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Tia.0 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks. Yes, it was one of my favourite shows too until CVs butchered it. Enjoy!!!

P.S. READ REWIND FIRST. Otherwise Fast Forward won't make sense.

Originally posted by: gmgi


Thank you Tia. That was one of my favorite serial even with all the ups and down. Found your blog. Will reply once I finish.🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago
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"Dev grabbed Sona's waist with one hand, grabbed her coffee mug with another and took a sip."
Now that is what I call natural romance.
And Dev unable to find his clothes😆Story of every family I think.
Love the teasing, fun and romance all packed in one.
Then Sona's sweet relationship with the sisters. And you left us with a cliffy!
Update soon😆Then we'll somehow tweet/mail this to Cvs so they could give us such scenes
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lol... Those are personal experiences. My husband keeps stealing my coffee even though he doesn't like how much cream and sugar I put in mine.

And again not finding what is right in front of his face is my husband's speciality. He can't find his outfit in the morning where I have been putting it every day since last five years, he can't find the milk in the fridge where I always keep it, he can't find the remote and socks and his shoes and his keys and his work phone and personal cell phone and his access card etc etc if I don't show it to him. So those are not my imagination. 😆

Originally posted by: rose4ever

"Dev grabbed Sona's waist with one hand, grabbed her coffee mug with another and took a sip."

Now that is what I call natural romance.
And Dev unable to find his clothes😆Story of every family I think.
Love the teasing, fun and romance all packed in one.
Then Sona's sweet relationship with the sisters. And you left us with a cliffy!
Update soon😆Then we'll somehow tweet/mail this to Cvs so they could give us such scenes
.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Loved it... please continue dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Phir kya hua ?? Miracle happened?? [:D/]

Pls continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: tia.o

Lol... Those are personal experiences. My husband keeps stealing my coffee even though he doesn't like how much cream and sugar I put in mine.

And again not finding what is right in front of his face is my husband's speciality. He can't find his outfit in the morning where I have been putting it every day since last five years, he can't find the milk in the fridge where I always keep it, he can't find the remote and socks and his shoes and his keys and his work phone and personal cell phone and his access card etc etc if I don't show it to him. So those are not my imagination. 😆

Awww that's so sweet .And both the imagined and personal experiences are romantic.😊
You know there is a similar coffee scene in one of my fav novels as well.I just find the whole stealing each other's cofffee/ food so romantic and cute😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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aww loved their romance and are they going to have choti sona/tine Mr obhodro?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is so lovely ... Perfect timing given the forum is on this topic:)

Beautifully penned... Would love to know what will Dev's reaction be to this!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice one tia
please continue n pm me if possible
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thats a lovely story Tia , I wish our DevAkshi story was as beautiful as this !!! Plz keep writing !!!

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