Devakshi FF:The Memory of Us Epilogue Updated on Pg 70

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rasika_DS

@rasika_DS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Malvika so so beautiful it is👏👏

I am happy that she came to know they are married. So Dev need not start with square one again.

Loved how you portayed her emotions after she knows the truth. Dev Dixit, in love? With me? 😆 Obviously Obhodro falling in love with her was a distant reality for her that time 😆

This line cracked me up "You think I'm going to demand sex from you the minute you arrive"🤣🤣

Ishwari is such a selfish woman here toobut atleast she realized she is thinking wrong.

Excited to know about the story that happened one year ago.

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Omg sona can't resist dev although she has forgotten the 3 most important years of their lives 😳 it would be fun to watch sona getting attracted to dev n then feeling embarrassed about her craze for him
And being married for 3 yrs dev will definitely have a different level of comfort wid her ...which she has no idea about
Pls update ur next part soon...Malvika ur style of writing is definitely very unique from others so keep it up 👏

Edited by sinalfan1 - 8 years ago

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ARCH21

@ARCH21

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Malvika07

Thank you!!😃Glad you noticed that! I was worried no one noticed that there's a suspense😆
Again, thank u so much for your kind words!😊

😃 my weakness is a good story... Love story with a nice back story would be doubly interesting ...

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: rasika_DS
Malvika so so beautiful it is👏👏
I am happy that she came to know they are married. So Dev need not start with square one again.

Loved how you portayed her emotions after she knows the truth. Dev Dixit, in love? With me? 😆 Obviously Obhodro falling in love with her was a distant reality for her that time 😆

This line cracked me up "You think I'm going to demand sex from you the minute you arrive"🤣🤣

Ishwari is such a selfish woman here toobut atleast she realized she is thinking wrong.

Excited to know about the story that happened one year ago.

Thank u so much rasika😃 glad you're liking the way the story is shaping up. I'm gonna try my hardest to redeem Ishwari's character in my story, while staying true to her possessive personality. Hopefully you'll like it😊

Thanks again for the continued support😳

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: sinalfan1
Omg sona can't resist dev although she has forgotten the 3 most important years of their lives 😳 it would be fun to watch sona getting attracted to dev n then feeling embarrassed about her craze for him
And being married for 3 yrs dev will definitely have a different level of comfort wid her ...which she has no idea about
Pls update ur next part soon...Malvika ur style of writing is definitely very unique from others so keep it up 👏

Thank you so much dear😃 yes you're right, it's fun to write sona being embarrassed in front of Dev, and he enjoys every bit of it😆

Thank you again for your sweet words😳

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: ARCH21

😃 my weakness is a good story... Love story with a nice back story would be doubly interesting ...

Hahaa.. mine too! Hopefully I'll be able to do justice to the back story :)

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saumiee

@saumiee

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#77

Read parts two and three together😳

Brilliance is the word for you, dear🤗

I just love how there is an element of uncertainty/a little suspense, in all the parts!

What exactly happened one year ago is for us to see😳

So many good things happening with this story. .

First, Dev Sonakshi re-living the beautiful three years of their of lives again. . Sonakshi is already attracted to him😆

And second, Mami living outside IN

And the best part. .

You took the story to the most beautiful part of the show. . The accident sequence..

Loved it❤️

Cant wait to read more😳

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: saumiee
Read parts two and three together😳
Brilliance is the word for you, dear🤗
I just love how there is an element of uncertainty/a little suspense, in all the parts!
What exactly happened one year ago is for us to see😳
So many good things happening with this story. .
First, Dev Sonakshi re-living the beautiful three years of their of lives again. . Sonakshi is already attracted to him😆
And second, Mami living outside IN
And the best part. .
You took the story to the most beautiful part of the show. . The accident sequence..
Loved it❤️
Cant wait to read more😳

Awww you always write the sweetest replies😃 thank u soo much dear. I'm happy to know it's stricking a cord with you.

The story will have some flashbacks as Sonakshi starts recollecting some memories, some nice and some not so nice! That's the only way I'll be able to uncover the suspense and do justice to the behaviour of the characters. I hope you like it :)

Thank u once again for always supporting me😳