Devakshi os- helpless dev jealous sona updated (part-3 on page 10)

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Hey everyone.
Some of you might know me.
These days I only think about devakshi, a on-screen couple I fell in love with.

Sometimes I think about their scenes which we all have seen and sometimes which I wanna see. For the first time I have penned down a thought.

I am not a writer at all but just a die-hard stupid fan of devakshi
So here is the story. I hope you will read and enjoy it. Give me your honest response.


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Nikki's birthday was coming and she wanted a big party for her friends but was little scared to ask dev.she knew her Bhai is changed now but still she needed a medium to convey her message to dev and just then she saw sona entering from front gate. She knew that she got the right person. off course who can be better choice than her Bhabhi when it comes to her Bhai.

Soon they were in dev's room and sona told him everything. Dev smiled and agreed but at one condition that party will be at dixit mansion only.Nikki agreed and excitedly hugged him.

Thanku thanku thanku bhaiya you are the best and I love you.

Acha to ab mai best ho gaya aur abhi jab tujhe mujhse bat karni thi to tu directly kyu nahi ayi mere pas tab to tujhe sonakshi ko sath lana para.

Ha kyuki sirf sona Di... I mean sona bhabhi hi to apko samjha sakti hai aur apse Kuch bhi manva Sakti hai isliye unko leke ayi, waise bhi mujhe to dar lagta hai apse aisi bate puchne me.

Dev felt bad for a moment but shrugged it off.

waise bhi apko batau ya Bhabhi ko ek hi to bat hai.
Btw thanku Bhabhi I love you

And she hugged sona tight again gave a hug to dev and left saying mai sabko bata ke ati hu

Dev and sona were so happy and smiling to see nikki's excitement.

Sona turned to dev and said
Nikki mujhe bhi nahi bata rahi thi par jab Maine usse kaha ki ab mai aur aap ek hai to usne mujhe bataya.

Dev smiled at her

Apko mujhe acha feel karane ke liye ye sab bolne ki jarurat nahi hai, mujhe bilkul bura nahi lagta ki meri behne apse jyada close hai balki I feel proud. I feel releived because now they can share anything with you and by default it will come to me. That's how its gonna work.

hmm very smart Mr. Obhodro sari jimmedariya mere kandho pe dal Di apne aur agar mai ye sab karugi to aap kya karege?

Mai? Mai to sabse important kam karuga

Acha!! Kya?

Dev held her waist and said apse pyar

Sona smiled and dev took her in his embrace.
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Soon everyone got busy with preparations but sona was the busiest because Nikki wanted her approval for everything dress, cake, food, decorations, games everything. She already told everyone that she trusts only her sona bhabhi' choice. Dev was noticing how sona was everywhere in every decision and how she was helping Nikki & riya like her own sister, along with that she takes care of everything about his mother actually their mother. He was proud of his choice and thanked his stars nth time for sending her into his life.

He was so happy that his family accepted her whole heartily but now the new problem for dev dixit was that he doesn't get time to spend with his khargosh.he was desperate to spend some alone time with her.

light flashed on Sona's phone , it was a message of dev

want to tell you how much I am missing you but in my own way so come to my room ASAP .

Sona blushed at the mere thought of what is gonna be his way.

she was trying hard to meet him but was not able to and finally she got time and went to his room, as soon as she entered she felt a pull on her waist and door was locked behind her now she was between dev and door

Itni Busy khargosh?

Sorry but kya karti sabko jarurat thi meri to..

Jarurat to mujhe bhi hai tumhari he said in his husky voice

Sona looked at him, his eyes were filled with desire and were showing passion which he has for her

He came closer and kissed her on cheek and started giving wet kisses on her jawline sona moaned his name dev and cluched his shirt tight with one hand while her other hand was playing with his hair,it was a new feeling for both of them and dev was happy that sona also was enjoying this.he slowly moved to her lips and traced with his finger first ,her clutch on his shirt got tightened , he lifted her chin with his hands sona's eyes were still close he came closer and said
'ankhe to kholo' she shook her head negatively while breathing heavily.
But I want to see something in your eyes first ,she understood what he wanted to see in her eyes so she looked at him .her eyes were showing the same desire for him,he was about to ask something when sona placed her finger on his lips to stop him and said
' I am already yours so no need to ask' dev smiled as without saying a word she understood him. Dev came closer to her lips their eyes were closed and they were about to feel their first kiss and a voice disturbed their moment

Sona Bhabhi... sona Bhabhi... where are you? Nikki was screaming her lungs out

Sona pushed dev, composed herself and turned to go but dev held her hand with a desperate look on his face. By the time Nikki came and started knocking

Bhabhi aap yaha ho kya?

Ha a rahi hu baby

And what about this baby ??dev said with a pout and pointing towards himself

Sona smiled and kissed on his cheek 'this baby can wait' .
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that's all for now
So how was it tell me through your comments.

If I will get good response then I will post next part which I have already written.

Love
Richa
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sa1234B thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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simple, sweet & lovely OS...
plz continue and update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nice

i loved when nikki was saying sona di... buut stopped and again said that sona bhabhi !!!

Really very nice continue soon !!

This baby cant wait to read the next part😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good start dear.. .
Hope u will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful OS... Loved it Richa...🤗

And here Nikki is the culprit...😆

We fans have become more like show's creatives now, even in our write-ups DevAkshi cannot romance without interruption.😆

Do keep writing.. You write really well.👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was too good!!
Cant wait to read ext part
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good effort , nicely written and it's beautiful , keep it up!!!
I enjoyed reading and imagined it like I am watching the serial.
U can continue the next part ...
great that this serial gave birth to many creative writers...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a cute OS...post d nxt part soon...
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Originally posted by: sa1234B

simple, sweet & lovely OS...

plz continue and update soon

Thanku so much
Ya I will continue soon😊
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Thanku so much😊

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