DevAshki OS~ Lobster - Page 2

I will reply to the rest of the comments tomorrow, mainly because it's sleep time🥱

It's amazing and u have written sooo well👍🏼 I love this genre... and please if possible do pm me when u write next OS as I love ur writing style

Beautifully written 😊 👏

Lovely work..

Originally posted by: ammu3

D'awww yaar Pari !!

I am .. am .. am speechless. Period.

You can write on trains - tough mein train par chadke yaar dealing - hum yahoo hostel mein baitke, padhayi karate hue, such rate ke gala kya like, tu wahan train par baithkar itna accha like nahi hai ?!!

But - I bow down to you yaar !!

Especially that part where you talk about how they couldn't even bear the thought of another one - and the irony of the way you portrayed a least expected person according to them to come between them .

Love u BAE :*

P.S: I love the lobster reference. Pakka geek u are !🤗🤪

P.P.S : Did I mention that I love angst and that I am currently having choco chip cupcakes from cupcake noggins ?😆😉

BAE! Many many thankies! You are too kind did you know that! TOOO KIND! My brain only works on trains it seems, I revise on trains, eat on trains, write on trains, sleep in trains too! It's all a testimony to my character 🤪

Sometimes when I am reading comments I always wonder how amazing and generous some people are! Thank You but you need to not bow down to Ms Writer ;)

i love friends! It's the only show I can watch always anytime without getting bored. People send their first pay check on clothes and shoes, I bought myself the entire collection of friends! Get on my geek level 🤪

Originally posted by: randommusings

Fault inour stars😭

Such a beautifully written piece. I too love reading emotional stuff filled with angst and unrequited love. One of my fav hindi movie is Aandhi😭

I feel it wud so much more difficult for Sona as she has to meet her own family's expectations as well regd her life and marriage. One can feel so sorry for Dev, he just learned to be himself, to be happy, to feel loved, to be cared and he has to leave his love and dreams aside for his maa.

Fault in our stars was such a beautiful read! Truly some stories are just a little more profound and hard hitting than others! A lot like me before you! That was a brilliant read as well! I have not watched that movie but I shall download it right after this!

@Bold- I have never looked at it from that perspective but that actually makes a lot more sense! Additionally Indian societies tend to be crueller to women anyways :( Though I think it still might be harder on Dev, as he never had anyone to share his inner most feelings with, then he finds some one who wants to willingly share her life with his and then looses her to fate. Paa ke bhi, nah panna sort of feels. Though this is just an estimation, can't measure hurt can we?

I wrote all that, but didn't even thank you once for your stimulating review! THANK YOU SO MUCH 🤗 I always look forward to such reviews on whatever I write, they put an idiotic little smile on my face 🤪

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Awesome

Many Thankies ❤️

Originally posted by: rana.mina

It's amazing and u have written sooo well👍🏼I love this genre... and please if possible do pm me when u write next OS as I love ur writing style

Aaaw babe! Thank you so so much for your words of encouragement! It always means a lot to know there are people who want to read your words! So thank you truly! 🤗

Originally posted by: debby_11

a beautiful OS :)

Thank You love ❤️

Originally posted by: MeetPremeer

Beautifully descripted text
Loved it

Thank You so so much sweets! 🤗