DevAkshi One Shot: What's Her Name?

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Iansomer1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

Good job Biwi. Ab aisi hi line mein aa kar show dekhna shuru kar de. 😎

RIGHT! Even I'm surprised that all my writings on them are coming out so long. It honestly doesn't even feel that while I'm writing the pieces out. It's only when I publish them that I see how big it has become. 😆

It really has because the show is simply that good! 🤪 Aur tujhe bhula kar mein apni shamat ni laani chahti. 🤣

It really is. If I find that you haven't started watching by tomorrow... phir dekh lena. 😈

i was ready to keep biwi thing a secret so forum pe teri izzat ho😆😆
u just started it to im not holding back lol
its nice that ur writings r longer. i love them
good to know tujhe apni shamat se dar lagta hai
i avent started watching the show yet i am following news on it and actors on twitter😆
im going in reverse fan phase.

threaten mat kar acha ill try watching. phelay look at zaw and teddy going they r better than us i defended so good😆😆😆

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riddhima11

@riddhima11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Okay!! Girl your writing skills.. A.M.A.Z.I.N.G.

Gosh you portrayed them in such a beautiful way. and the scene.. Once again.. I really wish something like this happens in the show..

I loved how they were dreaming about their marriage.. as simple as that..

Keep up the good work dear!

Love

Pankhuri

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--Jenelle--

@--Jenelle--

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Wow. Gur you are very talented. They were dreaming of their marriage

Keep writing such beautiful works...

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EJF_FAN

@EJF_FAN

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Wow! This is so good! Very DevAkshi in emotions! :-)

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asmaanixx

@asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Keechu_SwaRon
Hayee hayee hayeee

You will kill me oneday with your os ... and i'm all ready to die in the passion of DevAkshi. 😆

I totally can imagine this os.. it felt soo real.. and his eyes when he put that dupatta over her dead... It could be sooo intense..

And i noticed that you were struck with english.. Thank you for that. 😳

I love you girl. 🤗

Keep writing and keep killing me. 😆

Hehe, thank you! 😳

DevAkshi toh hai hi ek killer couple. Mujhe kuch zyada karne ki zaroorat hi nayi hai. ☺️😆

The dupatta scene is my favorite. It's so soft and gentle but it speaks so much.

You are most welcome! 🤗 I was tempted to switch over to Hindi in between but I remembered in time. 😆

Love you more! 🤗

Tadpa tadpa ke marungi. 😎

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asmaanixx

@asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Buzzinnn...
I read it all over again. This is really really good. You got to share it with them...who knows they might just use it... 😳 i hope they do. Thank god there's not much of melodrama in this show. It's very bang on & practical. In reality life is very simple, but it's us who make it really complicated. And the simplicity that we see in KRPKAB is what happens in our life as well...and i can foresee the plot getting complicated due to each characters nature/behaviour.

Ha ha...sorry from my side as well...rambled too much...This show has a special place in my hear now..Sigh!!

I'm too shy to share, but if any of you would like to, then be my guest. 😳😆

Me too! I love that the only drama queen in this show is Radha Rani. Everyone else are so chill, and laid back.

Bang on about us complicating life. I recently went through a phase where I royally screwed up a relationship because of a stupid mistake that I made when carried away by my emotions. It was horrible. We have gotten back but I feel like it's not the same anymore. :(

I for one am excited but also dreading to see how things get screwed up. It will be so interesting to see what motivates all the characters in the way that they do. 😳

Please don't be sorry! I love discussing this show. It is too precious for words.

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asmaanixx

@asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Iansomer1
i was ready to keep biwi thing a secret so forum pe teri izzat ho😆😆
u just started it to im not holding back lol
its nice that ur writings r longer. i love them
good to know tujhe apni shamat se dar lagta hai
i avent started watching the show yet i am following news on it and actors on twitter😆
im going in reverse fan phase.

threaten mat kar acha ill try watching. phelay look at zaw and teddy going they r better than us i defended so good😆😆😆

Were you now? I really doubt that. 🤣

Agar meri shamat hui toh tumhari bhi barbaadi hogi. Ab tu soch le ke tujhe kya karna hai. 😎

Iss mein naya kya hai? Tu jo bhi karti hai, hamesha ulta hi karti hai. 🤣

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asmaanixx

@asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: andy1245
wow its amazing

Thank you. 😳

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asmaanixx

@asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: riddhima11
Okay!! Girl your writing skills.. A.M.A.Z.I.N.G.
Gosh you portrayed them in such a beautiful way. and the scene.. Once again.. I really wish something like this happens in the show..
I loved how they were dreaming about their marriage.. as simple as that..

Keep up the good work dear!
Love
Pankhuri

Hey Pankhuri! 🤗

Thank you so much! 😃

DevAkshi dreaming together and making those dreams come true together is so precious. <3

I have so many ideas for them and I really hope they become visualized in some form or another. 😳