Devkashi TS : The promise of a new day(Part 2 updated on Pg 6)

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Suvika.
The previous part was all Sona. And this one is all Dev. At least that's what I felt. Both of them struggling to find a middle ground. Love is never an issue. Falling in love is one of the easiest thing to happen. But staying in love... trusting that love... now that takes time and effort from both. You have shown that.

Loved it.

Thank u so much, my talented friend🤗

Yes, I meant to write it that way, first we see what the separation does to Sona, and then how it affects Dev :)

I have always felt there was something special about their love story, can't stop myslef from writing about them. Thank u so much for your continued support😃

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rasika_DS

@rasika_DS

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

My brain just got numb after reading the 1st part. Seriously you are so good with the angsty ones but how can you manage writing this? It is so emotionally draining 😭

Will read the 2nd part now.

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richa

@rcha_bhrt

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

You did it again. Superb part👏

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: rasika_DS
My brain just got numb after reading the 1st part. Seriously you are so good with the angsty ones but how can you manage writing this? It is so emotionally draining 😭
Will read the 2nd part now.

Awww come here🤗 The second part will make you feel better , I promise 😊

You're right, it gets tough. I have been working on this one the entire past week. Let me know if you like the second part 😳 Thanks again😃

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: rcha_bhrt
You did it again. Superb part👏

Thank you so much dear😃🤗

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saumiee

@saumiee

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Hey bhagwan🤗

How do you manage to be so good every single time!👏

It was so so emotional yet such a feel-good experience reading this one❤️

Brilliant⭐️

I am so glad you didn't focus on Ishwari here, the angst between Devakshi ought to be resolved without any interference.

I will be looking forward to reading more of your stories.

P.S You know, this feel is exactly what the Friday's episode should have had. Devakshi's happiness and emotions to be with each other (after all the fighting specially). . Now that Ishwari has approved. But, they ended up emphasizing on the wrong bits.

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: saumiee
Hey bhagwan🤗
How do you manage to be so good every single time!👏
It was so so emotional yet such a feel-good experience reading this one❤️
Brilliant⭐️
I am so glad you didn't focus on Ishwari here, the angst between Devakshi ought to be resolved without any interference.
I will be looking forward to reading more of your stories.

P.S You know, this feel is exactly what the Friday's episode should have had. Devakshi's happiness and emotions to be with each other (after all the fighting specially). . Now that Ishwari has approved. But, they ended up emphasizing on the wrong bits.

Yayy, you're here 🤗 Thank u once again for your amazing words!!

I'm so happy to know you liked it!

So true about the friday episode, whenever I feel the episode lacked something, I try making up for it by writing something myself😆

Another great point you made is 'Devakshi need to sort out their angst without any Ishwari interference. I wish they keep this in mind while dealing with the separation track on the show!

Thank you for always encouraging and supporting me❤️

Edited by Malvika07 - 9 years ago

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gmgi

@gmgi

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Loved it so much. Their love completes them. When you love someone that deeply, you end up hurting yourself each time other one is hurt. You will do anything to remove the hurt or it will be eating at you. Their love is strong enough to overcome anything that is thrown at them. This is the picture I got when I read your TS. Even with a happy ending my heart is still feeling so heavy. You are an amazing writer. You bring out their emotions so well that no one can escape from feeling what they themselves feel. I am still reeling from their pain.💔

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: gmgi
Loved it so much. Their love completes them. When you love someone that deeply, you end up hurting yourself each time other one is hurt. You will do anything to remove the hurt or it will be eating at you. Their love is strong enough to overcome anything that is thrown at them. This is the picture I got when I read your TS. Even with a happy ending my heart is still feeling so heavy. You are an amazing writer. You bring out their emotions so well that no one can escape from feeling what they themselves feel. I am still reeling from their pain.💔

Awww🤗 Don't be sad dear, Our Devakshi will get their happy ending.. I am sure about it.. Theirs is a great love story, and every great love story has to go through some tough times. Im very thankful to know the emotions I tried expressing have resonated with you. Thank u so much for your kind words and appreciation😳