Devakshi FF:The Memory of Us Epilogue Updated on Pg 70

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Shaun

@Jade0001

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Posted: 9 years ago

#261

Part 2

So the thug had beaten Sonakshi and Bunty and his wife found her , letting Dev know his wife is in hospital.

Dev obviously trying to be strong putting up this image she will be all fine only to find out that she has lost her memory , now Dev no longer a husband but an acquaintance, surely this will be very difficult for him

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Shaun

@Jade0001

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Posted: 9 years ago

#262

As soon as I get a small break will read from parts 3

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Aishu Grover

@awesomecouples

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Posted: 9 years ago

#263

Loved the post it scene! The vows are brilliant...

I love the way you write, its all seems like its actually happening in front of me, and its brilliant how you are writing this keeping in mind their on screen characters coz most of the ff's i've read they have chanced their characters to quite an extent to fit the story!

do continue soon...

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: rasika_DS
Getting more and more intriguing as the story progresses.
I am both curious/anxious to know what happened in the past that Dev was so apprehensive about and they had major fights also.

The post-it flashback was beautiful. Their wedding vows were so overwhelming. So one of the vow(unusual) actually got fulfilled. If she forgets him he will remind her everyday.😳

It was a lovely read😊

Thank u soo much rasika😃 I'm glad you liked it!!

The incident is gonna be revealed real soon now. I've tortoured everyone enough😆 but before that I do have a treat pending😉

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: ARCH21
When all is said and done, what remains is love!
What matters is love!
And the only thing forever is ... Love!
The past can be overcome
The future can be faced.
The present is our choice.
If the one memory is love!

This is my 2 cent comment at this beautiful update...

And I also love the fact that Sonskshi is putting into practice what she once said, 'Complete not compete' 😊

Another update where everything is simple, subtle and fluid...

Waiting for the big reveal but am thoroughly enjoying the build up 😊

Oh my!! How beautifully you've summarized everything. Thank u so much for this, arch!! As you once said, everything else will sort itself out if you just remember one thing, that you 'love' this person😊

I'm glad you liked the update! You won't have to wait much longer for the reveal😃

Thanks once again for taking the time to read and review :)

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: rasika_DS

Are why will I be disturbed? I just wait for your updates😊

Awww that's so sweet. Sure, I will PM you from now onwards😊

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: Jade0001
Part 2

So the thug had beaten Sonakshi and Bunty and his wife found her , letting Dev know his wife is in hospital.
Dev obviously trying to be strong putting up this image she will be all fine only to find out that she has lost her memory , now Dev no longer a husband but an acquaintance, surely this will be very difficult for him

Thank you so much! I'm glad you're liking it😊

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: Jade0001
As soon as I get a small break will read from parts 3

Sure dear, read it whenever you're free😊

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: Malvika07

Thank you so much, suvi!!😃 ( can I call you suvi?)
As far as putting him out of his misery in at least one department is concerned, I think you're gonna like the next part😉😉

Would love it if call me Suvi. 🤗

Next part -

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: awesomecouples
Loved the post it scene! The vows are brilliant...
I love the way you write, its all seems like its actually happening in front of me, and its brilliant how you are writing this keeping in mind their on screen characters coz most of the ff's i've read they have chanced their characters to quite an extent to fit the story!
do continue soon...

Thank you so much dear😃 I'm glad you're liking the story. I'm trying my best to do justice to the characters. Happy to know you're liking that :)