Devakshi os- helpless dev jealous sona updated (part-3 on page 10)

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rasika_DS

@rasika_DS

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Aww this was very cute and lovely. 😳

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richa

@rcha_bhrt

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: sowiee
very nice

i loved when nikki was saying sona di... buut stopped and again said that sona bhabhi !!!

Really very nice continue soon !!

This baby cant wait to read the next part😆

Thanku so much

Glad you liked it😊

I want to hear nikki calling bhabhi on the show also

I will update soon

Don't worry I will not let this baby wait.😉

Edited by rcha_bhrt - 9 years ago

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richa

@rcha_bhrt

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: gdfss
Good start dear.. .
Hope u will continue soon

Thanku so much😊

I will update soon

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richa

@rcha_bhrt

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: JyotiBThakur
Beautiful OS... Loved it Richa...🤗

And here Nikki is the culprit...😆

We fans have become more like show's creatives now, even in our write-ups DevAkshi cannot romance without interruption.😆

Do keep writing.. You write really well.👏

Awww thats so sweet jyoti Di

Thanku so much

I am glad you liked it.

Hehehe actually with interruptions we enjoy their scenes more because they spice up things.😉

I will update soon.

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richa

@rcha_bhrt

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: independent
Choo cute os ❤️

Thanku so much aru 😊

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CrazyGirlRashi

@CrazyGirlRashi

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Next part dedo please
Read your os as soon as I opened the forum
It's amazing

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richa

@rcha_bhrt

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.
It was too good!!
Cant wait to read ext part
Cont soon

Thanku so much Adi

It feels really nice to see your comment because you are one of the my favorite writers on this forum.

I will update soon😊

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richa

@rcha_bhrt

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: srikalaganesh
Good effort , nicely written and it's beautiful , keep it up!!!
I enjoyed reading and imagined it like I am watching the serial.
U can continue the next part ...
great that this serial gave birth to many creative writers...

thanku so much 😊 really if means a lot

You are calling me a writer that is a big compliment for me.

I will continue soon