Devkashi TS : The promise of a new day(Part 2 updated on Pg 6)

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independent

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Amazing os 👏

Loved it ❤️

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Erian

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

So beautifully written. I truly felt the pain of both. Thanks for this wonderful piece. Keep writing.

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WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Liked it so much...please continue..eagerly waiting for the next part 👏⭐️

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Curlyhairdiary

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Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Buzzinnn...
This is lovely Malavika! Love how inseparable they are.. He goes after her to Kolkata...that's the best part.. 😳

Waiting for the second part... 😳 this is written so well 👏

Thank u soo much dear😊 I'm glad to know you're liking it! Will post the second part today😃

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: sinalfan1
Pls continue soon

Thank you😊 second part will be up today!

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Suvika.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Sona's thoughts and feelings are tangible in this write up. Perfect continuation of your previous OS.

Separation, I feel, is much needed in this context. Painful, heartrending. I know. But needed. My reasons:

1. Sona needs to find her feet. Get her professional and part of her personal life back. Love is all well and good but the rest of her life shouldn't / wouldn't come to a standstill - be it love or heartbreak.

2. Dev needs to know what he wants. And how much he wants it. He needs a reality check of his life without his love in it. He has to fight for his Sona - not for Sona but for himself too.

3. Ishwari needs to see what her resistance is doing to her son. She might be possessive and obsessive about Dev but she is not a bad mother. She wants her son to be happy at the end of the day. And her reluctance is digging holes in that son's heart. She should see and realize that.

All these, of course, are just my thoughts. Waiting for the second part. To see where you take these three in their journey.