OS: BABA,TUMI IMPOSSIBLE NAA! OS UPDATED 05/09/2016

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Awesome awesome ...I loved the story ..it was so different n nice ..I loved Dev and his son bond ..it w a nicely potrayed that history was repeating ...Bose family helped Sonakshi realise her mistake ...such a understanding and mature parents Sonakshi has...

I like your concept a lot... I am being greedy please write another OS or if you could continue this story that would be great. ..maybe next part can focus on Dev's POV

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shilpa_akki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

It was really amazing...
Looking forward for the next part...
Keep writing dear...
U beautifully described father -son relation...

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Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

That was such a perfect OS!

Right from the cuteness of Devaansh to the awkwardness of Dev dixit to maturity of Sona in the ending

Loved it!

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sumana.shesha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Mind blowing OS :)

Superb :)

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sowiee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

very nice !!!!

Really after a long time read such a touchy story !!!!!

I mean i have read many mother son, mother daughter stories but this story of dev and ansh is very cute and heart touching and light hearted
!!!

Thank you so much

keep writing

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Monaleojan
Res.

Intimidate me, once u have unreserved this...😊

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: KaranSG_01
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Let me know when u unres this...😃

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: pooja_shineStar
Beautiful:)

Thank u...😃

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld
Very nice...loved Dev as a father ..would love to see something similar in the future tracks of our serial...that is if they are planning season 2 for the same..please continue...eagerly waiting for the next part.

Thank you hai ji...

Btw, what's your name?

I would really cherish watching if they show Dev and his babies... I am going to be the first one in the line to watch that... Coz no matter what, he's look hell awesome with kids... Wishful thinking...

As my my next part? ah! I don't know if I can continue this...

I am a little commitment phobic, and so I avoid writing multiple parts of a single story... But if something pops up my mind related to this, I will surely write it as a separate OS...

But, I am sure I will continue writing more stories... Another one coming up really soon... I have begun writing it already...

Did you read my other fics on this forum?

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: sa1234B
Soo sweet & cute OS👏 very well written
finally u have updated before go to bed...thanku so much🤗
now i will sleep peacefully after reading this...

Thank you Sugandhita...🤗

Yeah! I was up until 2 am to write this...😆

But glad it provided you a read before bed...😃

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