OS: BABA,TUMI IMPOSSIBLE NAA! OS UPDATED 05/09/2016

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Devakshilover
aww I love father-child moments dev was scrubbing ansh as if he was a plate Lol loved the Eating from dev's hands and then stiry time

These came from personal experiences... I have seen all my childhood; my cousin brother screaming from the bathroom every Sunday, coz his father gave him a bath, and he used to scrub him hard, coz my brother really was an adventurous kid...😆

Ansh eating from his father's plate scrunching and closing his eyes while eating, it was my own little act, when I was hardly a 2 years old...😆

And eating from Dev's hand, when all kids do that, don't they..😆😃

Thank you Ankie for liking it dear...😃

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Himruta_fan

Cute os. I really liked it. The way dev took care of ansh was too cute.

Thank you so much Maisha!😃

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.
Just read the OS!!
Its amazing!!👏

Thank you so much Aditi...😃

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libran13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Hey your topic mentions OS updated 05/09/2016. May I know what was updated yesterday?

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: libran13
Beautiful story. Keep writing😊

Thank u so much... I will continue with other works...

What's your name btw?

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: libran13
Hey your topic mentions OS updated 05/09/2016. May I know what was updated yesterday?

I had just posted a prologue on post no. 1... Yesterday, I updated the OS as well, it's on the post below the first post... Same thread... PAGE:1

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: yyy
Awesome awesome ...I loved the story ..it was so different n nice ..I loved Dev and his son bond ..it w a nicely potrayed that history was repeating ...
-- Thank you so much Nitu...😃

Bose family helped Sonakshi realise her mistake ...such a understanding and mature parents Sonakshi has...
-- I think the Boses are really mature people... They are very less complicated souls, and have a better outlook and understanding for life than the Dixits...😃

I like your concept a lot... I am being greedy please write another OS or if you could continue this story that would be great. ..maybe next part can focus on Dev's POV
-- Thank you yaar... You will get another OS soon... Working on it... As to continuing this story, I have no idea yaar... Elaborate a little more, how you want Dev's pov... I didn't get it... Honestly if I have any idea, and I think it is good to write, I surely will write more...😳😃

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: gdfss
It was really amazing...
Looking forward for the next part...
Keep writing dear...
U beautifully described father -son relation...

Thank you so much dear!

Actually, there's no next part to this...😃

I will continue writing ... But some other story...

Thanks a lot!

PS; What's your name btw?

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum
That was such a perfect OS!
Right from the cuteness of Devaansh to the awkwardness of Dev dixit to maturity of Sona in the ending
Loved it!

Thank u so much dear...😃

What's ur name dear?