OS - Say you believe me!! Part 5 Pg 39 Sept 25

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LiveLife321

@LiveLife321

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Thank you for the update. Its awesome as usual.👏

When will be the next one?😊

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hermosoanu123

@hermosoanu123

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Awesome Os ...hope this is way Cv treat the story...grt going

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gmgi

@gmgi

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#73

My eyes are still blurred with tears while typing this. This was tooo awesome. I don't care if they show any of this in the show now. For me this is it. The letter was used so beautifully. Everything you have written will touch the right chord. Especially the part of Ritwick. How lovely is that he considers her still his friend to tell this news. Loved it. Can you write the rest of this please...

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ssimmy

@ssimmy

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Amazing writing, I could visualize everything so clearly! Please update soon

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WeRockTheWorld

@WeRockTheWorld

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#75

Wow nice one !! loved it , please continue...write soon

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ashwin8890

@ashwin8890

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Fantastic update.

I want part 3😭

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rose4ever

@rose4ever

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#77

Suvika👏beautiful, simply beautiful the way you managed to capture the essence of Sona- Bijoy's relationship, the way you made Dev act and say all the right words,they way you made him consider Sonakshi's family as well, the way you wrote Sonakshi's feelings before and after his apology and actions, how you captured Ishwari.Loved it all.And a special thanks for writing Dev consider his meeting with Sona important and send a driver to Ishwari, thoroughly enjoyed that.

If only the writers would incorporate such thoughtfulness in Dev in the show

But after watching the epi, this was a much needed respite from his dumbness.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.😳Please write it soon.😳

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mgram505

@mgram505

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#78

u nailed it...sona dev talk in cabin...and letter read by asha bijoy and further bijoy talk...then dev concern...u thought and write so well...but it's good to see that bijoy not accept and leave it to sona...all so good an just waiting for next part... pls post soon...and pm if possible