Devakshi FF: Small Moments (Completed)

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snehaz16

@snehaz16

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#841

hey Mishti...
u have started the FF beautifully.. and end was also very beautiful... so perfect...
I love ur FF..
all the very best for your next FF... eagerly waiting for the next one

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Sneha

@Rhy2015

Inactive

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Posted: 8 years ago

#842

Beautiful FF mishti...
I just love these happy endings wali story 😛
Bhia audiences ko smile k sath hi bye bye krni chahiye .
Will b waiting fir ur next story. 😛

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Sonali Mahajan

@Cutiepie.sona

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#843

Hello ji!

Here I am maybe commenting 4 the last tym on this thread!...I'll miss this FF!😭😭

Aur aaj toh I had decided ki comment krke hi rahungi aaj m hi...isliye toh clg se jldi bhaag aayi m...lol!😆😆...this is not the case...I had no more classes isliye jldi aayi m!😉😆😆

Haa!!

Toh coming back to the story!

Finally these 2 chapters were free of any twist & turn ...and evrything happened so smoothly!😉😃

I loved it the way Devakshi along witg their respective families were so exciting & happy 4 the wedding...😃😳

U've beautifully described their journey from Bf-GF to Wife-husband...😳

U know what is the part that I likee the most?!

It's that they took 3 months to understand each other and enjoy their courtship period and then decided to marry!👏⭐️

..in between both their families got enough time to gell with each other...specially Asha & Ishwari!😳⭐️...I simply love it that they have found best frends in each other!👏⭐️...

Abt the epilogue...I liked it that Sona-Ritwick's bond is still the same ...first they are best frends & then jo bhi relation h unme w.r.t to Riya!😉 ...

And the best part was Dev-Soha giving surprize to Sona by calling her parents from Kolkata...Awww!😳...Pure bliss it was...and u rightly said that Life can't be better than this 4 them!😃⭐️...

A very blissful ending to a very beautiful story!👏😳

I had the best of my time reading it & commenting on it!😉

Last time...once again a Big THANK YOU!😃

And warm hugs from ur JHAPPI MASTER😆😆

🤗🤗

Waiting 4 ur next lovely creation!😉

Good byee!😊

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moni160282

@moni160282

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#844

Great job mishti. In ur story there love story sailed very smoothly. Kash aisahi hamare serial main hota.

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tina tartari

@tinatartari

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#845

What a beautiful piece of writing mishti..
I read through all i missed..kia bolun..tum boht acha likhti ho..
Thnks for pm

Aur jldi c new ff lao..related to present sweet nd sour devaakshi momenta

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Deepsikha

@Mishti_94

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#846

Originally posted by: cancerian87
Wow mishti wonderful ... I'm just loving it 👍🏼
U have done really good job ...👏

Congratulations on completion of your first fan ficition story👏🥳

Thank you so much Bisma Di!😃

Thanks a Lot! ❤️

🤗

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Deepsikha

@Mishti_94

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#847

Originally posted by: keershri
Beautiful Mishti !!! Loved it...
I wish KRPKAB also ends in a similar way 😊

Thank you so much Keerti DI!😃

I wish so too! ❤️

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Deepsikha

@Mishti_94

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#848

Originally posted by: Mariumharis
It's indeed a blissful end..
Loved the epilogue..
Will miss it coz ur ff is the reason that I m here at this forum
Waiting fo ur next ff..

Hi marium!

Good to see you after a long time!

Oh wow!

That's a big thing.

Thank youuu! ❤️

Yes, the next FF will be up soon!😃

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Deepsikha

@Mishti_94

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#849

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh
Omg di... I m crying soo much... 😭❤️ this whole ff was soo beautiful and simple and sweet...
Loved ur each and every description of devakshi wedding and also the blissful 3 promises... Soo endearing...
And epilogue was Another emotional ride... As sona is preggy fr d second time and dev already has soha... Awww... 😳

A final congratulations fr completion of ur debut ff... Every scene indeed were vry spl 'Small Moments' 🤗

Oh wow Anu!

Thank you for loving it so much so as to feel like crying when it came to an end.

Thanks a lot dear! ❤️

Every scene was special for me too because it grew out of my head.

feels lovely to be appreciated.

Lots of Love to you!

❤️

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Deepsikha

@Mishti_94

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#850

Originally posted by: Jade0001
Wow these two chapters were simply fantastic

the marriage the anxiety the love between all family members
that was truly beautiful
Suhana with her parents now awaits for the next arrival of a new member into their family

A Beautiful Story ended

will be waiting for your next story