Take me Anywhere- Devakshi FF(DS-2 page 56) - Page 13

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh

Aakriti... Lovely update..

How was ur holiday???
And i loved thr dancing at d last... Thank u so much fr dis..
And do update soon


My vacation was super awesome thank you ananya!!!
Yes i will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Continue soon

Very nice update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update!!
Loved it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely
Waiting for ishwari's redemption
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I will update the next part tomorrow as i have some papers due and its a little tough juggling these two... so be patient and do tune in tomorrow!!!
Posted: 8 years ago
I am big fan of this Series... Eagerly waiting for the next Chapter..update soon..
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Originally posted by: Monaleojan

I am big fan of this Series... Eagerly waiting for the next Chapter..update soon..


Awww thanks a lot!!! yes i will update soon!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ishwari ke upar mein haasoon ya usse dekh kar ro
9th part ke liya toh baas wait nhi Ho rha
Please pm me when you update it
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HI GUYS!!! the much awaited redemption is here!! HAPPY READING!!

Part-9

ISHWARI's POV

"bhola who jo samaan mai lai tha na woh mere kamre mein le aa" I ordered the domestic help we had.. it was the day before karwachauth...

Six months ago right in this house she had said these words to me " ma maine aapki bahu bane ki bahut koshish ki magar shayad kabhi ban nahi paai" saying those words to me she walked out of the mansion without looking back... and since then my daughter in law had ot stepped in this house of mine!! "maaji kahie kahn rakhoon yeh sab" he asked me pulling me out of my reverie pointing towards the bags in his hands... I pointed towards the space infront of me, he kept those bags and left the room.. I took my time contemplating and finally opened the bags to see the final result of my job. There were three packets which contained the quintessential products for the day.. I checked the contents of the bags again, yes it had all I needed a saree, some jewelry and dryfruits. I picked up the packets and kept them on my bedside when my eyes caught the glimpse of the happiest day of his life!! I had a picture of them installed in my room right after their wedding... he was indeed the happiest on that day... And the saddest when he helplessly watched her walk out of those same doors he once bought her in...

When she left 6 months ago... I was very selfishly, satisfied and my son was all mine, I was on cloud nine forgetting my son was somebody's husband, I joyfully took the reins of the house and his life in my hands once again, but somehow the notion felt foreign to me partly because he was completely used to her, and partly because I had grown to believe I would never be able to do that again... she had him wrapped around her finger for good... For a month, after her departure everything went smoothly or I believed it to be moving smooth, for I was completely oblivious to the effect of her emptiness!! Dev used to have breakfast with me and he would come late in the night only to gladly be fed by me... it was after the said time that I started to notice the slip in his facede, he would come home dejected, or well fed, he started avoiding conversations regarding his personal self, started exerting too much, I could see the dark circles around his eyes, sometimes he even greeted me with puffy eyes, this put me on the edge and I grew cautious and started looking for more.. I was growing paranoid when I realized what I was doing!! Once in the evening, dev came home early, but he didn't know I was looking at him... he sat down on the sofa and asked for a cup of coffee put his legs up and opened his laptop, as I moved closer to his sitting form I noticed the screen of the system.. it was a picture of sonakshi and the way he was looking at that picture, broke my heart in a million pieces... That night he came into my room and sat down near my feet to press them and realized no matter what happened between the two of us nothing would ever change, my heart felt heavy with a new found emotion.. guilt. The guilt was so heavy that it became a constant weigth on my heart and every time I saw him proceed with his day giving me a smile, the demons in my chest let out a sigh of content and I cursed myself on the kind of human I had become!!From that day onwards I saw what I had been trying to avoid all this time.. Whenever he would walk in home his eyes would hold a brightness that he lacked the following morning!! I realized I owed both of them an apology but the guilt in my heart would never let me do that... I just could not face her anymore so I kept avoiding the situation for as long as I could... the conversation with dev that day removed every ounce of doubt from my system as realization of what I had done hit me!!

I felt the bed beside me dip and bhaiya looked at me and said" kya baat hai bahu ko vapis lane ki taiyaari ho rahi hai"

" nahi bhaiya, voh aisa nahi hai, yeh bas sara samaan hai jo mai dev se keh kar sona ke liye bhej rahi hoon, who kal karvachauth hai na, or who abhi bhi iss ghar ki bahu hai" I said avoiding his eyes

"kya baat kar rahi hai ishwari, ek taraf toh tu usse yeh sab bejh rahi hai or dusri taraf usse ghar bhi nahi lana chahti" on hearing those words I broke down

" maine hi galat kia hai bhaiya, lekin ab mein uss bacchi ka dil or nahi dukhana chahti..." I let the words I had been holding in my heart out...

"arey ishwari tune.." before he could finish I cut in " mai ek khudgars ma hoon bhaiya or maine galta kia hai"

"nahi iswari tu khudgars thi nahi zamane ne tujhe waise bana dia!!.. jabse jijaji sawarg seedhare hai tune dev se hi toh himmat li hai... Ussi ka toh sahara tha tere pass!! Han magar galti tune ki hai.. or mai khush hoon ki tujhe uska ehsaas hai... toh phir ab der kya kar rahi hai ja or leker aa usse..." he said looking at me with hopefull eyes.. he was always the one who had supported sona.. it would be fair to say he was as broken as dev when she had left the house...

I looked at him and said " nahi bhaiya mai nahi leker aaungi usse... agar woh abhi bhi iss ghar ka hissa rehna chahti hai, toh phir usse yeh haq mai dena chahti hoon lekin tab jab woh khud isse lene ke liye mere pass aaegi... sirf mere bulane pe nahi bhaiya who apni marzi se iss ghar pe raj kregi.. sirf meri bahu ban ke nahi!!" with all these emotions out in the air my chest felt lighter and my brain clearer.. now I was looking forward to the day my daughter in law would walk in hand in hand with my son!!

DEV's POV

I walked in my room to find ma waiting for me with three huge packets beside her.. "ma aap yahan pe kya hua" I asked as I took my jacket off.

"yeh sab sona ke liye hai... Uski sargi!! Ja ke usse de aa" I stood there shocked I shook my head to wrap my head around the words that came out of the woman in front of me... when I didn't say anything she stood up placed her hands on my shoulders and said" de aana yeh sab usse or agar who ghar aana chahe toh usse lekar bhi aa jana..." I just stood there shocked as she walked out of the room I called "ma thank you" she just smiled as I pulled her in a hug!! I was indeed the happiest man on earth!!


A big wala thank you to all of you for loving my sill,stupid attempt at telling you all a story!! and a Big wala Sorry if i have disappointed you all!!

your comments, views and critisiam is most welcome!!

i will update soon!!


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Posted: 8 years ago
Jaldi jaldi jaldi update karo behen... Sabr nahi ho raha hai karwa chauth padne ka
Ushwari ka redemption was very gd.. Also loved how u described her pov with respect to dev's gradual emotional loss...
Plsss jaldi update karna... show mein toh KC nahi dikhaya yaha hi pad lungi

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