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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh


Hey btw whts ur name dear??? Idk dat


My name is Aakriti
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Posted: 8 years ago
M glad that u r not taking too long to update..warna ke continuity Ni rehti..keep writing ..the story is turning out b very nice..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Hi guys!! Thank you for your appreciation!!

Part-7

SONAKSHI's POV

I turned to face ma who was standing with me.. Her gaze was tender as she lifted her hand placed it on my shoulders and made me look at her, " kaisa tha kal ka din... pata hai, tere chehre ki rangat dekh kar mai bata sakti hoon ki din kaisa tha... But mai chahti hoon ki tu khud mujhse kahe"

I blushed and smiling replied " ma kal ka din mai kabhi nahi bhulungi"!!

She patted my head and teary eyed said "khush reh... or dekhna sab theek ho jaega... chal ab andar chal tere baba tera wait kar rahe hai" with this we entered the war zone ever since my break up with dev, baba was dead against me marrying dev and starting a conjugal life with him... But things were going steady and he was starting to appreciate the fact that I was married to a guy who could happily take a grenade for me... but then I walked in the house on that fateful evening and said " baba ma ne mujhe kabhi apnaya hi nahi" and after an hour of debate we finally came to the conclusion that I am never to set foot in that mansion again!!

Baba was sitting on the dining table chair enjoying his breakfast... when I moved into his focus he just looked up and on watching me standing there left his breakfast and proceeded towards his bedroom... honestly I was expecting this silent treatment from my father... He was angry and more than that he was disappointed... his called me his pride... and when your pride bows down to the world, its not easy for a father to accept this and move on!! I looked at ma to see her staring at me she placed her hand on mine and said " bijoy kal sham se bahut gusse mein hai... who toh police complain krne wale the phir humne samjhaya ki sona kissi ke sath bhaagi nahi hai... apne pati ke sath anniversary celebrate kar rahi hai... tabse aise hi mood mein hai, jo bhi aa raha hai ussko khane ko padh rahe hai... tu tension mat le woh theek ho jaenge..." I just smiled at her and moved to my room to change...

I changed and walked towards the one person who was upset with me having spent the entire evening in the arms of my husband... I knocked on the wooden door... there was no answer and I expected this silent treatment from my father... So I just walked in and stood in front of him holding my ears, at first he ignored my attempts to pacify him... But when I refused to budge, he looked up from his favourite collection of satyajit ray and took my hand and made me sit on the bed right next to him and in a calm voice began " bataya kyu nahi phone krke?? Who toh teri ma ne dekh lia tha tumhe jate hue, varna mujhe pata kaise chalta ki tum uss ghatiya insaan ke sath ho"

I just looked down and in a small voice said " baba I love him and iss baar unki galti nahi thi... Baba jabse mai yahan aai hun aap har baat ke liye unhe blame kr rahe hai, lekin iss mein unki kya galti hai??"

" galti hai shona, iss mein tere dev babu ki hi galti hai kyu woh apni ma ko nahi samjha sakta ki uske zindigi mein teri kya jagah hai" he replied surprisingly in a calm, serene voice

" baba, har koi itna lucky nahi hota ki unhein mere tarah ek understanding family mile..."I said in the same calm small voice

we sat there in silence for sometime and then he began.." shona beta, mai sirf tera bhala chahta hoon... mai bas chahta hoon ki tu khush rahe beta..."

I took his hand in mine and said " mai toh tabhi khush rahungi jab meri life ke sabse important men ek dusre ko accept kre... aap mere liye dev ko maaf kr do na baba, iss baar unki koi galti nahi hai..."

silence prevailed for some more minutes and as I stood up thinking, I would never achieve my objective, baba said in a grave voice.. " mai usse maaf toh nahi kr sakta, kyuki ussne meri beti ka dil dukhaya hai par, maaf krne ki koshish zaroor kar sakta hoon..." I smiled at this... Suddenly my objective didn't seem so far away...

DEV's POV

I entered the glass double doors only to find everybody in the house seated at the dining table enjoying a hearty breakfast.. my heart ached, the only member who could not be a part of this was my wife... Everybody stopped eating to stare at me as I moved towards my mother... " dev, beta kahan tha tu kal pura din mai tera intezaar kar rahi thi... Tera phone bhi band aa raha tha..."

"arey bhai who abhi abhi ghar aaya hai usse chain se sans toh lene do, apne sawal jawab baad mein kar lena, haan bhai!!!!" I was eternally grateful to mamaji who interjected at the right moment, he along with ria and nikki had helped me set this thing... I looked at him and smiled... the answering smile was as sober and knowing!!

I quickly went upstairs to change and freshen up... I was looking at some important file when I heard a pair of footsteps aproaching me and without glancing up from my files I said "han ma, bol kya hua, itni pareshan kyu hai??"

" kahan tha beta kal tu, mai itna pareshan thi... ek phone kr deta.. " she said her voice laced with concern I kept the file down and made her sit on the bed and took the chair and sat facing her.

" ma tujhe sach mein yaad nahi hai kal kya tha?" I asked impatience evident in my voice

"yaad hai beta, mai kaise bhol sakti hoon... ek ma, kabhi apne bache ki shaadi ka din thodi bhul sakti hai" she said in a calm voice

I remained silent so she continued " tujhe dekh kar mai bata sakti hoon ki tu kal kahan tha... lekin mai jana chahti hoon, ki jab tu use bhul chukka hai toh phir.."

I stood up, shocked to hear her words " maa mai sona ko nahi bhula hoon, mai sona ko bhulna chahta bhi nahi hoon"

"toh phir itne dino se tune uska zikar bhi nahi kia, toh mujhe laga ki tu aage bhadna chahta hai...issiliye maine kal tujhe kuch kaha bhi nahi.." I sat down... And said " ma mai usse bahut pyaar krta hoon or kal ka pura din maine sirf ussi ke liye rakha tha, iss liye mera phone band tha..."

Getting up I said "mai late ho raha hoon sham mein milte hai.." and I moved cursing my fate as to why I could not be with the one woman I so wished to be with...

AUTHOR's Description : in the last shot dev dosnt let ishwari finish what she started... so to find out what she was about to say you have to wait for the 9th chapter!!! this is a spoiler alert ishwari's redemption is on its way!!


HAPPY READING

stay tuned!! roses or eggs your choice!!

P.S i wont be uploading for a week because i am going on a family vacation!! but feel free to love or hate TAKE ME ANYWHERE!!


Edited by Tremors - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Surprising that both Bijoy and Ishwari was calm when speaking to their children strange how Ishwari could just think her son has forgotten his wife when there was no marital problems between them it was always Ishwari causing the issues .
Asha she is such an understanding mother she knew just by her daughter's attire she would spend the day with her husband and even when Dev drops Sona off Asha is so polite and sweet with him

Do enjoy your vacations
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved d update :) happy holidays enjoy d maximum safe journey !!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update!!
Happy journey...will wait for your next update!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Aakriti dear... Really loved d part... And dev's confrontation wid ishwari was truly amazing... I loved it... And d authors description wll nt let me be patient until u upload d next part...
Happy vacation dear... Be safe and sound and be back soon...
And i wll always love TAKE ME ANYWHERE
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh

Aakriti dear... Really loved d part... And dev's confrontation wid ishwari was truly amazing... I loved it... And d authors description wll nt let me be patient until u upload d next part...

Happy vacation dear... Be safe and sound and be back soon...
And i wll always love TAKE ME ANYWHERE


Thank you soo much!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
I guess she will talk about divorce
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing
Plz update soon.
Enjoy ur vacation

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