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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: _RS_
Woah! It was actually rly nice. Pls keep writing like this.

Haha, thank you! 😆

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: _Meena_
Amazing work!

Thank you Meena! 🤗

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Ferdous_69
Wow... It's amazing
So intence,, full of love...
U have done superb job
Thanks a lot for sharing this with us 😊

Thank you so much for your kind words. 😳

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: rukiaa
amazing, perfect, beautiful❤️...enjoyed every bit of this... ☺️

Thank you Rukiaa! 🤗

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: aaliah3108
Quite a one shot you wrote dear! Loved the free conversation between the young couple. It was V engaging.

Thank you Aaliah. 😳

The conversation had sort of sneaked itself in. 😆

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Pilu05
Hey Gurleen love to see u here

This OS was so so so Hot and sizzling

Love it

Hey Pilu!!

It's so great to see you here. 🤗

And thank your dropping your comment. 😳

It feels so good to see some old faces here again. :)

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: KambakthIshq
Jeez Gurleen.. This is breathtaking...uff!!
You are an amazing writer girl👏

Thank you so much Shruti! 🤗😳

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: sneharay
Amazing..

Thank you. 😳

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Keechu_SwaRon
Once again an Amazing OS

I'm loving Dev in your write ups. He is a bliss to read. A complete passionate lover.
He want her so badly but yet he cares about her comfort. It was wonderful experience to read.

Sona is soo cute and innocent. 😳

I love reading conversations in Hindi, cause it is more effective than in English but i sometimes dont get the exact meaning. 🤔
But i loved this. 👏

PS : I love reading long os when it concerns to DevAkshi. ☺️

Keechu.

Thank you so much Keechu! 🤗

Was there anything in particular that you couldn't understand? I generally try to stick with one language only (English) since Hindi really isn't my forte. I mean, I can understand it really well and speak it fine but the spelling of some words don't really come out right. So when I'm trying to edit or re-read what I wrote, I struggle a bit.

But if there is anything in particular that you would like to be clarified, then please do let me know and I'll do that for you.

And for future OSs, I'll try to stick to one language rather than alternate between them so much. :)

P.S. I think everyone is in that boat. 😆😳