Devakshi os- helpless dev jealous sona updated (part-3 on page 10) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Monaleojan

Next part dedo..dedo...amezing..


Thanku mona darling😊
I will post next part soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CrazyGirlRashi

Next part dedo please
Read your os as soon as I opened the forum
It's amazing


Thanku so much😊
I will post next part tomorrow pakka
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rasika_DS

Aww this was very cute and lovely. 😳


Thanku so much😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: JyotiBThakur

Beautiful OS... Loved it Richa...🤗


And here Nikki is the culprit...😆

We fans have become more like show's creatives now, even in our write-ups DevAkshi cannot romance without interruption.😆

Do keep writing.. You write really well.👏



Today after our high hopes...just waiting to read some romantic OS on DEVAKSHI or update on few on going FF

This was really cute but again DEVAKSHI ROMANCE was interrupted in OS also...please continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanku 😊
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Originally posted by: surbharati



Today after our high hopes...just waiting to read some romantic OS on DEVAKSHI or update on few on going FF

This was really cute but again DEVAKSHI ROMANCE was interrupted in OS also...please continue


Thanku😊
I know but as my story's title suggests there will be more interruptions to show dev's helplessness and desperation.

I will continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey friends
Thanku thanku so much for your response 😊 really it means a lot

Hugs to all who commented and liked🤗

After getting positive response now I am more nervous to post next part because I don't know it will be as per your expectations or not.

As I promised the next part is here

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Part-2

And what about this baby dev said with a pout
Sona smiled and kissed on his cheek 'this baby can wait'

He wanted to grab her but she was gone. He was sulking like a kid yar ye meri family ke chakkar me mujhe meri sona ke sath 2 min nahi milte abhi ye hal hai shadi ke bad kya hoga. I need her.

Both wanted same and were trying hard but they were not getting any alone time.

Kichu bhaiya told sona that dev refused to have dinner. A worried sona went to check on him.
Sona came to his room asking dev apne dinner kyun nahi kiya?

Ha bas nahi kiya aur apko kaise pata?

Kichu bhaiya ne bataya mujhe. Apki tabiyat to thik hai Na?

Ha bilkul thik hu mai

To kya hua? Why are you sulking?

wo actually mujhe wo khana nahi khana.

To kya khana hai apko batao mai kichu bhaiya se kehti hu banane ko

Samjho Na mujhe wo chahiye Jo sirf tum mujhe de Sakti ho

Dev par mujhe to khana banana ata hi nahi

dev hold her hand sona ' mai nahi tumi boka tumi'

Haen mai kyun? what do you wanna eat?

You! I wanna eat you he said and bit her earlobe

dev! only his name she managed to say. she was blushing hard

kya dev dev ? don't you know that you are my favorite desert but till now I didn't even got a chance to taste it. he said with a wink and held her tight

Kitne shaitan ho gaye ho aap

ha to tumhare sath to shaitani karne ka hak hai mera

and a voice came dev beta tune khana kyun nahi khaya?

Oh god !! Not again!!!! dev said in a frustrating tone

dev maa aa rahi hai choro mujhe

ha to mai maa ko keh duga ki I am having my favorite desert

Acha besharam choro mujhe

No today I will not

ishwari came and dev left sona in a hurry and stood there in an attention pose which made sona laugh but she suppressed her laugh somehow

Sona mujhe laga tum chali gayi beta

Maa mai bhi khane ka hi puchne ayi thi dev se par dev ko Kuch special khana hai

Acha ha to bata mujhe kya khana hai beta ?bol Na

Nahi maa Kuch nahi ye to aise hi bol rahi hai

Sona went to iswari' side and said ha batao na dev apko kya khana hai with an amused face. She was facing ishwari's back so ishwari couldn't see her and dev glared at her.

ye nahi bolega chal tu hi bata de ki dev ko kya khana hai. isne tujhe to bataya hoga

Now it was dev's turn so he said ha sona batao na maa ko

sona glared at him ab mai kya batau maa ye to aap maa bte ke bich ki bat hai aur mai bich me nahi Ana chahti so aap hi dekh lo, mai chalti hu.

Acha chal thik hai tu akele mat Jana driver chhor ayega tujhe

Ok maa

Dev found a opportunity to be alone with sona so he immediately said
Are driver kyun mai chhor ata hu chalo sona

Are nahi dev mai chali jaugi aur waise bhi apko to bhook lagi hai na to aap rehne do. bye dev don't worry maa apko acha khana khilayegi

ishwari was confused but she said dev bata Na kya khana hai mai jaldi se bana dugi rat ho rahi hai beta

Nahi maa rehne de Jo bana hai mai wahi kha luga. ( waise bhi mera desert to hai hi nahi ab yaha to kya farak parta hai)

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sona and riya were discussing something related to party, dev came and gestured sona to come in his room but sona refused.riya went to her room for some work and dev came near sona.

Mere room me aao mujhe bat karni hai

Mujhe pata hai apko kya bat karni hai dev abhi nahi mai bahut busy hu

Ha wo to mai dekh hi raha hu sabke liye time hai tumhare pas mere alawa jabki I want you only for me.

Sona smiled at his cuteness OK I am sorry but I promise I will makeup for it

A smile came on dev's face and he excitedly asked really?? kab?? kaha?? kaise??

Have Patience Mr. Obhodro

Wahi to nahi hai Patience

Sona came forward put her hands around his neck and kissed on his nose and rubbed with hers

You are so cute dev and I love you for that

I love you too but I want a real one with a wink

Suddenly ria came and they left each other
Dev thought to tease her so started humming a song

kiss ka hai mujhko intejar aao na
Mano meri bat ek bar aao na
Khamosh kyun ho Jo bhi kehna hai kaho
Dil chahe jitna Pyar utna mang lo
Tumko milega utna Pyar mai hu Na

Sona became shocked 1st thing that dev was singing and 2nd he was flirting openly in front of riya. She gave a angry look to him and gestured him to stop but he was enjoying it and again started singing but this time with in little higher volume. He moved to sona's side and ran his hand on her waist to tease her more. sona saw him in disbelief

kiss ka hai mujhko intejar aao na

Riya was busy so she didn't noticed first but suddenly she realised it and burst out laughing and turned to dev
both sona and dev asked in unison kya hua?

bhaiya you are so funny

Me funny? what did I do?

Ye gana aise nahi hai jaise aap ga rahe ho

Acha to kaise hai

kiska hai ye tumko intejar mai hu Na, dekh lo idhar to ek bar mai hu Na
Aise hai

acha aise hai par koi bat nahi mujhe to apna version hi pasand hai he said looking at sona

Kiss ka hai mujhko intejar aao na, sun lo meri bat 1 bar aao na

sona was red because of his open flirt and dev was enjoying it
riya again started laughing

ye gana wana apke bas ki bat nahi bhaiya rehne do,chalo sona bhabhi ham chale

ha to tu ja Na sonakshi ko kaha leke ja rahi hai?

are to kya Bhabhi ko apka ye ajeeb sa gana sunne ke liye rehne du yaha, bhaiya agar aap is tarah se gate rahe na to sona bhabhi hamari bhabhi kabhi ban hi nahi payegi.chalo Bhabhi and she held sona's hand

dev made a puppy face while seeing sona going with riya and sona mimicked a sorry to him while going.
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That's all for now 😉
Precap:- family teasing session

So how was it? Tell me through your comments😊

Love
Richa


Edited by rcha_bhrt - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Lovely update.. .
Continue next part sooy
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
It was wonderful!!!
Hehehehe...the song🤣🤣
Please update soon!!

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