OS - Say you believe me!! Part 5 Pg 39 Sept 25

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jigsaw1234

@jigsaw1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Oh, how I love your story and your story telling style. Brilliant!

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

it is so beautiful
how i wish ithappens in d show
u r amazing
will u b continuing it
if possible plz do
rhanks for pm

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shilpa_akki

@shilpa_akki

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Awesome...smart girl u...suvika...used letter in a smart way
There would be 3rd part or not.. If yes then OK n if no then plz make it up for us..
Waiting

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Mohi99

@Mohi99

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Superb... U wrote so well yaa... Very few r gifted like this... Pls pls write more and pm me ur next... I will b waiting

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tanya94

@tanya94

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Waoo..u r writing it very well...I love the way u r taking the story forward..amazing it iswaiting to read more..do pm me if possible

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Tia.0

@Tia.0

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Thank you for writing a story that maintained the dignity and respect of the characters. It's exactly what I want to see on screen.

Respect is a two way street and every relationship must have it. There is no ranking system in relationship where you can rank mother as no. 1, sister as no. 2 etc.

Every relationship has its place and its rights and responsibilities. When you cross that line that's when one relationship starts to interfere with other relationships. I am glad you showed Dev showing full respect to Sona and her family while putting Ishwari in her place where she can't interfere with his other relationships.