Devakshi FF: Small Moments (Completed)

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AnanyaGhosh

@AnanyaGhosh

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#821

Omg di... I m crying soo much... 😭❤️ this whole ff was soo beautiful and simple and sweet...

Loved ur each and every description of devakshi wedding and also the blissful 3 promises... Soo endearing...

And epilogue was Another emotional ride... As sona is preggy fr d second time and dev already has soha... Awww... 😳

A final congratulations fr completion of ur debut ff... Every scene indeed were vry spl 'Small Moments' 🤗

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Shaun

@Jade0001

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#822

Wow these two chapters were simply fantastic

the marriage the anxiety the love between all family members

that was truly beautiful

Suhana with her parents now awaits for the next arrival of a new member into their family

A Beautiful Story ended

will be waiting for your next story

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#823

Part 19

Aww devakshi ki shaadi
Unke promises
Unka saath sab kitna acche se likha mishti
Loved it to the core

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WeRockTheWorld

@WeRockTheWorld

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#824

Good One Mishti dear!! Well Done...and thank you for giving us such a lovely story ...loved reading it !! 👏 ⭐️

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#825

Epilogue

Aww sona is preggers n tht too second time
Choti sona to aa chuki hai looks like tiny mr aubhodro is on d way
Dev uska kitna khayaal rakhta hai !!!!!!!!
Riya aur ritwick ki shaadi ho gayi 😉
Aur honeymoon bhi
Par tune devakshi ka honeymoon kyun nahi dikhaya?????
Par jo.bhi ho tera ff one of my personal favorites hai

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#826

👏 👏 👏
Take a bow girl u deserve this

This one being ur first ff the way u hv written it amazing
Aur yeh kya baat kardi tune
Agla concept ready hai
2 3 dino mein???????
Bring it onn girl!!!!!!!
We are all eagerly waiting for it

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Soumya21ag

@Soumya21ag

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#827

mishit diii...

it was beautiful👏

loved their talk b4 marriage and their promises after marriage

awww so sona is pregnant with their second child and she forgot her own birthday😆

aur pehli baar ke hisaab se bahut hi zyaada achcha tha👍🏼

aur ye kya...😲

do teen din mein u will be back with ur new plot

can't wait

thanks for the pm(is baar aap bhuli nahi😛)

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cscs

@cscs

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#828

Loved it. I had this wide grin on my face while reading both the updates. So its a happy ending of a cute love story. Happy and sad at the same time, happy for their journey and sad that we will not be able to read their small moments anymore.

But yeah you are coming up with new FF. Excited for it.

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Erina

@Erinasingh69

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#829

Awsum chap sweety 👏 I truly appreciate your writing what a sweet n lovely ff 😳

Loved whole journey which I started by ur pm awww love u agar tune mjhe pm nhi kiya hota to shayad mai nhi read kr pati 😕 ... meri Jaan maine tjhe link ke liye bht pareshan kiya na ?? 😉 😛

Ye journey kaise apni destination pe pahungi pta hi nhi chala n ofcourse ye mere liye memorable bhi h bcse forum pe registered hone k baad ye mera first ff h Jo Maine read kiya 😊

I will miss my small moment of devakshi 😭 but I'm happy that u will be back with another ff 🥳

Now post soon will be waiting for ur ff n pm too

With lots of love 😳 n hugs 🤗 only for u 😉

Cya soon till then take care 😊

Thanks for pm again sweety 😳