Dekho||Swing Romance||Chapter 3/page 9 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Hi Anushka...
Lovely TS...
Sorry for m late...
Romantic filled with naughtiness cliffhanger...
Can't wait...
Plz update asap dear...
N plz PM ur story every time...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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God maine doobara yeh chapter likha, I was gonna post in morning but internet connection got lost at that point of time and I got this message not send, Sorry, and I was irritated by that!...Anyways, Forum Wassiyon...I'm back with the second chappy of this TS...And in another day's time my SS chapter will be ready.Actually I was totally stuck up with many things like wedding preps of my maternal uncle and annual gathering preps etc...So got free that also for some days as my exams are gonna start.So thought of updating this and SS...😃

I know U all R angry, Right? Kahan chali gayi ye ladki? Who bhi ye sab aadha adhoora likhke chodke...I'm sorry for that, But now I'm back I'll trouble you all a lot...😆

Dedicated to my sweet forum family...😳

BTW, just tell me can I continue this after you have read...I have my third part almost ready, some more to add!!! I thought I will be taking it as 3 shots story...So just tell me, Should I or Not? As, for me maybe this would be pretty much abrupt ending...So I have something over my mind...So tell after having a read!😊
Here you all go the next chapter!!!!!
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Both, Dev and Sonakshi headed towards the swing, as they came and stood towards it...Sona motioned through her eyes to sit on the swing, and Dev happily obliged to her.

He doesn't know anything about what will whole world say about this but all he knows is her happiness. All that matters to him is her smile which brightens his whole life. She can order anything and it will be at her footstep and why not when he gave her his heart. She brought colors in his life then why not in this room. If that makes her sad, he would paint in any color she wants! Because I love her, my stupid wife above all this stupid things, as his heart warmed up thinking all this.

He didn't knew, that when swing started moving and he was like feeling very nice. Never did he swing, so it was altogether a different feeling!

Sonakshi: So Kaisa Lag Raha hai Mr.Dixit? As she stops the swing with one hand and it was now swaying very slowly...

Dev: Mrs.Dixit, Dev!

Sonakshi: Haan, Dev, toh batayie?

Dev: Bohot accha, I mean office ki tension jaise sab door hogayi! As Sona smiles at this...

Sona: Accha, lekin mujhe toh lagta tha ki main aapki tension ko bhaagti hoon! As she starts playing with him, So even he starts knowing her playfulness...

Dev: Kahan Tum toh balki meri tension aur badadeti ho!

Sona shouts: Kya? As Dev holds his ears tightly! Dev: Aree Baba! Ek toh khud game chalu karti ho aur phir mujh par chilati ho! Ye kya baat hui?

Sona: Aisi baat nahi hai! As she fiddles with her saree... Dev takes her one hand and kisses it saying: Tumhe pata bhi nahi hai ki mujhe ye surprise kitna accha laga, accha hi kiya jo tumne ye jhoola laya... Aur tumhari iss khil-khilaati haasi ke iye main kuch bhi kar sakta hoon!

Sona: Awww! Isiliye I Love You!

Dev: Sirf isliye? Mujhe laga ki tum...

Sona: Main?

And before Dev could continue, Sona's phone rang which was on bed. Sona was about to go but she felt a light tug at her hand from Dev as their hands were entwined...

Sona: Dev jaane dijiye na!

Dev: Kyu, Ye time sirf mera aur meri biwi ke saath hai! By then the phone had ended ringing!

Sona; Thike...As she trailed off that her phone rang once again which left her giggling...As she said...Dev doosri baar baaj raha hai phone jaane dijiye na! But Dev being stubborn didn't let go her hand...

By the time call ended and Sona pleased him to just see who was calling that her phone rang third time...

Sona: Dev ab koi bahana nahi, mujhe jaana hoga and as she proceeded towards phone, she felt a little bit strong tug at her hand which made her loose her balance and she ended up on his lap as her curls hit his chest...Now the scene was something like this that her hands were resting on his chest to balance herself whereas she was sitting on his lap...And to mention Dev's hands were resting on her waist very cozily and both had their eyes locked...No one backed out from the eye-lock...

Sona was first one broke the eyelock as to her horror she saw her phone vibrating as due to continuous ringing, the mobile had fell from bed! Sona: Dev, mujhe chod dijiye...Please...Dekhiye mere phone ki kya haalat ho gayi hai!

Dev still engrossed in admiring his possessed beauty siting in his arms with that frown and lines on her forehead... He took his hand near her and made her face him and just slowly caressed her forehead to relax her...She closed her eyes forgetting everything and immersed herself in her husband's care pleasure...

Dev murmured...Sonakshi, You R the Best Thing that happened in my life aur tumse judi har baat aur cheez mere liye utni hi important hai jitni tumhare liye because I Love You...He said expressing his gratitude to her and kissed her forehead slowly...Sona had her eyes closed all this time as she slowly opened her eyes to see him pouring out love and respect for her through his eyes...

Sona hugged him lightly as Dev rocked her back and fro slowly...That his phone interrupted this time that left Sona giggling...He took out his phone only to cut the call and put it on silent...

Sona playfully asked: Kiska phone aaya tha who bhi itni raat ko?

Dev: Who actually meri girlfriend ka phone aaya tha! Puch rahi thi kya main free hoon abhi uske saath time spend karne ke liye..

Sona: Shut up! Aapne phone toh uthaya nahi aur kuch bhi keh rahe hai! Little bit jealousy creeping into her like typical wife knowing he is joking...

Dev: Accha main shutup aur tumhara kya? Haan? teen missed calls? Kis se aaye the, haan? bolo?

Sona too answered in same way: Actually agar aapki GF ho sakti hai toh mera bhi ek boyfriend hai...Bicharaa call kar raha tha par usse kya pata ki mere pati ne mujhe bandh rakha hai...

Dev getting jealous...Accha, Toh phir Naam toh batayie aapne boyfriend ka?

Sona: Haina! Mr.Obhodro...Kitna cute naam hai na? As she giggled at this...

Dev: Toh phir aapke Pati ka naam kya hai?

Sona pretends to think hard remembering his name but says...Ummm! Who...Kya Haina...Yaad nahi aa raha...Pata nahi kya naam hai?

Dev in his thoughts, Accha bacchu, aajkal jaise tum kuch zyaada hi bolne lagi ho, But I know how to tame my Bengali Tigress, Mrs.Khargosh! As he thought over how to teach her a naughty lesson...

Dev: Aapko sach main yaada nahi?

Sona: Nahi! Confidently...

A Song in neighborhood starts playing that reaches to their ears also clearly...

Tere saamne aa jaane se
Yeh dil mera dhadka hai

Dev then smirks and slowly encircles his hand more tightly on her waist causing her a pull towards him due to which now they were inches apart...Dev's breath fanning over her face...Sona now trembles saying: Ye...a..aap...kya...kya kar...rahe hai?

Dev: Kuch nahi! Bas dekh raha hoon tumhe tumhare patidev ka naam yaad hai ki nahi? As a mischievous smile forms which teases Sona more...

Yeh ghalti nahi hai teri
Kusoor nazar ka hai

As Sona blushes at their proximity, even though they are married and it has been days but she can't help herself, and how can she when her husband gazes her so intently that makes her go weak in knees, even today and now!

They were close now and then Dev slowly withdraw one hand from her waist very slowly feeling every inch of her waist through the thin fabric of saree...She thinks he is letting her go, so she backs out little bit only to be pulled by her arm more fiercely making her come more closer than before due to more strong pull...

Jis baat ka tujhko darr hai
Woh karke dikha doonga...

He comes near her neck and starts nuzzling as he says...Aap ko sach main yaad nahi mera naam...As he trails off...Even he was loosing himself in her scent but was controlling himself as he wanted to focus on his revenge from her for teasing him non-stop...

She couldn't answer him due to his effect she always goes on silent mode as he trails his hand on her arm slowly upwards resting on her shoulder as he speaks...Ab bhi aapko nahi pata ki kya naam hai tumhare pati ka? His voice getting faint as he moves his hand from her shoulder slowly towards her neck sliding her front hair at back as his hand was now resting on her backless golden blouse...

Aise na mujhe tum dekho
Seene se laga loonga
Tumko main chura loonga tumse
Dil mein chhupa loonga (x2)

She was getting breathless as he continued to torture her...Then he slowly took his face out of her hair and neck and faced her and locked his eyes with hers...He slowly glided his hand on her neck and another held her face as he brought his face closer to hers...Sona closed her eyes as she felt his lips on hers...

He ave her small featherly kisses on her jawline and smooched her lips and kissed slowly only to broke the kiss lightly as Dev brushed his lips slightly on hers and then suddenly bit her lower lip.

Sonakshi gasped: Dev...

Dev: Yes, that's my Name Ms.Bose!!! Now I think you know whenever you'll forget who I'm, these would be my ways to tell you...Unique Na?? As he winked at her...

Sonakshi blushed at what he did moments ago...

Sonakshi: Dev, This is not fair...Accha ab mujhe jaane dijiye, sab log kisi bhi waqt aa sakte hai toh mujhe jaana hoga...Chodiye Na!! As she wriggled in his strong hold...But instead was pulled by Dev into him more by her waist and their faces were inches apart...His intense eyes while her shyness is perfect with the on Swing...



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PRECAP:

Tumse pehle, tumsa koi
Humne nahi dekha (x2)

Until and unless, Sona felt her starting of back hitting something like table...She quickly moved around due to her heavily shying...She held the table edge tightly with her hands as she had her back facing towards Dev...The table had some candles lit, artistic candles which were adding more glow to the already glowing face...Dev came closer to her and trapped her between his body and the table by keeping his hands on either side of her...She closed her eyes thinking that what she thought was to have fun at Swing but this Swing became the death of her...She didn't knew where her thoughts were wandering until she felt him...

Tumhe dekhte hi
Mar jaayenge
Yeh nahi tha socha


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Hope you liked the chapter, I know some would might think it is little bit crappy in mind but sorry for that as I wrote half once again...Anyways I'll post next part also, If you really want...It is almost ready just few touchups and done!!! And and I know iss jhoole ne humara khoon choos liya maata ji ke saath but I'm here with my imagination, I hope you like it! Anyways, Do like, comment, suggestions and constructive criticism is welcome!

Yes, Do check out my Return post by me:
Poem||Kyu Aisa hota Hai...Par Aisa Zaroor Ho||Edits on DevAkshi
Link : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4759489

And BTW, I love you all and missed you very much!!!😊Why not, you are my favs!!!

Love,
Anushka
Edited by LoveAnushka - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Without even readg the update everyone would be tellg u to continue with the next part becoz u r a superb writer
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: swalia

Without even readg the update everyone would be tellg u to continue with the next part becoz u r a superb writer

Thank you so much! I mean I really loved your comment...Thank you so much, I would update but just trying to grasp what everyone else wants! But I am really overwhelmed by your response! thankyou Swalia!

Love,
Anushka
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveAnushka


Thank you so much! I mean I really loved your comment...Thank you so much, I would update but just trying to grasp what everyone else wants! But I am really overwhelmed by your response! thankyou Swalia!

Love,
Anushka

done readg as usual it was superb.now waitg for the next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: swalia

done readg as usual it was superb.now waitg for the next part.

On Thank you so much, Will update by tomorrow!!! I am very much happy to know that U find it good one! Once again thank you so much! Really I owe you!

Love,
Anushka
Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Anuska..u are so Good in Writing dear.. Romantic..cute..sensour.. In just one update.. Waiting for the next part eagerly...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Wow it's awesome
Dev is so naughty...😆
Continue soon😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Pls continue jaldi se
Show pe toh taras gaye hai devakshi scenes ke liye yaha hi mil jaye.. Thanks!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
Beautiful and passionate update... Anushka its really gd.. Want more naughty devakshi.. And ys brilliantly written...
Do update soon... D next part

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