OS - Say you believe me!! Part 5 Pg 39 Sept 25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: fanktlk
When is part 3

I am still

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Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: LiveLife321
Thank you for the update. Its awesome as usual.👏
When will be the next one?😊

Lata..

Next part... Don't know. I have never been good at writing this gentle slow wooing stuff. Let's see what I can come up with. Will try to make it ASAP.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: gmgi
My eyes are still blurred with tears while typing this. This was tooo awesome. I don't care if they show any of this in the show now. For me this is it. The letter was used so beautifully. Everything you have written will touch the right chord. Especially the part of Ritwick. How lovely is that he considers her still his friend to tell this news. Loved it. Can you write the rest of this please...

Yes. Ritwik has said bye. We need not bring him back, I felt. One message would suffice. It would lessen Sona's guilt and soften her attitude towards Dev.

Rest of it.. yes. I plan to take this OS until they do a proper patch up and Dev. Plus I want to deal with his relationship with Ishwari too, in parallel. So yeah... I am guessing another couple of parts at least.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld
Wow nice one !! loved it , please continue...write soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: ashwin8890
Fantastic update.
I want part 3😭

Thank you.

You will get part 3. Please don't cry.🤗 I need to think about this wooing aspect. Once I get that together, I will start typing. And my typing speed is fast, even if I do say so myself. 😉 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: rose4ever
Suvika👏beautiful, simply beautiful the way you managed to capture the essence of Sona- Bijoy's relationship, the way you made Dev act and say all the right words,they way you made him consider Sonakshi's family as well, the way you wrote Sonakshi's feelings before and after his apology and actions, how you captured Ishwari.Loved it all.And a special thanks for writing Dev consider his meeting with Sona important and send a driver to Ishwari, thoroughly enjoyed that.
If only the writers would incorporate such thoughtfulness in Dev in the show
But after watching the epi, this was a much needed respite from his dumbness.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.😳Please write it soon.😳

Thank you.

The way they have built Sonakshi's character in the show until now, especially the way she stood up after the break up, I think this is the only way Dev has a chance with her if he wants her back in his life. She will not take a chance on him otherwise. Because now it's not just her who is hurt. It's her parents too.

And as for Dev sending the driver to Ishwari, he wasn't doing anything out of character. He does get tunnel vision when he wants something, doesn't he?? Plus his mom was the one who told him - meri bahu laade Dev. Laayega na?? So in a way, he is off to fulfil that wish of his mom. 😉 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: mgram505
u nailed it...sona dev talk in cabin...and letter read by asha bijoy and further bijoy talk...then dev concern...u thought and write so well...but it's good to see that bijoy not accept and leave it to sona...all so good an just waiting for next part... pls post soon...and pm if possible

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Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: dlavanya
Lovely .. I do hope that letter plays a role in the patchup.. Great work Suvika 👏

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Posted: 8 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: randommusings
Great OS...hope we get similar matured patchup...n the way u used the letter was just brilliant. Looking forward to Dev Sona conversations.

Me too waiting for Dev Sona conversations. Just not decided on WHAT those conversations should be and where they would start. 😆