Devkashi TS : The promise of a new day(Part 2 updated on Pg 6) - Page 9

Originally posted by: sinalfan1

Lovely story dear 👏 please do right more such stuff

Originally posted by: rasika_DS

Ohh yes this was the first story I read of yours😳 and I was the 1st one to comment😆

Originally posted by: Agrata23

amazing write up dear👏..the first part was filled with so much pain and second part was filled with devakshi eternal love👏thank u so much dear😃

Originally posted by: aaliah3108

How beautifully written Malvika dear !!

The complexity interwoven with their undying love for each other which takes them to each other as they seek solace in just holding each other.

I have a belief that even when Dev Sona shall be separated they shall be together ... physical distance is a very miniscule thing when it comes to matters of the heart !! its a petty thing in front of true love which will live, will grow, will intensify without the other person;s presence but shall refuse to die . It shall give u tears and lots of pain and heartache but it shall still refuse to die !

Very well written dear , I loved it a lot.

Originally posted by: EJF_FAN

I had a tough day today... But this piece here has me all smiles! Loving the emotions and the way you put it forward!
Thank you once again for making my day!
Wishing you all the happiness and success for future works!
Waiting for more from you!
Hugs! XOXO

Originally posted by: Buzzinnn...

Malavikaaa...loved loved loved the second part as well... 😳 you've have written it so beautifully 👏 I can't wait for Dev & Sona to separate now (can't believe am saying this) & I want to see THIS in the exact same way...the way they yearn for each other, the way that they're inseparable & the way that they are destined to be together ❤️

Also, do you have a list of all the SS & OS that you've written so far?? I want to read them!! I dunno how I missed reading them 😕...And shoot me a message when the next OS is out..😉 More power to you gurl!! 🤗