DevAkshi One Shot: What's Her Name?

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: sowiee
Its beautifully written !!!!
Mrs. Sonakshi Dixit !!!! wow good to hear

Thank you. 😳

I really can't wait till we get to hear out of Dev's mouth on TV.

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Originally posted by: Iansomer1
u know gur this is first Kcuh rang fanfiction im ever reading even before watching the show and i gotta say im loving this couple more day by day. it was such a simple yet brilliant proposal.

And im surprised tune itna lamba likhna shru kia lol

Kuch rang has drowned u mujhe bhool na jayi is chakar mein😆

in short i loved it
time to start being serious in acquiring that laptop and watching the show. 🤗

Good job Biwi. Ab aisi hi line mein aa kar show dekhna shuru kar de. 😎

RIGHT! Even I'm surprised that all my writings on them are coming out so long. It honestly doesn't even feel that while I'm writing the pieces out. It's only when I publish them that I see how big it has become. 😆

It really has because the show is simply that good! 🤪 Aur tujhe bhula kar mein apni shamat ni laani chahti. 🤣

It really is. If I find that you haven't started watching by tomorrow... phir dekh lena. 😈

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Originally posted by: AnatomyAddict
Beautifully penned Asmani! I love how you incorporate dialogues and feelings together to form a complete OS! Beautiful, amazing, ethereal ❤️

PS- Asmani. As if Asmani rang ho, pyaar boond hooo? Heheh, ignore if I am wrong 🤪

Thank you so much! 🤗

And yes! The asmaani is from the song. <3

Believe it or not, I squeaked a bit as someone actually recognized the username. 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: MiraZee
Aww loved it !

Thank you. 😳

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Originally posted by: sneharay
Awesome.. 😊

Thank you. 😳

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Originally posted by: -AditiS
this is just fantastic 😳 dialogues are same like DevSona would speak n situation bhi probable hai in the show.
loved it too much 👏👏⭐️

Thanks Aditi. 😳

Wow, situations I can see to be the same, but dialogues? That's huge! Thank you so much! 🤗

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