Devkashi TS : The promise of a new day(Part 2 updated on Pg 6)

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld
Amazing ...loved it !! loved it !! Loved it !!⭐️ ...So beautifully written. Thanks for such a wonderful TS !! Enjoyed reading it!!

Thank u so much dear🤗 Glad to know you enjoyed reading it😃

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fanktlk

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

This is so beautiful...You know.. They say there is a right time for everything. Sometimes you just fall in love with the right person but at the wrong time.

The separation has given them all a perspective. Dev how much he values Sona, Sona how much she misses Dev and Ishwari... just realizes... that she is doing and grows up.

Beautiful!!👏

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: LiveLife321

U r most welcome dear🤗 and keep giving us more pearls like these.

I'll try my best😊😳

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: SAPU
Loved it

Thank you dear😃

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: fanktlk
This si so beautiful...You know.. They say there is a right time for everything. Sometimes you just fall in love with the right person but at the wrong time.
The separation have given them all a perspective. Dev how much he values Sona, Siona how much she misses Dev and Ishwari... just realizes... that she is doing and grows up.

Beautiful!!👏

Thank you so much🤗

The things we do for love! I think the separation track has the most potential to take the story to new heights.. all the 3 characters are so strong, KRPKAB could turn turn out to be a classic if handled properly!

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Dr Neelima Menon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Wowww so lovely update :) u write so well so emotional I luved it

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: neelima_menon
Wowww so lovely update :) u write so well so emotional I luved it

Thank you dear🤗 Glad you liked it!

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Gayatri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Lovely story dear 👏 please do right more such stuff

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rasika_DS

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Malvika07

Here you go, http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4673438
I think you've read it, as I remember reading your comment on it😳

Ohh yes this was the first story I read of yours😳 and I was the 1st one to comment😆