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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Manasi90




Thnxs. Iam travelling right now and i have page wise chapter in my email. Due to constant fluctuation of range m unable to post 2 pages in a row. I have to merge them in one chapter which im unable to do. I will surely try and be back soon.


Okay no problem at all..
Don't worry we r happy with ur short chapters Bz that makes me feel happy...
update as your convenience...
Waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Very well written os..
Dev wants to give some space and time to Sonakshi tounderstand her feelings towards him and come to a decision.
Waiting to see how thre story progresses.
Please update ASAP.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13

Dev came and sat on his bed. He closed his eyes and asked himself whether whatever decision he had made right now was right? His mind, heart and body responded towards a yes. He relaxed and opened his eyes. A bright sunshine had fallen outside. He felt good. He got up and opened all windows so that the damp and the stale air passed out. He opened his laptop where the screen-saver bore the picture of Sonakshi. How beautiful she looked. Today his screen-saver showed the picture when she bore the white sari. She looked as if she was already his wife, already Mrs. Sonakshi Dev Dixit. "Stop it Dev!!! Mujhe abhi ye nahi sochna chahiye." he warned himself.

He got up and felt a little restless. He wanted to think rationally about the present situation. He knew that he was very close to the solution but it wasn't dawning to him. Then it struck him!!!

"Ms. Sonakshi Bose... I Love You." The memory played in his mind. "I love you as a man loves a woman". The silence and then one step back. Yes he had got the solution. " Agar uss waqt mein ek ekdum piche na hua hota to Sonakshi meri baahon me nahi hoti. Itna aasan solution tha aur meine itna time laga diya samjhne me. Sachme me Dev, tu bhi na..."

Dev Dixit had finally stumbled upon the right solution. He had a shower, cleaned his wound, systematically bandaged it and came downstairs. Asked Bhola, whether there was anything to eat. Something light. Bhola offered him one paratha and a cup of coffee. Yes, that's just perfect. Ishwari was coming down when she saw Dev ready to go to office. She said "Dev, beta office jaa raha hai? Jana jaruri hai kya?" He said that yes he has meetings lined up and needs to get back with company's financial status. "Iss sab mein, kaam ke taraf dhyaan hi nahi raha naa Maa, to bas ab thoda jyada mehenat leni padegi. Company ke shares ki value badhane ke liye logon ko ye bharosa, yakeen vapas dilana hoga ke company profit mein hi hai. Maa company mein 500-600 log kaam karte hain. Unka ghar bhi to salary par hi chalta hai. Sabse jyada unn logon ke liye." Ishwari knew her son was correct. He had always been a responsible employer and boss. He took her blessings and left for office.

While travelling, Dev made a mental note to re-write a letter to Sonakshi and return her bracelet back. He knew it was her favourite bracelet. Now, he seemed more positive towards the situation. He knew Sona very well. She needed time to heal the wounds and to think about them rationally, like he did today. "So from now, I am going to step back and wait for you to come into my arms Ms. Bose. I know you love me and you too very well understand ke mein bhi tumse pyaar karta hun, par ab, jab tak tum khud ye baat accept nahi karti, main tumhein iss rishte ke liye force nahi karunga."

Dev received a call from Dr. Sinha that the board had decided to call back Dr. Sonakshi Bose to JLS Hospital on with triple package. They had already sent her the letter and were waiting for her response.

Will update tomorrow next part...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Really nice😊
Pls cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Awesome and beautifully penned down os. 👏 .
I like the positive attitude of dev.
Especially how smartly you brought the solution of present problem to handle future from past beautiful memories.
"Agar mein ekdum picha na hata hota toh sonakshi meri bahoon mein nahi hoti" smart analysed.
Waiting for the update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Very nice! Eagerly waiting for next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
awesome 3 pieces so far. wonder what Dev will do to pacify Sona... ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

Sonakshi was a little upset. She didn't understand Dev's behaviour today. They way he expressed his apology and the words he chose to say as if there was decision coming soon. Little did she know that, in a way she was correct. Dev had made up his mind to make Sonakshi decide about their relationship. Sonakshi's message bell rang. To distract herself, she opened the new e-mail. The offer letter for Ms. Sonakshi Bose as a Nutritionist with triple-size package. Thinking about J.L.S, made her stumble upon how she and Dev had met. "Jab mein tumse mila tha, tab mein Mr. Obhodro tha, par ab mein Mr. Obhodro nahi hun." Sudden memory of how she missed calling him Mr. Obhodro. "Sonakshi, what's this with u aajkal hn ? You have already said no, then why in double-minds? Because today's Dev's behaviour was weird." Sudden noise of dada and elena's laughter made her come out of reverie. She went down and showed discussed with everyone about taking up the offer. Majority said YES.

In conference room, Mr. Devrath Dixit was completely focused on the graphics of the business losses. He had all the financial experts surrounded by him. They all were contributing their knowledge about how to convert this financial crisis into a bold graph. With each hour passing, Dev was getting near to the solutions. The meeting ended on a good note and he was soon into his next meeting which was exactly the kind of deal which could bring him in stream quickest.

It was very late when Dev arrived at his place. Ishwari was waiting for Dev. Nikki and Ria were discussing something. Ishwari got up and asked Bhola to start plating food for dinner. Ishwari was waiting for Dev to say something when he marched up the stairs. She thought he was upset due to Sonakshi and felt guilty. After getting fresh, Dev carried his cell phone and laptop with him down and placed it in garden and sat with Ishwari to have food. " Beta mein abbhi keh rahi hun, mujhe koi aitraaz nahi tere aur Sonakshi ke rishte se. Sachme Dev!" "Haan maa mein janta hun. Ye baatein to chalti rahengi, tu khana kha mere saath. Medicines barabar time pe lena aur soo jana. Thik hai? " Dev continued having food. He noticed carrots in salad plate and instantly remembered how he had teased Sonakshi with carrot the next day after he proposed. The beautiful blush she had "as if I was going to eat her!!!" After having dinner he helped his maa to her room and gave her medicines and asked her to sleep.

Here, Sonakshi was choosing which dress to wear tomorrow as she was going back to join J.L.S again. She wanted her come back to be good. She pressed her dress and took out a new bag and started re-arranging her things into it. Sonakshi knew that her moving on decision was wrong. She knew that her soul had already moved a long way with Dev. How could she turn into being so stubborn? "Bas Dev ko kaha isilye kissi aur aadmi ke saath rishta jodne chali thi tu Sona? Relations jodna itni aasan baat hai kya? Galti teri thi, aur insult Maa-Baba ki hui." She continued searching for matching earring for the dress and tired to make herself busy.

"JUST SOMETIMES YOU MEET SOMEONE WHO LEAVES AN INDELIBLE MARK ON YOUR SOUL"...

Next day, Dev came to Sonakshi's house to return her bracelet. Her mother, Asha Bose opened the door and asked him in. He felt a little awkward. She asked him to sit down and went to get him water. There, Dev took this small opportunity to go through all the photographs on the walls. He just needed to feel that Sonakshi was near him. The small girl in an old picture made him relax and comfortable. Suddenly Bijoy came and saw Dev standing.

"Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? Wapas meri beti ko rulana chahte ho? Mr.Dixit ek baat aap samjah lijiye. Sonakshi meri beti hai, iss Bijoy Bose ki beti. To kya hua uski engagement tut gayi? She is a strong girl." Bijoy's voice seemed to have echoed in their house. Asha just seemed irked with him.

"Main yahan Sonakshi ka ye bracelet lautane aaya tha." He removed a box from his coat and showed. "Mujhe sab pata hai. Tumhein laga tum meri beti ko emotional blackmail karoge iss bracelet ko ue karke." Bijoy started again, but this time Asha asked him to stop and asked Dev "Tum bas ye lautane aaye the? Ya Shona se milne? I mean Shona ghar par nahi hai." Dev just sat of the chair and kept the box on table. Suddenly he realised this was his chance to talk with Sona's baba.

"Sir, mein janta hun meine Sonakshi ko hurt kiya hai. Aur meri harkaton ki wajah se wo aur bhi hurt hui hai. Mein usse aur hurt nahi karna chahta. Issliye iss time par aaya hun, jab ho ghar par nahi hai. Meine Saurabh se kaha tha, Soankshi is a lucky girl to have her family to support. Par dekha jaye, to Sonakshi ke baad agar meine sabse jyada kisiko hurt kiya hai, toh wo aapko. I know Sonakshi is your pride. Beti uske baap ki guroor hoti hai."

"Zindagi baap ki ahemiyat pata hai mujhe. Mein 8 saal ka tha, jab papa chal gaye. Jab baap ka saya, sar se hat jata hai tab kya beetti hai, mujhe pata hai Sir. Agar aaj mein ye kehta hun, ke mein job hi, apni maa ki wajah se, wo issliye kyun ki usne apne bacchn ke liye wo sab kiya jo ek baap karta hai. Usne humein kabhi jeene ki umeed chhodne nahi di. Par agar papa hote, toh shaayad baat alag hi hoti."

He sighed. Something inside Bijoy melted. He knew that Dev had lost his father in his childhood but still the pain and tears in this boy's eyes made him shaky. He was just 27 years boy who knew the importance of father in life.

"Agar aaj papa hote, to shayad mein itni badi galti karta bhi nahi. Aur agar karta to mujhe sahi raasta bhi wohi dikhate. Wo jante ki kaisa mehesoos hota hai, apni beti ro roote dekhna. Aur shayad maa ki jagah, wo aate aaj aapse maafi maangne."

"Sir, ab jaisa aap aur Sonakshi chahenge waisa hi hoga. Mein chalta hun. Par usse pehele. I am really sorry to hurt you." Saying so he folded his hands in front of Mr. and Mrs. Bose.

Sonakshi had heard all this by standing behind the door. She was just controlling her tears and Dev came out. He saw her standing and the tears in her eyes. He jsut couldn't control his action and wiped out the tears flowing.

"Please don't cry for me Sonakshi. I don't deserve these tears. May be aap sahi thi, I don't deserve your love."

Saying so he passed by her, without looking back. He knew, he had played the right ball with correct stance.

Last Part Coming Soon...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
First time lengthy episode...not bad Manasi..Js loved it...
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Loved it !! great one ...especially the talk betwn Dev and Sona's father...👏⭐️

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