Devkashi TS : The promise of a new day(Part 2 updated on Pg 6) - Page 4

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Sona's thoughts and feelings are tangible in this write up. Perfect continuation of your previous OS.

Separation, I feel, is much needed in this context. Painful, heartrending. I know. But needed. My reasons:

1. Sona needs to find her feet. Get her professional and part of her personal life back. Love is all well and good but the rest of her life shouldn't / wouldn't come to a standstill - be it love or heartbreak.

2. Dev needs to know what he wants. And how much he wants it. He needs a reality check of his life without his love in it. He has to fight for his Sona - not for Sona but for himself too.

3. Ishwari needs to see what her resistance is doing to her son. She might be possessive and obsessive about Dev but she is not a bad mother. She wants her son to be happy at the end of the day. And her reluctance is digging holes in that son's heart. She should see and realize that.

All these, of course, are just my thoughts. Waiting for the second part. To see where you take these three in their journey.

Originally posted by: Divi.C

Nice.. I didn't understand wethr ishwari agreed or not?? I think need part asap.

Originally posted by: Malvika07

Hey suvika, was waiting for your comment😊

So aptly stated, all the 3 characters need to grow individually before merging, but I would have to write a novel to do justice to all the 3 character arcs😆

In this TS specifically, I've tried to shed some light on how things might be after the break up.. Sonakshi might not always be the strong unwavering support in Dev's life, she would have weak moments of her own, where she loses her sense of direction, and how Dev gets her back. I'm not really gonna go that much into detail about how Ishwari actually accepts their relationship. But this is an attempt to show that Dev is taking a step in the right direction.

Hope you like the next part :) Forgive me if I couldn't live up to your expectations, I genuinely tried my best😊

Thank u so much for the continued support dear!

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Whoa lady... what is this living up to expectations?? You have the ability to weave the story and blend the characters into the story seamlessly without dragging the scene out endlessly. Trust me. I don't say those words lightly. Be it your naughty lollipop write up or the romantic elevator or this one filled with angst and pain, you have brought them all out wonderfully. You haven't let me down even the slightest.

I don't know what career path you have chosen in your life, but you have the talent to write. Please don't stop or quit that. Even if you can make it a hobby, it would be really good. Just a suggestion of course.

Originally posted by: _RS_

Very nice part..

Waiting for the second one

Originally posted by: Malvika07

Oh My!! This means so much, specially coming from you, I have read your posts, specifically the one where you described all of Dev's expressions.. It was mind blowing! So to get this kind of response from you makes me super happy

Thank you soo much 🤗

The wonderful comments and encouragement inspires me to write more. I have a finance background, but writing keeps my soul happy :) Thank u for appreciating 😳

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Oh you read that one! Yes, I remember responding to your comments there. 😃

Even I didn't know I could write until I joined IF a few years back. The forum has been the platform on which I honed my skills, you could say. Right now I am smack bang in the middle of writing my new book and let myself be pulled into the forum once again. Hope I don't forget my plot in my DevAkshi haze 🤔 😆

Originally posted by: Malvika07

Oh My God!!! I want to read it!! Pls pls pls let me know whenever it comes out . I started writing recently, It gives me the kind of happiness I've never known before, calms me down after a long day!

I knew you were supremely talented when I read that post, but a book? That's BIG. Wish you all the success with it 😳🤗

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Thank you so much for your wishes. Sure. I will let you know the minute it comes out. But it's not my first book. It's my 9th.😳 The books are on Kindle if you want to have a look. Just type Suvika in Amazon search. Read the story outline and you can pick the one that grabs your interest. 😃